FF: The Circle of Life : Part 14 Pg 39 - Page 5

Zeenath Sheikh

@zeenathsheikh8

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Finally meri jaan mein jaan aayi:-) priya is not a___________

Awesome track plz continue as you have planned

Thanks:-)

Edited by zeenathsheikh8 - 10 years ago

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rayaBALH

@rayaBALH

Groupbie

Posted: 10 years ago

ok i thought priya worked there as one of the girls but mera popat bana diya haha awesome update plz continue soon but what priya does there???????? doctor of ammaji? or teacher???? hehe time pass guessing :p continue ASAP :)

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Loved Raya convo and ram's hesitation. Very interesting story.

Please continue soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome

very unique story and I loved the characterization of Ram and Priya.

thank god she is not one of the women...thanks for clearing it.

loved the interaction between Ram and Priya. ammaji is fond of Priya...but feel bad for other girls.

continue soon and thanks for PM

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

superb starting, I love the concept, this one will be very different from other one as it starts with a good jerk, plz continue, will wait for next part

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

part 2

simply awesome, am currently shortage of words to appreciate this concept, am loving every bit of it, plz continue ASAP

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