Chapter 5 *Choice*
Chapter 5 *Choice*
This content was originally posted by: jia03Nice story๐๐ผ
love the understanding between arjun & roshni...
This content was originally posted by: Godly_Affectionyippee me first..awesome update dear
loved itwaiting for nxt partRosh leaves the house๐ญ๐ญwaitng to se riya n Arjun's confrontation
This content was originally posted by: jayprabuAwesome update. I like the way how you are taking the story. Love and marriage both are complicated. You have portrayed Roshini's character very well. Eager to read your next update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.
This content was originally posted by: miss_preciousI have been crying ever since I have read your update
Ur roshni and arjun scene was absolutely spot on
It was perfect... Her love, his commitment... And the situation that they are in... This made me cry and I have been crying since...
Please update soon, I know arjun loves Riya but you write some off the best arjun roshni scenes so please do write more x
This content was originally posted by: raja_ki_raniyou were absolutely right I needed tissues after I finished reading the part. itsso sad. you have written arjun and roshni's scene so well. arjun's guilt of not being able to be a good husband and roshni's guilt of coming between arjun and riya and their sadness everything is so perfect * I think I need another tissue* precap seems interesting please please update soon I will be waiting eagerly
again the update was wonderful but the precap seems even more interesting, roshni leaving arjun'shouse hmmm wonder how arjun will react.
This content was originally posted by: rimi_invisibleI really wanna discourage you but its impossible...such a brilliant update you gave...
The way you gave roshni's mindset...awesome...๐
she knew about arjun's love but still kept herself attached to him..she loved him...
arjun's pain and longing...hats off girl...
yes both are feeling guilty about the fact that both cant fulfil their duties in their bond of marriage...but here none could be blamed...
may be a part of arjun could be,when he had decided to marry roshni he should have also decided to love her..leaving his past behind...though i know he tried and failed...
roshni leaving arjun's house and the way arjun wanna stop her brilliant..just two times laila??
If i write a hundred times i wont come close to you girl...shattering of buttons...hungry wala love making and the whole scene was ๐ณThe best part I liked was though riya came back in his life and he is still thinks he loves her,hedidnt leave or betray roshni...from the beginning he had informed her and now too he did tell her everything...thats called a MAN...
continue soon...now i wanna know riya's reaction...
thanks for pm
This content was originally posted by: kunchubeautiful update
you have set Arjun's mind set so wonderfully.Loved the way how Roshni reacted to himBut then I think his love for Riya wont be replaced by his dedication to RoshniLets see what you have planned
This content was originally posted by: MeselfI am so sorry sweetie; but by now you must have known that I am a lazy lass!! This is one classic example of a broken twisted love story!!!! One major twisted game play of what one might call aa fate and bam!!! Three lives are lost into chasm. Terrible!! As of now I sympathise with Arjun. He is man torn between his wife whom he cares about madly and his love without whom survival seems difficult! This is a catch 22 situation. He wishes to have his cake and eat it too...God only knows what's next!! P.S. I am really sorry I thought I had edited my previous comment!
This update is dedicated to my dearies: Deboshree , Atisha, & Helna di. Your messages encouraged me a lot. Thank you for supporting me, guiding me & also for scolding me๐
And a special Thank you those, who is still following this story after what I did to Riya's character
I have replied to your comments above. Do have a look if interested.
Chapter 7 "Broken"
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I know it was short, I am really sorry.
I am dulling Ashmara's character due to obvious reasons.& I have changed the storyline a bit. I hope you guyz will like it.๐
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