Reasonable write up with good points but some issues not addressed:
E.g
-Rapists are a MINORITY of men, their problem needs addressing one should not generalise too much and paint it as a 'male indian' issue, Its more complicated.
-Every country in the world has rape and child rape cases constantly, your USA is no exception. nowhere has solved the issue well
-you say patriarchal systems are the worst culprit, what about the effect of weak ineffective policing/justice systems in India and my top reason: The effect of po*nography especially on computers/online and also 'sexing up' seen in Tv and films trying to look cool/modernised.