surya after 5 years ff part56 pg99 surya chf/romance updated - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanku all for ur encouragement..it helps me motivate to write😳
@Sindu di..yes I will change it to ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
preethi waiting fr next part
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please continue and reunite them. This was going on in my head also, but didnt feel like writing. Too emotional 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

please continue and reunite them. This was going on in my head also, but didnt feel like writing. Too emotional 

I hope I did justice to ur imagination
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Posted: 10 years ago
[QUOTE=ksp9]preethi waiting fr next part[/QUOTE😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ksp9

preethi waiting fr next part

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome OS preeti di👍🏼
Surya seprated😲😭
pls do continue

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Posted: 10 years ago
Suraj after sandya left was heartbroken..he channeled his emotions and worked day and night in the shop.he rarely smiled and talked only when necessary.he kept remembering his time spent with sandya
**flashback**
 Sandya was cleaning cupboard.she found a chain..she felt that she saw that chain before somewhere ..she tried to recollect it.it was The same chain she saw when she went with her parents to the gold shop.she had tears in her eyes seeing chains..all memories came alive.suraj je came at the right moment
Suraj:what happened sandya je
Sandya:how did you know this is the chain I liked surajje
Suraj:sandya je I don't know that u liked same chain the moment I saw this chain I thought this was meant for my life partner.I felt a connectipn with it
I thought of giving it to you on our first night but you know na what happened
Sandya:ohh!! Sandya was sad and kept chain inside cupboard thinkin suraj doesn't want to give her chain anymore
Sandya was folding clothes when suraj came from behind and wiped tear from her mesmerizing eyes..they were filled with numerous emotions.she just closed her eyes not wanting to show her tears to suraj..
Suraj:sandya look at me .
She loved the way suraj called her name for the first time without using je.it made her feel closet to her husband
Sandya::jee surajje.he carressed her cheek took chain out added heartshaped pendant with their photos and placed it around her neck and whishpers in her ear to call her suraj  from now on..
Suraj comes out of his memories when some customer calls him

  *flashbacks end*
The chain is now on a little girl who's sleeping peacefully in her moms lap..
Will chain bring them together?
Part 3 page 4

Edited by surya_dabh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tried something romantic ..please be free to criticize and give suggestions😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful OS Preethi.  Read both parts.  It is very nice.  Update soon.