RaBir FF Chapter 10 UPDATED. - Page 6

Posted: 10 years ago
Absolutely loved this part!! But Kabir thinks Aditya is Rachna's bf hehe I smell a bit of jealousy..Thanks for the Pm and keep up the great work!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by brat2008


Omg!!โ˜บ๏ธ Tinge of jealousy in kabir๐Ÿ˜† love it ๐Ÿ˜‰
 Rachna on purpose is not clearing the MU that Aditya is not her boyfriend๐Ÿ˜‰

Would love to see the jealous possessive kabir in the serial too๐Ÿ˜‰

I wish this woman hater will be totally blow away by our Benaras beauty๐Ÿ˜†

Good update!!! Waiting for the next . Make it soon๐Ÿ˜Š

i will try to update soon ...wait n watch i will try to give wt we r still waiting fr in the serial...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by -LiveLaughLove-


Absolutely loved this part!! But Kabir thinks Aditya is Rachna's bf hehe I smell a bit of jealousy..Thanks for the Pm and keep up the great work!

jealousy is the basic step towards love...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome... Great... I'm loving how the story's moving along!!!! Keep up the great work!!! Loving the possessive kabhir here ๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
Looking forward to many more updates!!!! And thanks for sending me PM, really appreciate it!!!

Please update soon ๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 10 years ago
You are awesome! Loved the jealousy part! Can't wait to read the next chapter 
Posted: 10 years ago
wow.. luvly update...!!!! would b waiting for the nxt part...
Posted: 10 years ago

  Chapter -4

Kabir and Rachna in the car...

Rachna : Thnks.

Kabir : wt?? u said something..!!

Rachna : No...nothing..

Kabir:hmm ..I know its difficult for a girl to say sorry..

Rachna : sorry??? I said thank u ..Why wud i Say sorry!!!

Kabir : hmm so u said thnks to me Miss Garg..well Now dont say no... U urself said it..

Rachna doesnt say anything and just turns away her face and smiles a bit...

Kabir is mesmerised at seeing her smiling that way...he losses his attention on road...

Rachna notices a truck coming from front...She turns to him and gets hold of steering wheel to take turn...The truck crosses them and they are just saved by a little distance...

Rachna: How can u be so careless...we cud have serious consequences...

KABIR doesnt say anything just looks down ...Rachna's hands were on his ...she retreats them back  and looks in another direction awkwardly...

Kabir slowly takes her hands in his again and kisses them ...while Rachna is stunned ...And gets away with a jerk...

KABIR REALISES IT WAS HIS DREAM ...

Rachna : sir... plz we r getting late ..we need to reach early..

Kabir : yaa...sure Miss garg..

Rachna(to herself): where The hell I got trapped...

Kabir: What has happened to me??

 

They reach Garg's house..

Rachna gets down  and leaves ...

Kabir is about to go when he notices Rachna's file fallen down ...in the car..he picks it up..and goes to her...Rachna had just reached the door ..while Kabir got down his car...

Dholu opens the door ...meanwhile Kabir's dadi also reaches Garg house...

At the door

Kabeer : Miss garg ur file...

Rachna : thnk u sir...

Rachna : namaste dadi

Dadi: namaste beta ..how r u ??

Rachna ; I m absolutely f9 Dadi...COME...

Dadi .. : ya ya sure beta ..today I m here for dinner ..will HAVE something from ur side too..Kabir u park ur car at side and come

Kabir : ya dadi...

Dholu(tired of all this ) : U people will eat the dinner here ..only ...

Rachna and Dadi laugh..

Dholu: wts there to laugh I won't talk to u di..

Kabeer is back ..

Rachna : hmm .. so u won't tlk to me haan..

Dholu : no...no..

RACHNA liFts him in her arms and starts tickling him...and again asks u wont tlk??

Dholu(Laughing ) no no...

Rachna tickles him and says     nw..

Dholu: ok ok sorry rachna di..nw leave me ..

Kabeer smiles and Dadi looks at him..and is happy to see him smiling ...

They all enter inside ...

Kabeer is welcomed by eveyone warmly and they all sit for dinner...

Rachna and Gunjan(rachna 's sis in law) are serving everyone ..while Aditya comes from his work..

Aditya : wow...Its such a nice sight to see the whole family together..ahh.. this is what I always missed in Australia..

Dholu : Aditya bhaiya..nw U will see this sight everyday..

everyone laughs..

Rachna goes to aditya while Kabeer looks on

Rachna: Adi..u get freshen up .then come

Aditya (folding hands): as u say maam

Rachna : go..!!

 

Kabeer feels uncomfortable seeing all this..

Aditya comes and sits..Rachna is getting his plate ready..

ADITYA asks her to serve less..

Rachna: hm  whole day ...u worked and nw u have to eat less...

u will disappear this way..

Aditya : nwell i think today u also wrked the whole day..so come and sit..

auntyji ...plz rachna ko khanne dijiye..(let her eat)

Rachna's mother : Haan haan beta ..rachna sit..

Rachna sits at aditya's side and they start eating...

suddenly Rachna starts coughing...and aditya tends to attend her ..he offers her a glass of water and also  pats her back..

Aditya: u R OK ...

Rachna: hmm ..yaa..

Kabeer unable to bear it

Kabeer : I have some urgent wrk I need to leave...

Dadi: beta..wt work u got nw??

Kabeer : its imp dadi!!

And he leaves in a hurry...

In the night..

Aditya is sitting at terrace.. trying to apply medicine on wounds he got fighting with goons..

Rachna comes there..

Rachna; adi.. wts this wait i will do it..

Aditya: no rachna ..I m f9..its ok..

Rachna; no its not..

Meanwhile Kabeer comes to his balcony

Rachna bandages aditya..while aditya is constantly looking at her..this annoys kabeer..

Rachna gets up but suddenly trips bcz of water on roof.. Aditya holds her in nick of tym...

They look towards each other..

Kabeer clutches his fist and leaves in anger... 

Kabeer in his room ..: wt has happened why am I so much bothered.. is it??

no It CAN'T BE MAY BE i M JUST WORRIED FOR HER...i NEED TO FIND OUT WHO THIS GUY IS..HE IS NOT HER BOYFRND FR SURE ..OR ELSE WHY IS HE AT GARG'S PLACE...

Posted: 10 years ago
Whoo Kabir Hehe.
His Slowly Falling Towards Rachna.
Not In Love Yet.
(:
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by SilverFairy


Whoo Kabir Hehe.
His Slowly Falling Towards Rachna.
Not In Love Yet.
(:

wait n watch intense romance n confessions ahead...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by angelinasingh



wait n watch intense romance n confessions ahead...

Awsome Can't Wait.
(:

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