Arni SS *Seven sacred vows*Epilogue...Coming soon - Page 4

Posted: 10 years ago

raja_ki_rani,  Aisha1998,  Beboluvshaleen,  rinku95,  Thank you for liking it. But I guess a comment won't hurt either๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by miss_precious


Ur right... It was a short update!

If I remember correctly one year ago was not the first time he made love to her right? Or have u changed the storyline that the first time they made love to each other... Out of guilt she left him

Thanks for the pm and please update soon x



No. That was not the first time, & That has nothing to do Roshni leaving Arjun. 

Originally posted by _lovergirl101_


Loved it! Great storyline so far! ๐Ÿ‘
Does arjun realise he loves Roshni??
Thanks for the pm...
Please continue soon! ๐Ÿ˜Š 

P.S: it's so funny how both our first ffs are completely the opposite of each other!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thank you for reading it.
You have to wait & read to know about it๐Ÿ˜‰
Yup. I noticed๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by Devangana


Read all the parts in one go.  Loved it Continue soon.  Beautifully written

Thank you & welcome here๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by jayprabu


Nice update. You have taken a year leap. You have nicely expressed state of Arjun after Roshini left. Eager to res d next update. Thanks for the pm and continue soon.

Yes, I have taken a leaf. Though it was not planned before but I am changing storyline a bit.
Thankyou. I am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by naina25


great...story๐Ÿ˜Š
con soon๐Ÿ˜Š

Thank you & welcome here.

Originally posted by kunchu


Chotu sa... but interesting update
he is missing her for 1 year and now lets see how he is going to keep it up

Thankyou di (Hope I can call you that) for liking it. 
Wait & Read to know๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by Shamsad1607


First, sorry for being so late to comment on this thread.
Actually I was busy and read this story from the start.
this is an wonderful writing on Arjun-Roshni's emotions, love and friendship. & you've done it beautifully.
At the beginning you started with the stormy environment and Roshni's turmoil with her married life. her thoughts was beautifully written. then came up Arjun and her mutual friendship, how she can read that man like an open book. In spite of knowing Arjun loves someone else she tried to hold onto her marriage and finally she gave up thinking she was hurting Arjun by separating him from his love. May be she also thought Arjun just doing his duty towards her as a husband, not as the man who loves her.
Arjun made a choice at the first day his love proposal misfired, instead of telling Rosh the truth, he just gave her an affirmation to her love. He chose her friendship over his love. Or may be he chose his first love over his attraction?? You know the best, I guess!! but this guy didn't hide anything from Rosh, he even tried to get rid of Ashmara's memories...but in this process, he made his wife feel insecure...when he realized that and tried to convince her, it again gave her some wrong signal & the result is, Rosh made her mind up and left him.

the whole background story gave us our rough, reckless guy. Now he gonna bring his wife back...(he will na??) but my question is, Is it gonna easy for him? Will that lady gonna understand him this time? I'll wait for my answers.

Do continue...& thanks for PM.

 
Wow. It's like I am reading a summary of my own story.
Felling good actually. Thank you for such a big comment. Means alot.
@Bold, Nope, sorry, but it is not true/fact. What he had for Roshni was just friendship wala Love, nothing else. 
I will make sure he gets his wife back, but not so easily๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by Godly_Affection


awesome update dear
loved it
dream was scary
waiting for roshni to come back
continu soon 
thankx for pm

 
Thank you.
I know๐Ÿ˜†
Roshni will take her time to come back.

Originally posted by rimi_invisible


chotu update...but nice one...(why you mislead me๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก ,sazaa milegi..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰)

so its a year after roshni left...and arjun is hallucinating ashmara in roshni's place...๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข

he is troubled...his state of mind could be understood...and you potrayed well..

sam found roshni...but will arjun be able to get her back??

nd what about ashmara??where is she??what happened a year back with the three??

wanna know...

cotinue soon...thanks for pm

I didn't mislead you. How can you not hate Roshni leaving Arjun, & the broken state of our ACP.๐Ÿ˜ฒ
It was not hallucinating,  it was a dream.๐Ÿ˜•
Yes, he will get her back, but after passing some obstacles.
More about Ashmara in next or coming updates.

