Swayam OneShot: Flame in the soul - Page 3

Posted: 9 years ago
Shenz,What should I say?

This piece of yours made me re-live the whole exceptionally beautiful journey of SwaRon once again.Seeing SwaRon from the eyes of Swayam comes is a heavenly joueney.This piece was filled with so many emotions if Swayam and every emotion potrayed beautifully by you.I am so glad I read this...Its beautiful.Beautiful. 😊
Posted: 9 years ago
It was just Beautiful. The way you expressed Swayam's feelings is just commendable 👏 👏 
Swaron's journey came back rushing to me as I read this OS. Brilliant. 
I just love your works as they are dealt with precision and beauty. Amazing. ❤️
Posted: 9 years ago
This was such an expressive piece. You penned down the emotions in such a wonderful flow, from the beginning to the end. I really liked the way you handled it, I could imagine Swayam in front of my eyes. 

I wish Swayam would have been handled the way you wrote in the serial as well. I was quite disappointed with the way they handled him. Anyhow, this piece is commendable.

Try to write more along these lines.

Love
N. 

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