FF: Precocious Rawte. chapter 26, p.67 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start...
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hey u post it on.. Arjun forum..
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pov of jr rawte very well writen
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superb start๐Ÿ‘
Loved Jr. Rawte's journey from Mother's womb to real world๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Chapter 1: 

Aisha was hell worried, as both of her bosses didn't picking up her calls. She was trying from last two hours but it was the same, no answer.

Aisha : Pata nahi yeh dono ACP's kahan jake mara hain... Sakshi, mila?

Sakshi : No yaar, I'm trying again and again but they are not picking up.

Aisha : Iss Riya ki bachchi ko bola tha headquarters me direct contact kare, lekin yeh madam khud gayab ho gayee !!

Chotu : I'll go and check...

Chotu turned to go when he saw Riya coming hurriedly.

Riya : Guys, Both are in some important meeting with the hi-commands. I asked DIG sir's PS to carry the message to them but he said it's a TS meeting and he cannot interrupt. However, he promised once they're out, hell convey the message.

Sakshi : (biting her nails) don't know what will happen...Aisha she'll be okey, na ?

Aisha : Pray she will...otherise that Reckless Rawte hum sabko line main khara karke goli marr dega.

Riya : And Statistically speaking guys, usse hamari upar jaane ka chance 110% se vi zyada hain.

Aisha : Chup karr!!

Nitu : Sorry guys yeh sab mere kaaran...

Sakshi : Hey, isme tumhari koi galati nahi hain...she was nine month pregnant, we all should be prepared for it. It's OK.

Aisha : Arjun sir ne 3 din ki responsibility deke gaye the, humne to 24 hour tak vi handle nahi karr paye, pata nahi wapas aake kya karega. Ri, Shree aur Liza ko kahan chor aayi?

Riya : They're at office. If they contact or any case comes up ...

Aisha : Are you insane, dono ko eksaath chor aayi? Do one thing, drop Nitu at home, go to office and send Liza here...and please stay there, near the phone.

Chotu : Ri, you go to office. I'll drop Nitu home.

Aisha : No, we need someone here. You stay...Ri, go.

Doctor came out from labor room.

Aisha : Doc ? What happened?

Doctor : Don't worry, you brought her at right time. But she's asking for her husband.

Aisha : He's out of  station, he'll may show up till morning.

Doctor nodded and went back inside. Riya and Nitu also left hospital corridor.

Chotu : Yaar, sabb thik toh hoga na ?

Both girls looked at him blankly...even they didn't know the answer.

...

After 30 hours, morning 4.00 am.

Two men entered the hospital, running towards the labor room. When they reached there, they saw a little crowd near that particular room, and they recognized every person standing there.

Arjun : Where is she?

Sakshi : Still inside. Arjun, sit down, everything will be fine. Anyways, how's the journey?

Arjun : Rathod drove the whole way. We didn't wait for the flight.

Rathod : Tum sab yahan kya karr rahi ho?

Aisha : Aapko kya laagta hain?

Rathod felt the heat in her tone, and decided to seal his mouth.

Arjun : Yeh sab hua kaise? Riya you were with her, right?

Riya : Haan sir, After breakfast she asked me if I'm going to office or not. I told I would stay with her. She was good then, but suddenly around afternoon she started crying suddenly. I asked her if she's feeling ok or not, she said she's missing you and demanded to go to ETF office.

Sakshi : Ri called me and told to bring her in office. So I brought them and she sat in your cabin. At evening, chotu asked us for coffee and introduce his...( Chotu shook his head negatively from behind ACPs)..um...Nitu. We decided to drop her home & then go with him. But she wanted to come with us, umm... to meet her, so we took her along.

Riya : Then we were chatting with Nitu and all of a sudden she screamed. We brought her here.

Arjun : Why did you took her with you? You should drop her home !! sirf 3 din ke liye tum logon ki varose isko chora, ek laadki nahi saamhalti tum logon se?

Aisha : Sirf ladki hoti to saamhaal jati...yeh Mrs. Rawte hain...woh vi aapki Mrs... aap saamhaal paye aaj tak?

Rathod : Haan yaar, aaaj tak teri aur mari nahi chala iski saamne toh yeh log kis khet ki gaazar-muli? Choro in sab baton ko...Aisha, woh hain kaisi?

Aisha : pata nahi sir, Doctor avi tak bahar nahi aayi.

Shree and Chotu came with some beverages.

Shree : Coffee guys. Arre sir, aap dono aagaye?

Chotu : Nitu, here's your juice.

Sakshi was about to pick a coffee cup, while Riya slapped on her hand.

Riya : Oh hello...juice lo, coffee nahi. You've just donated blood!

Sakshi : Main yeh Aisha ke liye uthaya tha. And you, Liza?

Liza showed Sakshi her juice pack.

Arjun : Blood kyun?

Riya : Sir, she had a heavy blood loss, so Nitu, Sakshi and Liza donated blood for her. But don't worry, everything will be fine.

She handed him his tea. Arjun was about to say something, but doctor came out, she looked tired.

Arjun : Doctor, what happened?

Doctor : Mr. Rawte? ( Arjun nodded)...well I have a good news and a Bad news. Which one you prefer to hear first?

Arjun : Bad news (in a worried tone)...

Doctor : Your wife went through a big struggle, and she is quite exhausted, blood loss vi bohot hua hain...toh.. she's unconscious. It'll take time to recover her. Just pray ke who coma main na chali jaye.

Arjun felt the earth under his feet just moved away. He didn't know how he should react. Rathod's voice brought him into reality.

Rathod : And the good news?

Doctor : Mrs. Rawte has given birth a ..

Arjun : A boy...I knew it.

Doctor : (frowned) how did you know, Mr. Rawte? Amniocentesis karwaya tha?

Arjun : Nop...no medical diagnosis, she always knew it's a boy. How's he?

Doctor : He's fine, we had a little complication initially... he had breathing problem...but it's fine. We keep him observation...you can meet him at morning (she looked at all disappointed faces)... You can see him now through nursery window. Excuse me.

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I'm missing the team badly, so brought this chapter up. Let me know how it was.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update 
so arjun is married 
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
So it's nt Ariya
Hmmm
Let's c wat u hv written
Bt scenes were dam good explained
Thanx for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
sabke sab hai!!
Ab Mrs kaun hai?
Is my guess correct?
Too good yaar
maza aya
wakting for nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting Update
loved the way you r including all team members.
Arjun is married?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
SO Mrs.Rawte must be Roshni.

Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago