Originally posted by: ...Diala...Panchaali am truly amaze.. this is an awesome piece of work I cant believe my eyes you are such a great writer.. you describe things so smoothly wow 👏 sorry I dont have any picks here all were super connected for me to choose one from.. you covered both the love stories beautifully without letting either of them down.. proud of you dearie 😃
Originally posted by: panchaalis place with Dury aka Arpit n myself in place of Supriya with Karna aka Aham .. kya jodi bani thi .. maza aa gaya .. sacchiiSee if I was Bhanumati then Duryadhan would have to take Bheesma Pratigya, you know whatever name I have that never matters to me, I would ended up with my Aarya Karna only or else none😳 you can even invoke Vyas Dev Ji's Atma, he would also confirm you that I was a Karnali, and I am a Karnali, will be a Karnali forever 😳Sayanee we both know between us who is innocent and who is cunning, infact Mr.Cotswolds also got it, so no wonder you are the Bhanu here, I wrote Bhanu thinking about you, and Supriya's craving for Karna is JUST LIKE ME 😳
I am not fully insured yet so hesitate to take side of any Karnali. 😆But it appears that Sayanee has now abandoned her subtle ways and decided to come out in open against one of her strong opponent, souten.. Trying best to be Emma for dury. 😆
Originally posted by: Cotswolds
I am not fully insured yet so hesitate to take side of any Karnali. 😆But it appears that Sayanee has now abandoned her subtle ways and decided to come out in open against one of her strong opponent, souten.. Trying best to be Emma for dury. 😆
Originally posted by: AstoriaI know that I am terribly late but better late than never.Your OS is just sweet.Sweeter than anything.I always used to imagine Karna-Vrushali's love story.But Karna-Supriya's story is sweeter than honey.She was a Karnali like us,the first one ever.I salute her.But I liked Dury-Bhanumati too.Bhanumati is exactly as I used to imagine her.Panchaali dearest,Hats off to your OS👏.You are not only an excellent poet but an amazing writer too.
Last but not the least,even though I am a good friend,I am a terrible souten.
Originally posted by: Pooja--hello souten. I am so glad. we all love our aryaa. ❤️❤️❤️
the story is earth shattering. i had magnetic tears. I also want my araya.☺️you write so beautiful. 🤗
Originally posted by: --MimiGupta--OMG!! That's so cute..
I loved Bhanumati the most.She was like Emma of Jane Austene..Lovely OS
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