Baldev FF-Baazigar anniversary pt 24 pg 65 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Sonu, wow what a start!! Matched with title..
Baldev is such an intenively emotional & facinating character.. Its great to see hw delectably you and some writers are exploring his emotional side.. story is on interesting track.. Good going.. :)
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Originally posted by: monumolu

Sonu zabardast starting hai teri ss ki... Loved the khayal sher... Aur sach bata iss mein Veera to Ballu ko reject kiya hai na...

Han
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Posted: 10 years ago
No chappals shukr😆
@Tehsina..u want him that bad..ok u get him..intense night.oh..ok ill write it
And all others love u lots..he's going to get super kameena n d following updates😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: overactor

No chappals shukr😆

@Tehsina..u want him that bad..ok u get him..intense night.oh..ok ill write it
And all others love u lots..he's going to get super kameena n d following updates😕



Oh yes!!!Yes yes yes Sonu!!!😃Jhappiyas!!!🤗Make him bad!Anyways Ranvi's too much goodness and sweetness is givn me diabetes!I need a bad 🤬😈Ballu reprive yaar!😃😆
  Badtammez dil Badtameez dil maney na maney na!!!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ



Oh yes!!!Yes yes yes Sonu!!!😃Jhappiyas!!!🤗Make him bad!Anyways Ranvi's too much goodness and sweetness is givn me diabetes!I need a bad 🤬😈Ballu reprive yaar!😃😆
  Badtammez dil Badtameez dil maney na maney na!!!😉

I wanted bad 🤬 ballu too..so i had to write this..he would become srk from darr bazigar anjam and in a new style..
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Posted: 10 years ago
i'm sure sonu,ballu will definitely say these line in the oap 2,u have written it brilliantly,believe me i could imagine him giving those dialogues 2 veera'n ranvi 'n his blood hot eyes scary... 
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice...eagerly waiting for update👏
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Baazigar
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He was unable to say anything else..he pushed Ranvi..and left.

He burst into his house..he ignored Bansuri who was calling him for 

breakfast and went straight into his room...

He threw his pillows on the floor and pulled his own hair

Baldev; qn ye bhootni mera peecha nhi chadti qn?nafrat mujhe us 

se..bht ziada nafrat...aur is pure pind se..sab khatam krdunga me..sb 

tehes nehes kr dunga

He opened his wallet..and stared at her photograph..

Baldev; tujhe to bht bura haraonga veera..tujhpe apna dil haara ab 

tujhe hara k dil cheena he wapas tujhse...

he took the photograph out and lit it with his lighter...his heart 

ached bad..he wanted to burn himself along with the photo..but he 

was already burning in pain..and she was not..

He felt the photo burning to ashes..and some how..his heart was 

gone along with the photo..burned to ashes..he got some tears in his 

eyes..

Baldev; teri tasweer k sath mera dil bhi khaq hogya.

he swallowed hard..and threw the ashes into he dustbin..

He left the room again..Bansuri could see the pain in his eyes..but 

she was helpless.

Baggi saw him coming.

Jaggi; paaji..thodi thand rkho..

Baldev; thand..koi thand nhi..

he got into his jeep..baggi were getting in too

Baldev; menu akela chad do kuch waqt k liye..

he drove off..baggi exchanged wierd looks.

He kept on driving..emotions all over him..alot had happened..he 

lost the elections..no1 trusted him..he lost respect..he lost his 

father's support..and to top it all..he lost in love...the thing that 

mattered the most right now but what he didn't want to believe..he 

wanted to throw the blame on the elections and the pind for his 

sufferings...though he knew..the only reason to his sufferings 

was...her...and he couldn't take it..

He stopped and took a deep breath..Dalbeer was passing by with 

some bamboo sticks..Baldev was irked with his face..he moved his 

car and passed by him in full speed..Dalbeer lost balance and fell..

Dalbeer; ye baldev hum sb ko maar kr hi dam lega

Baldev was roaming around the pind..pulling the ropes on which 

clothes hanged..destroying stuff..he was all mad..and then he came 

across two kids..one was playing with a video game and the girl was 

trying to take it from him.
He was reminded of her again..he got of the jeep and grapped a 

stick from his jeep..and marched towards the pritampura market..

the way he walked..it scared everyone..he walked in 

anger..completely filled with anger from top to bottom..and then he 

started smashing the stalls one by one..people started running...and 

then someone grapped his feet, he looked down..a small boy was 

panting.

Boy; paaji..e dukan na todo..hum bht gareeb hen..

he suddenly felt something ache..was it his burnt heart...he took a 

deep breath...and then realized that he was turning into a beast..the 

people deserved his hatred but certainly not this..especially when 

the cause of his pain was some1 else..
he dropped his stick and then sat down...and took out some money 

that he offered to the boy

Baldev; e le..aur baqi jis kisi da bhi nuqsan hua he..kehna mere se le 

len aa k..

the boy took the money and nodded..
he walked away..

He went back to his jeep and then just sat in it lost in thoughts..