FF : Memory of a star -pt 9 updtd pg 13 24/6 - Page 4

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Thank u shamma , m glad u lykd it 

Wowww! Lovely. I loved the J-10 n the alien intro, the backdrop story reminded me a bit of superman. Lol. Awesome update!👏👏👏 I'm glad u managed to update today..🤗
N kya kahe.. Jhonny ko main kitna miss karti hu show mein.. I was smiling like mad while reading his lines.❤️😆 But aise kaise pyar hua? 😉Will wait for nxt part. Agli baar write a long one!😉❤️
Thnx a tonnn for this lovely update.🤗🤗 Ab main bataa nhi sakti ki kitni khush hu,😆 love dis FF.. Keep rocking jaani. Loveee u❤️

Thank u so so so so so much jaani yaara sweetyy ❤️ 🤗 m glad u liked it *sniff* and i miss him too and u will know how the pyar began and u too keep rocking , loveee yaa

wow nice ff dear really different 😉 loved it ...

Thanks a lot clementina 🤗 😳 m glad u lykd it 

Hi guys , i am back with part 4 😊 , suggestions/critics are welcomed.

Johnny : " Yes pandey ji , i am head over heels for Suman ji" (Haan haan haan pandey ji , hume Suman ji se ishq love mohabbat hai)

Vicky : "But how and when did this happened  ?" (Par yeh sab kab aur kaise hua ?)

Johnny starts narrating "I fell in love at her first sight when i first encountered her in a conference and on that evening i extended a hand of friendship towards Suman ji in her cabin which she accepted , but she only thinks me as a good friend and now i am experimenting several ways to woo her." (Hume pehli nezar waali mohabbat huyi thi jab hum unse ek conference mein mile the aur usi saam meine unki cabin mein unse dosti ka haat badaaye jo Suman ji ne accept kiya par woh hume ek ache friend se zyada kuch nahi maanti aur hum unka dil jeetne ke liye naye paitre apna rahe hai )

Vicky :"That's well but how will you compete against Rahul ?"(Woh sab to theeke par Rahul ko raaste se kaise nikaaloge ?)

Johnny (Smiling confidently) :" Don't be stressed pandey ji , if he is a king , i am no less than a prince."(Uski chinta aap math kijiye pandey ji , agar woh Cheddi hai toh hum bhi dabbang hai)

Scene shifts to Rahul's cabin where Gia an another colleague of PA tries wooing Rahul .

Gia (sweetly) : "Rahul stop the lappy work for a moment and gaze at me." (Thode time ke liye laptop band karke mujhe dekho na)

Rahul (Absorbed in work) : "No i don't even raise an eye on other girls expect Priya  and now you can leave leave so i can work in peace." (Nahi mein Priya se siwa dusri ladkiyon ki taraf bhi nahi dekhta , tum jaa sakti hu kyuki mein shaanti se kaam kar saku.)

Gia gives a pout and leaves with a heavy heart .

Scene shifts to 13-MN planet's headquarters where the army chief bellows the news that their rival planet's agent will be reaching here soon to take away their 'Golden Hercules'.

Zunoon (Army chief) :- "This cant happen , nooo !!! they dare to collide with 13-MN's army ." (Nahii yeh nahi hosakta !!! unki itni jurrat ki woh 13-MN ki sena se takraaye)

Soldier-1 : "Chief we are fully prepared to tackle the agent , just let the agent land on this soil and he/she will be roasted alive !! "(Sardaar hum puri tarah se usse nipattne ke liye ready hai bas use yaha par kadam rakhne ki der hai , hum use jinda jalaadenge !!)

Zunoon : "Silence ! I am the chief so it will be me to tackle him/her by my own strategy ." (Khamosh ! Mein sardar hu aur mein hi usse nibptunga apne tarike se)

Silence dawns upon the headquarters ...

Scene shifts to Priya's cabin where she is in deep thoughts while holding a photo of an elderly lady .

Priya (Gravely) : "I miss you mom , i wish you were here with me , dad doesn't love me" (Mom mein aapko bahut miss karti hu , khaash aap yaha mere saath hoti , dad mujhse pyaar nahi karte)

She is lost in her own grief ...

Scene shifts to 5113-J  planet where Jeannie finally reaches the parrot's house which is fully decorated by outer space decors and cute party streamers .
 
Chiro (the cloned green-greyish parrot) : "Jeannie finally you arrived to make the reunion radiant ! yay!" (Jeannie finally tum reunion mein 4 chaand lagaane aahi hai)

Jeannie : "After all this is our spunky gang reunion after graduation , i have to be here at any cost ." (Kaise na aati , yeh hamaari spunky gang ki reunion hai)

Then a rabbit who is spherical shaped and short statured enters hopping by ...


Part 5
Edited by .nightqueen - 10 years ago

woww fantasticc update sumi...👏👍🏼 loved ittt. ❤️ I loved the Jhonny past, n Priya's grief. so sad wish Jhonny will take away all that grief...😊

n ooh the alien parts r interesting.. I love the way u describe things sumi.👍🏼 will wait for nxt update..❤️❤️🤗

thank you for the update...🤗❤️ loveee ya yar.

aww nice update dear am loving dz its interesting 😉 tfs 4 p.m 🤗

aww , m so glad u lykd it dear 🤗 ❤️ 😊 , thanks for such a lovely feedback 🤗 and love u 2 ❤️ <3

and ntosim 😉

@ clementina : thank u v much dear 🤗 , glad u lykd it n welcomee 😊