FF: Kabhi Jo Baadal Barse... NOTE: Page 39 - Page 3

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by vishakupp


Looking forward to it. Please do update soon

Thanks for commenting... will update soon πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by anupam_dil


very very nice partπŸ‘πŸ‘ but come to current track soon as I want to see the reunion through your writing...continue soon...and plz PM me

Thank you... I will try to get to the present track quickly :-) πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by peeyara


lo mardi goli health ko  

dr kapoor was giving you heavy medications na toh nhi kaha tha but ab kahungi πŸ˜‰

i should have force you na...next tym pakka karungiπŸ˜‰
haan bht bharosa haiπŸ˜›

🀣🀣 aapne toh sach mei goli maardi πŸ€£
how sweet, "bohot bharosa hai" πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by peeyara


kaha na control nahi hua πŸ˜†
koi bhi leap lo...reverse ya forward...doesn't matter...story se matlab haiπŸ˜‰
mujhe laga dr. kapoor ki hi advice hogi ..waise how is he? hv you visited him? πŸ€£
koshis karna k rajat na ho else kapur is fine...first name se hame kya karna hai πŸ€£
lkein kitna pila rahi ho yaar...kidney problem hogayi toh πŸ€£
u can irritate me...waise mujhe irritate karna aasan nhi hai πŸ˜Ž


side leap bhi chalega? πŸ˜†
Monday morning visit kiya tha... after seeing me, obviously accha hoga na? πŸ˜‰πŸ€£ uff, mai koi gandi baat nahi kar rahi... after seeing me and my health improvements, happy toh hoga na. 
hahahaha okay no Rajat πŸ˜†πŸ€’
Mr. Kapoor punjabi hai na... toh itni jaldi sharab ka koi bura asar nahi hoga πŸ€£
aapne permission diya mujhe to irritate you  pata hai ki aapko irritate karna aasaan nahi hai  

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by lalmadhu


Very good start.  Very impressive. Please continue soon,
Plz pm me for ur updates.

Thank you πŸ˜ƒ will update soon.
Posted: 10 years ago
Thats a good start ..
You said you are not ekta ..πŸ˜†but in the starting itself you separated Raya ...
Jokeas apart ,a wonderful story ,potryed very beautifully ,,,
suspence????πŸ˜‰ who is the kapUr ..waiting eagerly for it .
why they have separated and why he hasnt stopped  
what she doing in Uk as some one mrs.kapur or what  πŸ˜†

Pm me from next time...Jald se update dena ..
Take care of your health ...Congratulations for starting a story ..

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sparkling_gems


What an amazing storyline! It was sad to see that circumstances once again played its cruel game and separated Ram and Priya but what was circumstances which made Priya left. What was Ram hiding from her which, according to him for her own good? And why both of them behavingly stubbornly? And who is his HE, taking advantage of Priya? Why is He calling her Mrs. KapUr? Many questions.

Pls continue soon.

If possible add me in ur pm list.

Thank you πŸ˜ƒ
so many questions πŸ˜†... but the answers to these questions will slowly be revealed as the story progresses πŸ˜‰ 
its RaYa... stubbornness will always be a major trait πŸ˜†
will update soon. πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Superb start even i felt bad more for ram
Looking forward to next part
I hate rajat glad you arent bringing him
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by bpatil3


Superb beginning yaar.
I m surprized and loved reading.
Emotions of raya were perfectly penned down.
continue soon.
Ekta nhi ho lekin separate toh kar chuki ho raya ko aur beech mein Mr.Kapur ko bhi ghusa diya pressent meinπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Welll post the other parts soon if already u wroteπŸ˜›


Thank you so much πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Ekta nahi hoon lekin uska phone aaya tha mujhe , aur usne order kiya tha separation ke liye aur haddi kapur ko ghusane ke liye 🀣

i started writing the story from the middle πŸ˜† so the parts i have written will come later πŸ˜† 
will update soon πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by tulshan1989


hey shazk u r back with another story on raya
have no words to descrbe just beautifully written
raya love each other but their ego is stopping them
pls continue soon and pm me the first part

Thank you πŸ˜ƒ
RaYa have very big egos πŸ˜† 
will update soon 

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