Fan Fiction - Page 9

Posted: 18 years ago
come on please continue na you are going slower than a ant 
Posted: 18 years ago

my sincere apologies to all who have waited patiently for my story especially harshitha..... here it is...

 

the magical moment was broken by a thunderous applause by the guests. the new couple just smiled and retreated from the dance floor. some of them started requesting that Angad sing a song for them which slowly turned into a demand. so he had no choice but to sing a song but on the condition that Kripa would to have duet with him. he started humming a tune... and Kripa started singing...

 

Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
Oh, le liya dil, oh haai mera dil
Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
(Bahaar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein
Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein) - 2
Tum mere ho, ho tum mere ho
Aaj tum itna vaada karte jaana
Chura liya
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam

Ho, sajaaoonga lutkar bhi tere badan ki daali ko
Lahoo jigar ka doonga haseen labon ki laali ko
Sajaaoonga lutkar bhi tere badan ki daali ko
Lahoo jigar ka doonga haseen labon ki laali ko
Hai vafa kya is jahaan ko
Ek din dikhla doonga main deewana
Chura liya
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
Le liya dil, haai mera dil
Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Hm hm hm hm, hm hm hm hm

 

throughout the whole song their eye contact was never lost. Their audience were in awe. they finished the song and every was appreciative of their effort. they smiled and retreated to a corner to enjoy some time alone but many people wanted to talk to them and they were separated... they were pretty bored but tried to be as polite as possible and responded accordingly.

(got to stop here... got net connection prob)

Posted: 18 years ago

 

ur really gr8 girl and u rock.............btw who is ur bf, if u dont mind me asking šŸ˜³ (this is my fairy tale world where famous peepz dun get mobbed all the time unlike my bf now).

Posted: 18 years ago
Aww thx nite maiden.... as for yr qn, i just PM you....
Posted: 18 years ago
plz continue the story its too good yaar
Posted: 18 years ago

wow...very good...plz continue....

~sweta~

Posted: 18 years ago
please continue I can't keep waiting for your posts its tiring me to wait for so long 
Posted: 18 years ago
like i said, i wasnt able to log on for so long..... so now i am back and i will post the continuation soon....
Posted: 18 years ago
please continue fast sorry if I hurt you by my before post 

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