rantara ff-sajda tere pyar mein(thread 2- note @ Pg123)

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                                       ~SAJDA TERE PYAR MEIN~
                                                                                             ~(2ND THREAD)~
                                Sacha jab ishq ye
                                        Fir hai kya jism ye
                                        sabh kuch toh hai mera
                                        Ab tere naam pe
                                        Main kuch bhi kar jaun
                                        Jab teri baat aaye
                                        Sar jhuka ke 
                                        Karun tujhko 
                                        sajda  ve..
                                        Rang resh mein
                                        Rag Rag mein tere
                                        Karoon sajda main tera
                                        Resh mere


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sorry i didn't get much time to type the chapter. a bit busy. so it's just a filler part and hope you enjoy. after all at last i managed to write a short chapter🀣

Chapter 39

"yaar ajji... ye bhai Kashmir mein kar kya raha hain? kitne din ho gaye... na koi khabar na koi phone.." machmach said scratching his head in confusion. He was seating in ajji's room. "soch toh main bhi rahi hoon machmach. Yera kya khichri paka raha hain... bappa kare koi garbar na kare iss baar." Ajji said in thoughtful face. "garbar?! Aap kaunsi garbar ki baat kar rahe ho?!" machmach asked in confusion. "tere dimag mein naii ghusega re... tu bhi to tere bhai ki tarah kam yera nahi hain..." ajji said. "kya ajji..." machmach couldn't finish the word and his phone vibrated. "arey bhai... lo abhi baat kar rahe the aa gaya uska phone..." Machmach said. "kya chintu ka phone?! Mere ko de na machmach!" ajji said in excitement. "arey ajji mere ko bhi to thorri baat karne do.." machmach said. "acha thik hain pahele tu baat kar le..." ajji said. Machmach received the phone. "arey bhai... kya kar raha hain tu... itne din ho gaye koi khabar naii.. bole to sab jhakass hain na?!" maachmach asked. "arey kuch bhi jhakass naii hain re... bole to sab ulat pulat ho gaya hain idhar!!" raghu said in irritation from other side. "kya?!! Sab ulat pulat ho gaya?! Kashmir mein bhukamp aya kya?! News mein to kuch nahi aya.." machmach said scratching his head. "abey bhukamp nahi aya re... pata naii tera dimag kis raste pe chalta hain... kuch bhi babal ho o bhukamp ya baan ki yaad ata hain... aisa kuch naii hain... asalmein woo..." raghu suddenly started to hesitate. "kya huya bhai... tu huakla kyun raha hain?! paheli baar dekh raha hoon?! Zuban mein problem hain kya?!" machmach asked. "tu na apni zuban pe tala laga..." raghu's irritation increased. "huya aisa hain ki... Mere ko lagta hain... apun ko ..." again his word stumbled. "haan bol bhai..." machmach said. "wo apun ko... miscall se... LOVE HO GAYA HAIN..." raghu said the word at last with a big sigh. "ohh aisi baat hain... tere ko ..." suddenly machmach understood what he just said and his eyes widened in shock.. "KYA!! KYA KAHA BHAI?!!!..." he screamed and he was looking like an goggle eyed amphibian.. "tere ko pyar ho gaya hain... aur wo bhi uss yeri se??!!... bhai ye kaise ho gaya... bhai tere ko accident ho gaya kya?!!.. tere dimag mein chot to nahi laga?!!" he said in hwll confused and worried voice. On the other hand, ajji jusy clapped and jumped on the bed like a little girl. It seemed like her age was suddenly decreased in huge rate. "arey naii re machmach... mere ko sachmein lagta hain ki... Woo.. apun uss yeri se pyar karte hain..." raghu said from other side. "abey gadhe phone de mere ko..." ajji almost snatched the phone from machmach. "abey oye yere..." ajji said loudly. "ajji aap?!" raghu said in startled voice. "haan main... tu bhi ekdum ajib hain... hamesha galat jagah par phone karta hain... ab bata mere ko ki kya huya hain?!" ajji said. "arey woo ajji... kuch samajh naii aa raha hain... ajib sa lkag raha hain pata hain... pahele aisa kabhi naii laga..." his voice was confused as well as excited. "ajib lag raha hain?!! kaisa lag raha hain, acha ya bura?!" she asked. "naaiii ajji, bura to naii lag raha hain... acha lag raha hain.. kahoon to s**a akha life mein last time kab itna acha laagaa tha yaad naiii..." he said with a huge grin. Even ajji could sense the excitement and merry in his voice. "hmmm!!...to ab kya?" she asked. "ajji!!.." raghu paused for a while. There was a slight confusion in his voice. "kya apun ko sachmein antara se pyar ho gaya hain?! mere khopri mein to kuch naii ghus raha hain..." he said. "tere ko abhi bhi lagta hain ye pyar naii kuch aur hain?!!" ajji laughed a bit. "arey ajji kaise maan loon... Waisa kuch to nahin huya jaisa filmon mein hota hain... wo jaise hawa chalta hain, wo kya kahete hain... haan wo chunriya urti hain... wo baja bajne lagta hain.. aisa kuch to naii