RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May)

Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guyz..! Thought of starting a new FF.. Your likes and comments mean aloot!

Kabir: Handsome hunk who studied abroad.

Rachna Garg: Medical student Dayal's youngest daughter.

Mohan: Elder son of Tripathis and Kabir's Elder Brother

Pihu:  Here she is very nice, caring and well educated. Rachna's elder sister, she loves her very much. She is Mohan's wife.

Om: Kabir and Mohan's father

Sugandha: Kabir and Mohan's Mother

Chaya: Rachna's childhood friend.

Gunjan: Rachna's friend. 


PLOT:
Mohan and Pihu are newly married couple, Rachna is a an active funky girl, Kabir is a serious and naughty boy, Garg's and Tripathi's share special relation as family friends but Rachna and Kabir have never seen each other.

Edited by RabirLover - 9 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
really interesting concept
waiting for your update
Posted: 10 years ago
Aww sounds so interesting ðŸ˜› I guess here kabir gonna be totally different form the show. I am so excited. Please start soon ðŸ¤—
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by MahimaSingh


Aww sounds so interesting ðŸ˜› I guess here kabir gonna be totally different form the show. I am so excited. Please start soon ðŸ¤—

Thanks dear!! First update on  Sun! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Yellowdiamond


Interesting

Thanks!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by awesome-raji


really interesting concept
waiting for your update

Thanks :)))
Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 1:

It's Pihu and Mohan's wedding...all the Garg mansion is beautifully decorated with lots of flowers, the guests are arriving and Dayal and Shail are greeting them and everyone is waiting for the baraat's arrival...

Gunjan: Pihu di wowww aap tou buhat beautiful lag rahee hain

Chaya: haan really awww deee u r looking like traditional bride

Pihu: bas buhat hogayee meri taareef zara apni khaas saheli ko dekho kahan reh gayee 2 ghantay hogayay hain abhi tak washroom mein hai kya

Gunjan: lagta hai uska dressusay ya tou loose hogya hoga ya tight😆😆😆

Chaya :woww kitna mazaa aayay jab Dr. Rachna Garg ka dress usay fit hee na aayya😆😆phr uski shakal dekhnay laik hogeee😆😆they HI fi each other

Rachna in dressing room :😡😡what the hell (and trying to tie her dori) maan se bola bhi tha mujhay nahi banna chamak challo😡yeh kya hai yeh doree yeh itna heavy lehnga😡uff ooper se us manhoos tailor ne itna loose krdya😡...

After some time Rachna came out of the washroom...in anger😡😡

Rachna: dee yeh dekho naa us manhoos tailor ne aapki beautiful sis ke saath kya kiya😭

Chaya: kya kiya???😆😆

Rachna: Chaya😡😡chup kar ek tou meree dress

Pihu: kya huaa araam se itna ghussa apni shakal dekh aainay mein ghussay se pagal ho rhee hai

Rachna: deee😭yeh itna loose hai

Gunjan: aray kahan hai loose peechay turn kro

Rachna turned...dekha Gunjan meine bola tha na

Gunjan: Rachna tum bilkul pagal ho tumne tou peechay kee strings he nahi baandhee tou loose tou hoga na😆😆

Rachna: kyalekin meine try tou kya tha😭

Gunjan: ruko mein baandh detee hun

she tied her strings...

Pihu: ab dekh bilkul tumhari size ka hai😛

then she run towards mirror

Rachna:😛😛wowww m looking...

Chaya interrupted: madhuri😆

Rachna:😡tum mera mazaaq uda rahee ho

Pihu: ohoo bas Rachna ab jaldi se jewellery pehno aur neechay dekho maan papa akelay khaday hain yr

Rachna: lekin dee mujhay heavy jewellery pasand nahi hai yeh maan ne pata nahi kahan se gaandhi ke zamanay ki jewellery nikal ke dee haiitni heavy Nooo

Pihu: kitna boltee hai tu Rachna, acha koi light hee pehn le bt neechay jaao jaldi

Rachna: okk😛


Rachna wore her jewellery and she was looking like an angel in red and green lehnga
with sikoon work on it

Shail: Rachna idhar aa naa

Dayal: haan beta idhar aao

Rachna:😕yeh maan aur papa phr se mujhay kisi ladkay ki maan se mila rahay hongay😡oh God...

