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Because You Are Already Claimed LAST part 32 NEW UPDATEDEd - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
great going...πŸ‘pls continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz update soon its Intresting Very Intresting... πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
'Couz u r already claimed'

Part 2 
here long one guys...

Beep beep...

Sanyu was disturbed by the alram clock...but suddenly some one poured a bukket full of water on her face..she got up..she was shivering from cold...

Sanyu-yeh thumne kya kiya...??
Randhir-chillav math... maharani nahi ho thum...chalo utto...
Sanyu-its jzt 4am...
Randhir-Yess...u have a special work...
Sanyu-work...??
Randhir-Haan...sabh ka kapada press karo...exactly 6am muje bed coffee chahi hai...sirf muje nahi sabhko...even for our servents...
Sanyu-servents...??
Randhir-Haan kyun ki thumari okaad hamare ghar ki servents se bhi kamm hai...and after meri nahaneka inthzam karna.. bed coffee..sabh keliye breakfast banana...then yeh sabh karne ke baath meri kamre main aana...and dont even dare to sleep now..get down to work...

He dozed off...poor Sanyu got up and picked his clothes and also other's renuka,rd's Dad, sister reehu.. And pressed... Then she made her way to the kitchen..

Servent 1- yehi yeh iss ghar ki nayi bahu...
Servent 2- bahu nahi...nayi kaamvali...
1-Haan..kya bekar ki zindhgi hai isska..bechari...
2-lekhin phir bhi..hame tho chutti milgaya...
1-patha nahi isski haalath kya hogi...haaahaaa...

After hearing this Sanyu eyes were moist...

'kya chalraha hai yaha...izzad se baath karo bhahu hai iss ghar ki...'

Sanyu-shanky khaka aap...??
Shanky-beti thum ithni subhe subhe yaha...beti thum jao...main dekhlungi...
Sanyu-nahi khaka..muje karne dhijiye...varna Randhir gussa hojayega...

Shanky khaka was the only one she had to share her feelings...atlest khaka cared her...

She prepared the coffee for him and also others...and served everyone and came to her hubby's room...

Sanyu-Randhir... Randhir...
Randhir-kyyyaaa hai sanyuuu...
Sanyu-coffee..
Randhir-vaha tabel pe rakho...

She kept it on the table and stept forward towards the door...suddenly he got her wrist and pulled against him...

Sanyu-wats this Randhir??

He held her cheeks tightly...

Randhir-oh baby...u hve no right to question me got tht...

Sanyu-Wat u want??
Randhir-I dnt need coffee...
Sanyu-then??
Randhir-I want honey...
Sanyu-haaan...!!

She struggled to get out of his arms...but no use...he was continuously starring at her rosy lips...

Sanyu-Randhir chodo muje...muje jaana hai..
Randhir-ithni jaldhi nayi...

Randhir pinched at her curve of her belly...she gasped he took this advantage and kissed her...he kissed her passionately...he trusted his tongue... "oh God she taste awsome.." he tightend his grip on her...he kissed with several angles...but she was crying...poor soul wat she can do?? He leaved her lips leaving her breathless...he claimed her neck...he was continuously giving her lovebites on her neck...suddenly he remembered smethng...and pushed her on the floor..she was hitted by the table hardly...but she got up...


Sanyu-Awww...
Randhir-apni naaatak bandh karo.aur jao...sabh keliye naastha banao...

Sanyu got up...she wipped her tears and went down to prepare the breakfast...bloody hell their house no mansion...had several rules...for every single person wants different kind of food...poor Sanyu did not had any other option and prepared all items...servents were instructed not to help her by Mrs Renuka shekhawat...

All the king,queens came down to have food...
She herself served them...

Reehu-bhai...aaj aalina aari hai...
Randhir-Haan ...wo log ekk Maine keliye hamare saath rehenewale hai...
Renuka-usski puri family bhi aari hai.. 
Mr.shekhawat-we have to take care of them...

SPLASH!!!

Reehu splashed juice on sanyu's face...

Reehu-thume samaj main nahi aatha...
Sanyu-Maine kya kiya??
Reehu-I asked u orange juice not mango...
Sanyu-I am sorry (crying)
Reehu-aaj pura dinn karabh hogai...

THAAAP!!!

Randhir anger was in clouds he slaped Sanyu...holding her hairs tightly..

Randhir-meri behien ko jo chahi hai..thuje wo Dena padega...nahi tho main Thume zindha maardunga...

Renuka-leave her Randhir...

Sanyu run towards his room and cried badly..

Sanyu-maaa main yaha nahi rehesakthi...baabhi..

She remembered her past...

Sanyu-baabi...reethu babhi kaha hai aap...??
Reethu-kya hai sanyukta...
Sanyu-aaj naa muje ekk ladke ne propose kiya..
Rethu-thumne kya kaha??
Sanyu-badi attitude se naa karrdi...
Reethu-accha kyun? Thume tho wo ladka pasandh tha naa
Sanyu-actully Maine apni best frnd se promise kiya tha ki main uss ladke ko chod dungi...wo usse pyar karthi hai issliye..
Reethu-muje bhi ekk promise karoge??
Sanyu-aap bina promise ke bhi poochoginaa..thabhi doongi..
Reethu-meri bhai se shadhi karoge??
Sanyu-kya!!! Aap bhi naa..main aur randhir kabhi nahi...
Reethu-nahi thumne muje promise kiye ho..
Sanyu-nooo...

"SANYUKTA...SANYUKTA..."