huya..." he said in confusion. "ufff chintuuu!!!!..." ajji stroke her head. "kabhi kabhi man karta hain ki tere au machmach ka dimag kholke dekhoon ki andar kya hain..." ajji said. Machmach who was seating at side caught his head with two hand in worried face. Seemed like, he took ajji's joke seriously. "arey ajji... Batao na mere ko sach mein uss sey pyar ho gaya hain kya?!!" he asked. "chintu, ek baat bata... kya kar sakta hain tu antara ke liye?!... apni jaan de sakta hain?!!" she asked. there was a huge silent there. after some moment he uttered, "naii ajjii!...". ajji became confused. "naii de sakta apni jaan. Kyun ki apun ki jaan to wohich hain...wo miscall!! To apun apni jaan kaise de... wo to all ready uske pass hain na..." he said with such an intense voice that ajji clearly understand his condition. "abey yere..." Ajji smiled, "tu to kaam se gaya re... wo filmon ka pyar to bas dikhaba hain... tere ko to sacha pyar ho gaya hain re!!" she said. Raghu's face caught an wide grin and he caressed his hairs madly. "antara ko bataya kya?!!" ajji asked. "naii ajji!!..." suddenly his voice became a bit low. "kyun kya huya?!!" ajji's voice became a slightly worried. "pata naiii ajji... sach kahun to... mere ko dar lag raha hain..." he said. "kya baat hain... raghunath naik ko dar lag raha hain... ye toh breaking news hain!!!" ajji laughed. "kya yaar ajji..." raghu huffed. "kyun dikkat kya hain re?!! antara tere ko pasand nahin karti yahi baat hain na?!!" she asked. "arey naii ajji aisi koi baat naii hain..." he said. "to fir kya hain?!! itna hichak kyun raha hain... wo tere ko pasand karti hain... to fir tu ussey keheta kyun nahin?!" ajji asked in confusion. "ajji problem ye hain ki antara mujhe pasand to karti hain.. par wo sirf ek dost ki mafik. Uske dil mein apun ke liye aisa koi feeling hain hi naii!!  arey ajji uss ko to yee bhi naii lagta ki apun kabhi uss se pyar kar sakta haain! To ab apun usey bataye bhi to kaise?! Aap jaan ti ho yeri hain... agar gusse mein kuch ulta sidha kar diya too?!" raghu asked in a worried voice. "arey mere gobar ki factory chintu!!.." ajji said loudly from other side, "ek baat bata mere ko.. uske dil mein tere liye pyar mohabbat wala aheshas ayega bhi kaise?! Tune kabhi bhi ussey jata ne ki koushis ki? Wo to chor hi de... ek din bata jisdin tune uske sath jhagra nahi kiya?!" ajji asked. "ajji sochne de yaar... last month ko... nahi ussey pahele..." raghu scratched his head. "tu apna sar khuchata rahein.. budha ho jayega fir bhi tujhe yaad nahi ayega.. kyun ki aisa koi din tha hi nahi..." ajji said. "ajji tere ko kaise pata ki main sar khucha raha hoon?! Tu mere ko dekh sakti hain kya?!!" raghu's face made a big O. "iss yere ka main kya karoon.." ajji again stroke her head. "wo sab batein chor... sun agar antara ko ter pyar ka ehsaas dilana chahta hain to sab se pahele uss sey aise baat baat par jhagra nahin kar ne ka... phool si nazuk larki hain, ussey kitna bura lagta hoga jab tu ussey aise karwi batein karta hain.." ajji said. "arey ajji... aap ki wo phool si najuk larki na meri koi bhi baat ek baar mein nahin maan manti... Iss liye toh mera dimag sanak jata hain..." raghu said in irritation. "ye hi to teri galti hain chintu!! Tere issi adat ke liye to uss tak teri dil ki baat nahin pauch pata... Soch agar koi tujhse din raat jhagarta rahein, tujhe zabardasti apni baat manwa ta rahein... to kyat u kabhi soch sakta hain ki wo tujhse pyar karta hain?!" ajji said. Raghu scratched his head, "baat to tu sau taka sach kahe rahi hain ajji... Ajji kya karein yaar... tu too jaan ti hain mere ko ye sab nahinn atta... ajj tak kisi se sidhe mooh baat bhi nahi ki apun ne... aura b tu kahe raha hain ki miscall ko pyar ka wo kya... Haan wo ahesaas jataoon... kaise karega ye sab apun..." his confused voice made ajji smile more. Although he was one of the notorious ruffian of Mumbai city who was acclaimed for breaking the bones of so many people, his innocent heart always caused her to adore him. She knew when antara could see that innocence inside that so called stone, she wouldn't afford to fall for him too. "abey yere!! Tu pyar kar sakta hain to jata naii sakta?!!... ye sab sikhna naii parta hain re, khud be khud aa jata hain... tu bas uss bachi ka dhyan rakhna.. dekh na ussey kabhi kisi baat ki dukh na ho.. aur jis din ussey samajh aa jayega na tujhe khud samajh aa jayega... abtak to main tere ko samjhati rahi.. par agey jo karna hain na wo tujhe khud karna hain!! ye sab main nahin sikha sakta!! Samjha?!!" ajji said. "thik hain ajji!! Apun rakhta hain.. bole to good night!!" raghu said with a huge grin. "chal!!.." ajji said and the connection was cut. "hey bappa tera lakh lakh sukar hain!! akhir yere ko akal aa gaya..." ajji joined her hand and prayed to god. "ajji ye bhai uss yeri se pyar... kaise ho gaya yaar?! Ye log to jhagr jhagar ke apna sar phor dengey!!" machmach was still in trance. "abey gadhe,... tu phikar mat kar... bappa hain na... abhitak wohi khel khel rahe the agey bhi jo karna hain wohi karengey!!" ajji said with a huge grin.

