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VIRMAN: KISMAT KA KHEL (completed) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh so thats y manvi left the house... Arggg this swaminu... Isse kisiki khushi bardasht ni hoti... She manipulated manvi to leave... Vurat accepting this decision of manvi going away dat easily... Dats a little strange... N now manvi thinks virmaya are married... Ufff...
Awesome updt n thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it
hate this swamini 
felt sad for manvi and virat
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
super update loved it dear   😊
excited fr virman meeting too...
pls do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update... why sb played in virman life.. so sad for manvi... why virat didnt search manvi that is soo sad... manvi believed sb lie... poor manvi... waiting for paras and virat meeting... continu soon... pls write in english
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing story.
i like it...
plzzz update soon and do PM me...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hy guys i am back i do not know how  this story proceed but i will definately unite virman in new way
some one has ask me to write my story in english sorry if i write my story in english then  this tory would lose its charm
PART 4:
AT MUMBAI:
virat's room
maya call virat
maya- virat  please mujhe maaf kar do i love you virat
virat- bas karo  maya mein  tumhee pta hai mein manvi se pyar karta hu
maya- haa lein agar woh tumse pyar karti toh is tarah se chis kar nhi jati tumhe
virat- enough maya mein janta meri manvi ne  yeh kyon kiya hai aur tumhe hamare beech me aane ki zarurat nhi hai
virat put the phone in anger suddenly mansi arrives at  his room
mansi- chachu what are you thinking
virat- nothing more tell me aapka exam kaisa tha
mansi- mast pata hai chachu ghar par sab log aapki shadi ke bare me baat kar rhe hai woh bbhi us khadus aunty se (maya)
(virat got  suprised)
virat- kya?
mansi- haa mene dadi ko mamaa se  baat karte hue suna tha chachu i don't like her she is so irritating aap lease unse shadi mat karna
she ran from his room
virat goes downstair angyily
virat- ye kya hai bua ji aapne meri shadi fix ki bina mujhe bataye
swamini- haa virat kyonki mujhe laga tum maya se pyar karte ho mene tumhe maya ke sath dekha hai and this virat ( she shows everyone viart photo with maya )
everyone was  shocked
virat- ye jhoot hai aisa kuch nhi hai meri zindagi me sirf manvi hai 
swamini- toh wo kya tha jo mene dekha virat 
waise bhi tum apni zindagi me akele ho tumhe ek partner ki zarurat hai
virat(in his mind) - yeh pakka maya ki koi chall hai ab mein batata hu use ki virat kon hai. he make a plan in his mind to bring maya's truth in front of family
virat- thik hai meinn maya se shadi karne to ready ho
everyone is shocked and swamini is happy 
jeevika viren got suprised
jeevika - virenji virat aisa kar sakta woh meri mannu ko cheat nhi kar skta
viren- jeevika tension mat lo virat manvi ke sath aisa kuch nhi karega
suddenly virat  came in virika's room and he told all his plan to them
jeevika- virta mujhe maaf kar do mujhe lga ki tum meri manvi ko cheat kar rhe ho
virat- bahbhi manvi ki place ki nhi le  sakta  mein janta ki abhi wo mere paas nhi hai par phir bhi kismat hame zarur ek kar degi
viren- virat ham tumhare sath hai 
nxt day their was their roka and after that their is engangement and their wedding date was 1 week later
maya- dadaji mein janti hu ki aap sabhi virat aur meri shadi chandigarh me karana chahte hai lekin yeh meri pehli aur last shadi hai to mein aapse kuch lena chathi hu
swamini- ha maya bolo hum apni bahu ki wish zaror puri karege
maya- bua ji mein chachti hu ki  hamari shadi mumbai me ho mein waha ek bahut achee wedding planner ko janti hu
sb- thik hai maya agar tum 
maya- bua ji hum abhi chale jate hai phir family members baad me aa jayege
virat and maya decided to went mumbai virika and mansi  also went with them.
maya call rahul and told him about their plan
AT MUMBAI:
rahul(manvi's boss) - manvi  chandigarh se bahut badi family  apne beat ki wedding meaa rhi hai mein yeh contract tumhe deta hu 
manvi- ok sir
rahul-  and be alert  don't do any mistake
and manvi can you do a favour for me
manvi- yes sir