Originally posted by jia03


Lovely updateโค๏ธ

Thank you for liking it๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 8 "Regret? May be" 

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Read the note below
Edited by laila1994 - 9 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
If you want PM for updates, please like the post on first page & buddy me.
PM for next part will be sent to those who will comment. 
I will update it in two or three days, You know what you have to do.๐Ÿ˜ˆ
Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely!! But a bit short! ๐Ÿ‘ Love Roshni's undying love for arjun. Continue soon...
by the way, did u get my pm? ๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 10 years ago
Superb
Roshni is so kind
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by laila1994


<font size="3">Chapter 8 "Regret? May be"</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">A beautiful woman was makinga painting of a family, She drew a man with long height, Black eyes, Perfect M shaped lips, and a cut on his left eyebrow. Then she painted two kids, a girl and a boy, on the canvas, right next to the man. Then she was about to draw a woman, may be man's wife, but she stopped, she looked at the painting, she just made, for a brief time with a lost look, then she started drawing the woman's face, She didn't realize she was just making patterns in the air by her brush until a little girl came running to her to show the painting, she made of a rainbow.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">"Mene painting banayi,Kesihai?" A four year old girl asked in excitement.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">"Buhut achi hai, bilkul apki tarha."</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">
</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">"Thankyou. woh painting apne banayihai,Rosh-di?"She asked pointing at the painting,Roshni just made.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">"Haan, par abhicomplete nahi hai"Roshni answered for the girl, who ran away to her friends after giving a last look at her teacher.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">Roshi looked at the painting again, a tear dropped out of her eyes, she wiped it before anybody could see it. But her eyes never stopped staring at the empty place on the canvas, where she wanted to draw herself. But maybe it was not her place after all.</font></font>

<table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr><td>
<font><font color="#ff0000"><font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Rabba mere </font>ishq kisi ko<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif"></font>
Aise na tadpaye<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">... Hoy</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Dil ki baat rahe is dil mein,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Hothon tak na aaye,</font>
Na aaye<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Tujhe yaad na meri aayee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Kisi se ab kya kehna</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Tujhe yaad na meri aayee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Kisi se ab kya kehna</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Dil </font>roya<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif"> ki ankh bhar aayee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Dil </font>roya<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif"> ki ankh bhar aayee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Kisi se ab kya kehna</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">She still loved that man as much as she had
before he broke the news that he lovedsomeoneelse.Shestill
wanted him to be happy. She still cared about him. If he would behappierwith someone else rather than her, that was his
choice. She realized at that moment that if you truly love someone, you want
them to be happy, you want the best for them even if that means not being with
you.
</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Tujhe har khushi de di</font><font color="#ff0000">
Labon ki hansi de di
Zulfon ki ghata lehraayee
Paigaam wafa ke laayee
Tune acchhi preet nibhayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna

Wo chand mere ghar-aangan
Ab to aayeega
Tere soone is aanchal ko
Wo bhar jaayega
Teri kar di god bharaayee,
Teri kar di god bharaayee,</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Kisi se ab kya kehna
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
</font><font color="#ff0000">Kisi se ab kya kehna</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Roshnisettled herself on the rock at the corner of the playground. She was bored. She looked around, she loved watching children playing. She always wanted to be a mother. And according to the doctors she was capable too. But maybe it was not in her luck. She used to thinkmaybe a child would make their bond stronger as all the old lady says. But maybe it was not in herluckeither.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Khata ho gayi mujhse
Kaha kuch nahin tumse
Ikrar jo tum kar paate
To door kabhi na jaate
Koi samjhe na peer parayee
Koi samjhe na peer parayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
</font>
<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">She knew, She was unconditionally in love her her ex-husband, She wanted him to be happy, Even if it means leaving him forever. She had decided to leave him when she first realizes his love for Ashmara, She wanted to free him from their marriage, And when Asmara finally got back, she did what she intended to do. That was not out of guilt, that was for her unconditional love for him.</font></font></td></tr></table>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2" color="#993366">*************************************************************</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2" color="#993366">Read the note below</font></font>

Posted: 10 years ago
u make me cry dear...superb updte...and this song is my most favourite one and ful song along with the scene was in front of me during i was reading this story...again loved it...plz continue it soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update. I think nobody can better explain unconditional love with a way you have explained with Roshini's character. She loves him immensely and wants him to be happy always, such a beautiful and selfless soul. The song you chose to go with update was very apt . I loved it very much. Will be waiting for your next update. Thanks for the pm.
Posted: 10 years ago
Who are the two kids she drew? Was that her dream
Can't wait for arjun to meet rosh

Please update soon x
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update laila...๐Ÿ˜ณ

a complete part on Roshni...the lady who makes me go gaga over her everytime...๐Ÿ˜›

the personality,the elegance she bored was depicted beautifully by you...you used the resources too well..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

the painting,then her hesitance,her dream and longing...beautiful...

I have a few questions..will pm you later..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

havnt checked your pm yet...but i am stalking this story big time...i am loving it...

continue soon...nd thanks for the pm..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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