She came back to present..
Randhir eyes were red...

Randhir-jao meri tie lekhar aav..

Sanyu herself tied the tie...

He slowly held her waist tightly...

Sanyu-chodo muje...
Randhir-shut up...

He leand for the kiss..He kissed her passionately...she was broken she did not respond.  He bit her lower lip and she gasped..he kissed her deeply...and suddenly pushed her aside...and went outside...

She camedown..no food left for her...she decided to take afternoon...and went to kitchen to prepare lunch...

Shanky-beti thumne kuch nahi kaaya..??
Sanyu-koi baath nahi...baadme kaalungi khaka.

Again same disaster for her... drama queen Reehu insulted her and bloody servents consumed all the food not even keeping a single roti for her...

Poor soul not hvng other options..waited for ni8...

Ni8... 
All bloody shekhawat family having food..Sanyu was serving them..

Ting...tong...

Sanyu opend the door...

Reehu-alina...!!

They both hugged...

Alina and her dad,mom sat down to hve dinner...

Reehu-sanyukta dikhtha nahi hai...serve her...
Alina-is she sanyukta..??.your New slave..haahaa
Randhir-Yess darling...sanyukta meet my fiancee aalina...

Sanyu was in shock...

Randhir-shock lagi?? Yess she is my fiancee..Haan..thum sirf meri slave ho thts it...or nothing else...

All laughed... A tear dropped from her eyes...

Randhir-mom main ekk hafthe keliye..Bangalore jaraha hoon..business meeting keliye...
Reehu-Haan bhai thum joa..dnt worry thumari slave ko main acchi thara se dekhungi...
Aalina-abh main bhi aagayi hoon...dnt worry dear...
Mr.shekhawat-thumara bhai kabh aaraha hai??
Aalina-ekk hafte ke baad uncle...

CHAAP!!!

Randhir found Sanyu on floor...she was unconscious...she was pale he took her in his arms.. And placed her on his bed...

Randhir-pathanayi kithni naatak karthi hai...??
Shanky-randhir baba..essa math kaho..subhe se kuch nahi kahi hai...
Randhir-kuch nahi kaayi hai mathlabh...??!!!yaha pe khane keliye kamm tho nahi hai...
Shanky-koi kuch denge thabh naa.. Patha nahi aaur kya kya hoga iske saath...
Randhir-aap jaaker khana lekher aayi hai...

Shanky khaka brought the food...Randhir sprinkled the water on her face..she got up..randhir himself spooned the food for her...

Only she can see was love for her in his eyes...

Randhir-thumari ekk galthi ne yeh sabh karrvara ha hai...
Sanyu-ran..randhir...
Randhir-Chup chap so jao...

Midnight.. 

Sanyu was sleeping peacefully...randhir was admiring his sleeping beauty.. 

Randhir-thumne essa kyun kiya...??yeh sabh thumari vajese sirf thumari vajese...

Nxt day randhir leaved to banglore...leaving poor soul alone in his monster house...

Every day randhir was thinking abt sanyukta... He was unknowingly used to look at her pictures... His heart was smewhr was diying to see her...but the revenge part...destroyed his feelings for her...

Finally  the last day...he was cmng back to his sanyu...he was unknowingly excited to see her..

Midnight 1am
 Ting tong...

Reehu-bhai...aap aagaye!!!
Randhir-thum?? Abh thak soi nahi..kaha hai wo...
Reehu-Haan..bass esse hi...thumari slave so rahi hogi...
Randhir-usski ithni himmath...
Reehu-abh phirse Rona dhona...plz..kall usski class le...
Randhir-teek hai sojao...


Randhir was disappointed...he was angry...his eyes were red.. He had two resons to be angry..1.not opning the door and slept. 2.making his sister sleepless...
Now he was ready to take revenge...

He opened the door angrily...and closed it..but seeing his sleeping beauty who was sleeping peacefully...he forgot  all his anger...he jzt admired her... He came closser more closser..his eyes fell on her belly(couz she weard a Saree) her perfect curve made him crazy..he felt to touch tht...no kiss that...he was about to touch but something stunned him...

he looked at her belly carefully...only red marks are seen..he looked her innocent face..her eyes were swallowed...dark circles perfectly seen.. Her cheeks had a fingers Mark and were RED... 

She looked as someone beated her black and blue... His eyes fell on her right hand thank God perfectly alright...but after seeing her left hand he was motionless and lifeless..her left hand was completely BURNT... 

Unknowingly he toched her legs... She moaned with pain..yet she was sleeping... 

He slowly moved up her Saree...only he can see was full of boils on her legs as if someone poured hot water on her legs...

He got back..he was lifeless he imagined the pain she sufferd...

And again he looked at her now he had no strength..he looked at her foot..her below the foot he can only see...her both the foot were burnt...



My cousin cried I dnt knw wat phobia she have :-( :'(
Cmnt plz...














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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update 
sanyu's condition was heart wrenching😭😭
but why is randhir taking revenge fro sanyu???
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..loved it nd cried...
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the ending was superb but i'm curious ! Why is Randhir doing so ? And her sister reehu is the carbon copy of Vidhushi...
But what has happened that Randhir is taking revenge ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
ME 2 CRIED..😭

BUT PLZ UDATE SOON...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really good continue soon dr..if u can pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
This would make anyone cry...it's not your cousins' fault.
Love the concept. I can't wait to read on...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh My goD!!!!!!!!  Its not ur cousins fault...Update soon...