My Poetry Collection- HUUUGEE UPDATE @Pg 89! Do read - Page 5

Posted: 10 years ago
Congratulations for the second PH Reshma
Well done
Posted: 10 years ago
Heartiest Congratulaions Reshma!!! Great Job!!!
Keep writing dear 😊
 
Sorry for being so late...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by gadhadada



Wow, wat an Opening...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Baccha, Dont say about Thank You as its Honor for Us that U Entertain Us with Ur Talent and Skills...πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ‘
I m Thankful to U abt that...😳😳



may Almight ALLAH Bless U and gives U Success with Love, Health, Loveones in Ur Every aspect of Life... aameen😳😳

Thank you very much GD πŸ˜³πŸ˜Š
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by DUOlover123


Oh extremely sorry Raaz for being this much late..
heartiest congratulations for you second PH.. waiting to read more of your amazing poems and can't wait to see the creativity you do in photoshop.. πŸ‘
Good luck..

Thank you Jerry πŸ˜ƒ

BTW, I don't use photoshop πŸ˜›πŸ˜³
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by snehal.


Congrats on your very own second thread of poetic creativity reshma! πŸ‘

Thank you very much snelu πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by binod.abhijeet


u r already in second ph, really gread job..many many congratulation reshma.

Thank you Binod πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by ANGELICEYES


So sorry dear for the delay..
Anyways better late than neverπŸ˜›

Wish you soon complete this PH with grand successπŸ€—πŸ€—..

Thank you Angel dear πŸ˜³
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Soni.


Congratulations for the second PH Reshma
Well done

Thank you very much Sardarni πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by neha_dna


Heartiest Congratulaions Reshma!!! Great Job!!!
Keep writing dear 😊
 
Sorry for being so late...

Thank you neha. πŸ˜ƒ
Ah.. No probs at all πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago

Hello Guys... Here I am with the 1st poem of the thread. Hope you will all read, like, feel and comment on it πŸ˜³.. 


THE INDESCRIBABLE PAIN

Stranded and alone stood a brave heart,

People's gaze shifting to the middle of the road,

Witnessing a one-to-four deadly combat,

He showed bravery more than words can afford.


Bullets flew with mighty speed, to and fro,

"Safeguard the girl" was his only aim,

Into the chest, near the head, pierced the bullets,

The hero fell at the end of the game.


A paralyzing chillness down the team's spines,

Hands are quivering, driving is reckless,

Horror-stricken eyes and excruciatingly painful,

Seeing him on the road, motionless.


Daya ran for what seemed a mile, to Abhijeet,

Tears of loss and pain, down his cheeks, endlessly flowing,

Arms gripped around with his pale face on the shoulders,

With every passing second the pain kept growing.


Abhijeet lay in his crying arms, breathless

Unaware of the pain traumatizing him.

The leader too shell-shocked for words.

Looking at the corpse, lifeless and grim.


A quick, sudden movement, a gasp,

Eyes half-opened informing his presence.

Stretched unconscious on a stretcher to the hospital,

In front of Daya's eyes only Abhijeet's countenance


Post operation out came the doctor,

Saddening silence for what seemed to be days,

The pain of truth piercing them like a pointed arrow

Horror and pain were all that showed on Daya's face.


A month later, in the bureau, Daya sat,

Turning one picture by one, reminiscing their memories,

Tons of joy, tears, smiles and fun together,

He wept recalling them, as sweet as cherries


Eyes wet and heartbroken, he uttered

"Coming past the door, updating upon the case,

A friend all ready at my single call he was"

Tears rolled down, as he uttered, on his face.


A moment of true friendship between our duo.

Upon every word uttered here, more pain did swarm.

One of the episodes of boundless, immortal friendship,

Is one of the most touching Abhijeet Ka Inteqaam'


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