First, sorry for being so late to comment on this thread.
Actually I was busy and read this story from the start.
this is an wonderful writing on Arjun-Roshni's emotions, love and friendship. & you've done it beautifully.
At the beginning you started with the stormy environment and Roshni's turmoil with her married life. her thoughts was beautifully written. then came up Arjun and her mutual friendship, how she can read that man like an open book. In spite of knowing Arjun loves someone else she tried to hold onto her marriage and finally she gave up thinking she was hurting Arjun by separating him from his love. May be she also thought Arjun just doing his duty towards her as a husband, not as the man who loves her.
Arjun made a choice at the first day his love proposal misfired, instead of telling Rosh the truth, he just gave her an affirmation to her love. He chose her friendship over his love. Or may be he chose his first love over his attraction?? You know the best, I guess!! but this guy didn't hide anything from Rosh, he even tried to get rid of Ashmara's memories...but in this process, he made his wife feel insecure...when he realized that and tried to convince her, it again gave her some wrong signal & the result is, Rosh made her mind up and left him.
the whole background story gave us our rough, reckless guy. Now he gonna bring his wife back...(he will na??) but my question is, Is it gonna easy for him? Will that lady gonna understand him this time? I'll wait for my answers.
Do continue...& thanks for PM.
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