Antara was tossing all over the bed. She couldn't have sound sleep. So many questions were hovering around her mind and she couldn't find the answer. It was making her so restless. The thing was also roaming on her mind that if she couldn't find the answer of those question then something really bad would happen. The nuclear device!! Whenever she was reminding about that explorer, her whole body was becoming numb in fear. She didn't know how many lives that bomb could take. She was having head ache on those days due to mental pressure. Her eyes were closed but sleep seemed far away from her. She tossed on the bed again when that mouth organ tune came into her ears floating. Suddenly her mind became calm. Each and every night he played that tune for her. She felt so relived again and a smile spread on her face. What a calm, soul touching and soothing sound. But there was something new in that tune. The intensity, which she never felt in that tune! It seemed like that sound was touching and caressing all over her. Soothing her!! antara cuddled on the pillow and her smile widened. "thx raghu!" she whispered and slowly dozed off into sleep.

Precap: "kahin tum bimar to nahin par gaye!!" antara worriedly touched his temple removing his bangs. Raghu just closed his eyes feeling her touch. His heart was racing like mad.

thx all for the wishesπŸ€— 

INDEX

chapter39=pg1,chapter40=pg5,chapter41=pg7,chapter42=page9

chapter43=pg11,chapter44=pg 13,chapter45=pg15,chapter46=pg19

chapter47=pg27,chapter48=pg34,chapter49=pg46,chapter50=pg50

chapter51=pg60,chapter52=pg63,chapter53=pg74,chapter54=pg76

chapter55=pg81,chapter56=pg87,chapter57=pg91,chapter58=pg94

chapter59=pg97,chapter60=pg98,chapter61=pg100,chapter62=pg103

chapter63=pg107,chapter64=pg109,chapter65=pg113,chapter66=pg115

chapter 67A,67B(last chapter)=pg 118

Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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BOLE TO TUJHE CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!! HAI..πŸ₯³
NEW NEW THEARD KE LIYE...πŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
MAST PARTY MANGTA APUN KO AAJ...πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜†
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congoo ri new thread
waiting for the chapter
 
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Congratulations for the new thread
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Well...well...well
A BIGGY..Big CONGRATULATIONS to you on your New Thread..😊
I loved Raghu n Ajji's conversation...Machmach as usual was funny πŸ˜†
On the whole it was something worth waiting for 😊Edited by PurpleSunset - 10 years ago
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Congratulations Ria...
New thread..
Chal ab jaldi se update kar...
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ria tujge mujhe n
sb rantaraian ko new thread k liye
bada wala congooo
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wonderful update ria 
congrats for the new thread