rahul- manvi woh hotels me room vacant nhi hai wedding ka season chal rha hai toh kya tum dono unlogo ko aone gar me room de sakte ho
aditi- of course sir.
they went to their home
aditi- manvi ab hamare paas bahut sara kaam hai
manvi- haa aditi 
suddenly paras and priya came to them
paras- mamaa please aaj haem mall le chalo
priya- haa masi chalo na
manvi- ok chalo but no badmasi haa yad he na aap logo ne pehle kya kiya tha
paras and priya- pakka promise we behave like a good children
manvi smiles and kisses both of them
paras rubbed his hand on his cheek 
SCENE SHIFTS:
virika and virmaya reaches mumbai. maya call to rahul 
suddenly mansi 
mansi- mamaa mall chalo na please
 jeevika- haa aaj aapko mamma ke sat h jana hai aap ko kehte ho ki mamaa bahut time waste karti hai shopping me
viren- wo to hai jeevika 
jeevika- virenji aap bhi  na
mansi- are manmma mein ko aise hi bolti thi but my mamma is best i love you mamma
jeevika- haa rehne do ab 
mansi- chachu aap bhi cholo na aur un khadus aunty ko bhi le cholo na 
virat- ok mansi
 they also wnt to mall
here manvi and aditi was busy in shopping and paras and priya are playing . paras bought a icecream for himself and he was facing towards priya
while on the other hand virat got seperated from virika . 
virat- pta nhi kyon mujhe aisa lag rha ki mujhe mera pyar yaha milega
suddenly he got collide with paras zand paras icecream fall on floor and some on his mouth
virat starts to laugh
paras- aapko saram nhi aati aapne meri icecream ko waste kar diya aur has rhe ho
virat- sorry actually you are too funny in this condition
paras- now help me to wash my face
virat- what/
paras- haa aapne ho to kiya hai
virat- ok baba i will help you
virat start to wash his face
virat- should i ak your name
paras- its paras
virat- paras 
paras- paras chodhary
virat- nice name waise kya aap yaha akele aaye ho i mean aapke mumyy daddy
paras-  haa eri mamaa aur meri masi he mere sath
virat- and your daddy
paras- wo nhi hai 
virat- means
paras- wo hamare sath bhi rehte hai
virat- oh! i am so sorry( he felt so  bad in his heart)
paras-its ok
virat- waise konsi icecream thi
paras- its strawberry my favorite aapne waste kar di
virat- wow we both have same mine is also strawberry and i ma sorry for wasting your i will bought  an icecream for you 
paras- no mamaa ne mujse bola hai ki  kisi se help  nhi lete hai agar muje ena ho to me le luga
virat- wow aapki mamaa ne aapko bahut achee batee batayi hai
but where is your mamma
paras pointed towards manvi but suddenly aditi came in front of manvi and virat would not able to see manvi
then  they shake their hand and move away
  in mall virat was only thinking of paras 
virta- bhagwan ne us bache se sath kitna bura kiya  he is so cute
then suddenly virat- yeh mujhe kya ho gya hai mein paras ke bare me itna ko soch rha hu
kya lagta hai wo mera
virat told this to viren
virat- pta nhi bhai lekin us bache se mera koi relation nhi hai phir bhi aisa kyon lag rha ki hum dono ka koi relation hai
viren told virat to forgot it and move apart.
PRECAP: MANVI AND VIRAT MEETING AND A TWIST .


Edited by MeenalKhare99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it's really nice dear...
but I expect virman meeting in this part itself...
donno why virat agreed for this marriage?
but it's really interesting...
continue soon
😊
Edited by madhuharini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: madhuharini

it's really nice dear...
but I expect virman meeting in this part itself...
donno why virat agreed for this marriage?
but it's really interesting...
continue soon
😊

don't worry i will definately tell you why virat agree for this wedding in next part .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello yaar!



This is the first time I'm commenting here! I read all the parts and I loved it!😳

Virat has some plan... interesting...Let me wait and watch!😉

Paras and Virat's part was really cute!😆

I loved it and I loved the whole update!❤️

Please make Manvi and Virat to meet fast.. please!😳

And one more request, Send me a pm when you update the next part...😊

Wait...😆 one more thing.. I'm greedy you see...😉 Try to update fast.. I'm really eager to read it!😳

Take care!🤗

Edited by Angelic_Friend - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update waiting there meeting
and want know what twist u bringing
update soon