Diya Aur Baati Hum

surya after 5 years ff part56 pg99 surya chf/romance updated - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome di...continue soon pls...loving it
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Plz continue. Reunite our SurYa Edited by AniKarocks - 10 years ago
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excellent preethi. shop ki sandya ankur tho veltundi. waiting fr next part pri. write long one pri. i like ur flashback and present day osEdited by ksp9 - 10 years ago
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WOW
nice update pri

plz continue
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Originally posted by: ksp9

excellent preethi. shop ki sandya ankur tho veltundi. waiting fr next part pri. write long one pri. i like ur flashback and present day os

parents tho ani gurtu sp
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Bhabo is lookin at Suraj through the window ...she felt bad that her chora stopped living life . She was guilty because she knew she was wrong about what she did but her ego dint let her accept it . She tried contacting sandy once but she failed as she couldnt reach in time...at that timw she thought she was doin right ..she thought she was protecting her son..kahna was tugging her Saree askin her to make him get ready ..she gave one last look at suraj and decided to make this right even if it was last thing to do
                Pari and her mom reached puskar..sandya has tears in her eyes on seeing pushkar..all the bitter sweet memories came rushing..every place reminded her of suraj ..pari called her and showed her sweet shop..like father pari also developed sweet tooth. ..if not for Pari she would not have survived separation
  
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 Bhaiyya!!she started cryin
What happened sandya?
He came to congractulate sandya on completing training when he saw that surajasked sandya to go.sandya told everything and said she cannot live without surajje and even her ips dream is not worth it without her suraj..sandya without suraj is incomplete bhaiyya and she started crying
Ankur dint know what to say and couldn't see his sister condition..she started crying holding her bhabi
Ankita:sandya think about little angel growing in u..u have to live for her ..there's little suraj with you a part of suraj always lives with you... At that moment sandya decided to live for their angel 

*end of flashback**

Sandya for sweets for Pari.she decided to meet suraj and tell about their angel

Will sandya able to meet suraj ?
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Edited by surya_dabh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Should I complete it in next part or extend it?
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the story is shaping up well
excellent

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Originally posted by: thala

the story is shaping up well

excellent

thanku di.should I continue or end it
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writing is gods gift pri
you write so well

i think you should take up a FF