Swayam OneShot: Flame in the soul - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago

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omg !
wow di !
this was truly beautiful..
i am speechless right now
you wrote this so so so well 👏👏
i am so mesmerized..
each and everything was so well planned and so well layed down.. 👏
i would say a BEAUTIFUL MASTERPIECE

thanks for the PM 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome... beautifully penned...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing os!!
beautifully written..
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was amazingly written ... 👏

Beautiful portray of his emotions... 😊

He has seen alot of hardships in his love life... making a diva love a normal boy is not an easy task... 😳

Specially when she tagged him as a stalker... what he started as a secret admirer was ruthlessly insulted n crushed... 😭

But still... his true love won back... thats lovely... 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
shenzz🤗🤗
this wil b one of my favs of ur works❤️

each and every emotion and feelings of swayam was penned down amazingly👏👏

reminded me of all d old memories😳

loveddd ittt to d coreee😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome one shot
brilliantly presented the emotion of swayam
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Posted: 10 years ago
did you ever heard about a masterpiece
 tis was exactly tat 
i cannot express kintney mindblowingly you portrayed 
swayam's broken heart's feeling 
tis os was outstanding 
yu perfectly showed every facet of his feeling 
his agonizing pain n the five stages of loss n grief very beautifully 
do write more n i mean it from my heart 
becoz ur writing is exceptional n very unique 
the best part about you as a writer is tat after reading ur material 
whether it be rom com or emotional it is so realistic tat 
you can actually picturize everything n whenever you give emotional updates you give such a deep analysis about a character tat the whole sequence becomes heart-touching 
all in all a very well formed n bewitching read 🤗 
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautful os shenz 
loved the way you penned down swayam's feelings 


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Posted: 10 years ago
Swayam's emotions have been amazingly portrayed by you... Wonderful !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
i am speechless
hats off to your writing skills👏
superbbb
very beautifully you pened down swayam's state of mind