Start of Something beautiful #Tujhko jo paaya ( KR ) part 7-pg31.

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Heard the title somewhere?? Yeah right!! You did hear and that was my own SS !!๐Ÿ˜ƒ 
So here I start with a new part. New story of the series. 

Okay finally I am letting it out. GS story has gone beyond repair for me. It's not what I have planned and it got all messed up now.  Situations and my change in moods and the long time gap, really effected the story line. Now when I sit and read it I realize the logic and essence of the story which I wanted to bring in the story was lost long back. So , I am sorry but I can't continue it more and start hating my own story. May be it's good for you guys but for the things I planned it was horrible for me right now. Sorry once again but I can't continue it anymore. That will be unfinished story. I even don't find any logic and way to connect KR in that .. *Sigh* . So isse pehle mai usse aur kachra karun I am discontinuing that work. I am really sorry people. Hope I get your support as always for this too. 

But yeah don't worry , Deetha ki dimaag mei stories ki kami nahi ๐Ÿ˜‰

Here comes Tujhko jo paaya !!!โ˜บ๏ธ  I framed this story right after 3-4 months KriYaansh danced on this. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yeah nearly two years. I was pushing it and finally penning it down!! First part ittu sa hi hoga !!๐Ÿ˜†





Index :

Part 1 - Scroll down 

Part 2 - Page 7 

Part 3 - Page 13 

Part 4 - Page 17

Part 5 - Page 23 

Part 6 - Page 26

Part 7 - Page 31



-Deetha๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Part 1


"Swayam , tumhe lagta hai this will work?? " Kriya asked nervous.

" Kriya ?? " shouted her dad from downstairs.

"Swayam bye, papa bula rahe hai "she ended the call and deleted the call record. 

"haan papa aarahi hun!! Do minute "  and she ran down.

" Inme se choose karo jaldi. " He said in a rough tone.

"Ye kisliye?? " She asked eyeing the jewellery .

" Sagai keliye " her mom said never looking up . She made a face and glanced over the jewellery.

 Tumpe white bohut acha lagta hai pata hai, I just love that colour on you 

She smiled and looked around. A beautiful diamond set dragged her attention!! She grabbed it and caressed it.

" Ek aur lelo " her mom smiled finally.

She just nodded and selected another one . 

" Swayam..  " 

"Haan Kriya, kya hua?? " he asked tensed.

" kuch nahi jewellery keliye bulaya  , acha tum bolo koi risk nahi hoga na? " She asked again.

"Ohh meri pyaar bunny, ofcourse risk hai, infact full of risk , but we want to do it right?? " he asked.

"haan.. toh bolo kab aur kaha? " she asked impatient.

"Kal , subah 5 baje , tum apni saaman jitna kam ho utna kam rakho , it should not spoil our plans." 

" toh  mereliye kapde?? " she pouted. He rolled his eyes. Loving a rich girl , that too loving a girl who is so obsessed of her make up and stuff, it is very hard. 

"Kriya hum khareed lenge!! Remember mai bohut saara cash leke aaraha hun?? " he said.

"Oh yeah!! Aur haa , mai apni nayi do  necklace bhi leke aati hun. they are so beautiful, I can't leave them "she giggled.He had no option but laugh.

"Kriya why do you love those jewellery and stuff that much?? " he asked giggling.

" Swayam!! I love them, and no more questions on that "she was stern. 

"aur haa please no 5 or 6 inch heels. Please. Hum bhaag rahe hai, so better you prefer shoes ." he said

"Swayam mai itni bhi bewakoof nahi hun !! " she hissed.

"Okay love , bye. Jyaada baat kiya toh pakde jayenge " he said hearing footsteps.

"Bye , Love ya " Kriya chirped and ended the call. 

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Next day - 4:45 AM 


" You are before time " she grinned and messeged him.

" kya karun, socha tum dark circles ki darr mei abhi tak so rahi hogi ;) " he replied. 

She glared at him down from the window . He held his ears and she smiled. 

She tied her bag to a rope and let it down for him and then she too escaped. 

" Chalo, " She grabbed her shoulder  bag and both made their way out of their house safely.

But unfortunately was caught by one of the gaurds . As he ran in to inform Kriya and Swayam ran fast . 

" Subah bhaagne ka idea bura tha, koi taxi milna bhi mushkil " she pouted.

"Kriya stop thinking, please, we will accuse later. Now run!! " He grabbed her hand and both ran as fast as they can.

"Damn papa ko pata chal gaya shayad . " she shouted listening the siren of the police vans.

" Kriya , chillao mat, railway station abhi 15 min door pe hai, train sahi time pe depart karegi, We have to make it till there bas. " he stopped confused of the direction.

"  Uss taraf!! I swear , meri shopping maal ki raste mei aata hai station "she said .  He suddenly forgot all the tension.Isn't she too cute?? He looked at her and smiled.

"Mujhe kya dekh rahe ho?? chalo " she ran pulling him along with her.

"This is FUN!! " both laughed running faster.

" Seriously!! We should run often "she said. 

"tum paagal ho " he laughed hard.

"  arrey jyaada haso mat , we can't run fast." she warned him.

"yeah yeah , chalo!! " both turned and froze. 

"Dad !! " swayam whispered and both looked front frozen.

Dead. Plan flop .

Both said in hearts and went pale. 



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Chotu sa hai I know!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

But I love torturing you people!!๐Ÿ˜†

Reviews Please!!๐Ÿ˜ณ

-Deetha๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for u to upgrade
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nice start kriya n swayam running n kriya k papa running behind dem ๐Ÿ˜†
n bechare bhagte hue pakede gaye ๐Ÿคข
mast upgradeEdited by dollydua - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for u to update...!
please PM me when you have updated, love reading your OS, SS and FF, can't wait to read this one 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hvnt read ur tht work Gs..!!!
Wl be readng ths fr sure...
Post d epi soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
yipeee
i missed half the part of dilse re wen i joind
now i m going to loook forward to it
best gift deeetha di
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for update
have to read the 1st season too
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for d update

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
update it fast di
I wish u could have continued gs too
but no problem