Rachna with a fake smile went towards them

Dayal: inse milo yeh hain mere business partner Mr. Sharma yeh unki wife aur yeh unka beta Sameer

Rachna: hii😊

Mrs. Sharma aapki betee buhat pyaari hai

Sameer: hi

Dayal: jaao beta Sameer ko apnay friends se milwaao😊

Rachna(in mind): what the😡oh chalyay with her fake smile

Gunjan and Chaya:😕😕

Sameer: waisay meine kabhi apni mom ki baat agree nahi ki per lagta hai aaj krnee padegee

Rachna: kya😕

Sameer: yehee ke aap buhat

Chaya interrupted: beautiful hain

Rachna:😡

sameer: excuse me aap??

Chaya: mein hun Chaya Rachna ki close friend and yeh hai Gunjan Rachna ki doosri close friend aur kuch

sameer: oh acha okk..btw miss Chaya aapko yeh kaisay pata chala mein yehee bolnay wala hun

Chaya:🤣how funny Mr. Sameer, Rachna ke na koi 15-20 boy friends reh chukay hain sab yehee boltay hain kyun Dr. Rachna Garg😉


Rachna:😕(in mind mere BFs😲oh got it)😆haan Chaya ab kya kr sktay hain

Gunjan (in mind🤣)

sameer: matlab aappka BF bhi hai??😲

Rachna: arre ghalat fehmi hai aapki Dr. Rachna Garg ka ek BF nahi hai Buhat saray hain😃

sameer: oh ok ok..fine...

Gunjan: Rachna chal Pihu di bula rhe hain

Rachna: excuse me.

sameer : yeah no problem...

as sameer left Rachna Chaya and Gunjan hi fied each other🤣

Rachna: Chaya kaisa bewakoof banaya usay😆😆😆Rachna Garg ke BFs🤣pa'pa mujhay jaan se naa maar dein 

they were laughing so loudly suddenly Shail came

Shail: kya kr rhay ho tum log itnay zorr se kyun hass rahay ho😡Rachna 1000 baar
samjhaya hai na ke is tarah logon ke beech aisay nahi hastay kuch sharam aur
lehaaz hee nahi

Rachna still😆:sorry maan😃...acha baraat kab tak aayegee

Shail: bas puhanchnay wali hai😛tum log Pihu ke pass jao jaisay hee baraat aayay usay neechay leke aana

Rachna, Gunjan and Chaya go towards Pihu...

Rachna: dee meine bola tha na maan pa'pa zaroor mujhay koi stupid pakadwaa dengay😆lekin humne bhi usay aisaa bewakoof banaya🤣

Pihu: Rachna tu bhi naa sudhar jaa

suddenly they heard voices of drums and dancing and shouting people

Chaya:😊baraat aagayeee (excitedly)

Gunjan: chal chal ooper chaltay hain Rachna chal...

Pihu:😳

they all 3 went to the terrace (looking towards baraat)

Rachna: wowww kitna mazaa arha hoga na😛

Chaya: kyun tere lye bhi koi dhoondein ismen se😉

Rachna: Chaya tujhay pata hai na mujhay abhi shaadi nahi krnee😡

Rachna: btw yeh kon hai😛in dark green kurta

Chaya: SS nazar hee nahi aarha
woww figure se tou buhat handsome lag raha hai


Gunjan: arre mohan jiju ka
bhaai hoga yaad hai jab pihu di ke lye aayay thay tab unhone bataya tha unka
chota beta bahir hai


Rachna:oh haan😛lekin face kyun
nahi dikh raha😡


Gunjan: ohoo neechay chal ke
dekh lena na


Rachna: hmm chal ab andar...


Dholu came...


Dholu: Rachna didi Shail Mausi
Pihu dee aur aap sab ko neechay bula rhee hain


Pihu: haan Dholu aap chalo..
we r coming


Rachna: dee chalo😭(she got lil tears)
and they both hug each other and become nostalgia


renu: rachna dekh maa papa ka
khayal rakhna aisay ab apna bachpana chodn ahoga tumhein samjhee (while wiping
Rachna's tears)


Rachna: haan dee promise😭


and they both again hug each
other...


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Edited by RabirLover - 9 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
really nice update
different story...excited about their first meet

update soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by awesome-raji


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">really nice update
</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">different story...excited about their first meet</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006666">update soon</font>


Thanks...!

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