Rishabala SS: To Romance A Charming Rogue Pt13+Epilogue Pg 119 (08/01)

Unres ji 😃

Am so happy me first again😃 me first 😃 me first 😃

All the partying emoticons are not getting selected hmmph !! 

Wow !! Such a lovely fic Lazy..it so reminded me of my fav lemons fic and RK seem so similar to my lemons RK 😳..hopefully he even does something similar to my lemonswala RK lol (fingers crossed btw)

RK is such a charmer man !! Uff !! He is like a Prince Charming made my Dil go dhak dhak 😆😳 with all his caring act towards Madhu...he made her feel so special and the way he took care of her aww !! Isn't he very sweet 😃 ! 

But what the 😡 !! Can I whack him on his head 😡 for being such a dumbo ( yup this is a noticeable change Lazy..all this while it was Madhu who used to be dumb to the the core.. And RK all smarty pants 😳..looks like we are in for a certain role reversal here .. A surprising one I should add 😆)

Hmm he is dumbo..period 😆 !! Yet very charmingly dumb hehe !! He couldn't crack even one hint out of so many ...such a (refreshing )change to see him like this 😆 ! 

OMG the way they went on about size 0 ..I seriously wanted to whack them both 😳..even Kareena kapoor couldn't stay put in size 0 in more than one movie lol !! But I liked his outlook towards being beautiful not just outside but rom inside out 😳 !!

 RK  is charming without any doubt just look at the way he went on praising Madhu and her beauty 😉 and her beautiful nature but him being Rogue ...hmm yeh baat kuch hazam nahi hui lol !! Can't digest that one so caring can be rogue 😉 !! 

Hmm so for me to know how exactly he is a rogue ..you need to update soon honey 😆

Haye !! On top it all, he held her dupatta in order to stop her😳..haaye main mar jaanwa 😳 !! Now dying to know his reaction after learning the ultimate truth that its none other than HIM 😆 !! 

Continue soon Lazy darling 😃

 

Res to read it later.

I loved it!  That's a good start.

Beginning.  Loved Trishna.  Very cute and I enjoyed the big brother and little sister banter.  Realistic too.  (I have a big brother and he hated playing chauffeur).

Madhu's entry.  You had me scared at first thinking the poor girl has some horrible disease.  But no, it turned out to be the horrible monthly time with all its glory of cramps and pain!  Poor girl!!!  Many, many of us can relate to that!

RK taking care of Madhu.  Side note:  you love your Prince Charming don't you?  cause honestly I know no man that would do ALL that.  I am convinced a guy like that only exists in fairy tales, your stories, in my dreams and in every single one of my prayers!  (Ameen).

Moving on 😳 ...

I loved the way RK took care of Madhu.  I loved Madhu voicing her inner fears.  She wants to tell him but is scared BUT a part of her wants to take that risk!  

RK's opinions and advise was so good.  I loved how he calls Madhu beautiful!

But the man does need a whack on the head!  I thought RK must know about Madhu's feelings but he really does not. His behaviour makes me want to hug him and strangle him at the same time!!! 😃

The ending:  BRILLIANT!!!!!  Madhu finally had enough and threw out her one liner and like every normal girl, she then made a run for it.

RK is going to have one heck of a sleepless night!  

Can't wait for the fall out!  

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Nice start.. So at last madhu revealed it.. what will be RK response ??? waiting for your next part. Pls update soon