Kisha & Rahi FF *who's there?*part-4 pg11 - Page 4

Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Stavan sorry I am late. But i loved the concept and the cs a lot.
Coming to this part it was superb. Enjoyed it a lot. Starting wid kisha romance and panchi teasing. Then kd's domestic violence dialouge. But my fav part was rv kissing kd in his sleep and saying i love you moti. Hayye mast tha. Hoping nxt time panchi hi ho warna bechara dukhi ho jayega. Then the end u guyz are cheating on us... Lol. Do continue soon. M eagerly waiting..
Posted: 10 years ago
I sooo loved it Stavan
Amazing update
Thank u so much 4 d pm
Continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by KDreamer


Stavan mere bhai...isko dhik nahi...awesome bolte hai...
Perfect balance of romance ,comedy,friendship,suspense...
It was in one wrd "PERFECT"
Loved it...
Loved.it...
thanks a lot shatz
i am glad u like it
thanks a ton for appreciating it😃
 
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by tinaswea


Another wonderful OS from ew !
Loved it! ðŸ˜Š
Uh are an amazing writer! I am short of words! It was just perfect! 
Keep writing and entertaining us!😛
Tina
thanks. a lot tina
i am glad u like it means a lot
i will surely cont soon
thanks
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sneha02


Stavan brilliant start...
M still laughing trust me..
All the buddies together sharing a room wow...
N Panchi Kiya leg pulling Nonu Kd...fun read...
KD n RV were soo cute...aweee
Loved it yaa...
 
Waiting anxiously for the next
Thanks for this...
thanks a lot neha
i am glad u liked it
kiyan pulling ransh's leg 😆
ransh bromance😉
i will write next part soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by s2singh


STAVAN I AM GOING CRAZY

BlockBuster dhamakedar FF  entry...mujhe words nahi mil rahe hai...kya FF hai yaar...

I wish Rahi aur Kisha ka ek New serial aaye bilkul is FF ki tarah, we should mail it to CV's...itne zyada TRP milenge na...ki CV's pagal ho jayenge...

i loved every bit of it - Kisha morning romance ðŸ˜³ dying to see that in real
Ransh per domestic violence shadi ke baad was hilarious🤣 
Ransh - Bromance
Kiyan - Bond

Loved it yaar stavan, sachi aaj dil Khush ho gaya mera...
thanks a lot smriti di
i am glad u like it
thanks for appreciating
kash cvs aisa kuch dikha de
i know bechare ransh😆
and kisha romance evergreen hai😉
i will cont soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by anjali1805


Hey Stavan sorry I am late. But i loved the concept and the cs a lot.
Coming to this part it was superb. Enjoyed it a lot. Starting wid kisha romance and panchi teasing. Then kd's domestic violence dialouge. But my fav part was rv kissing kd in his sleep and saying i love you moti. Hayye mast tha. Hoping nxt time panchi hi ho warna bechara dukhi ho jayega. Then the end u guyz are cheating on us... Lol. Do continue soon. M eagerly waiting..
its okay anjali
I am glad u like it
thanks for appreciating
yup ransh cheating on kiyan😉
next part rahi & kisha date😳
will update soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by luv_u_Bharti


I sooo loved it Stavan
Amazing update
Thank u so much 4 d pm
Continue soon
thanks a lot khushi
I am glad u like it
u r welcome
will surely continue soon😃
Posted: 10 years ago
PART-2
 
(IN MUMBAI)
Kisha and rahi were sitting in the living room discussing about how to spend Sunday or rather u can say girls are discussing .
Ransh have already decided but their girlfriends are too busy in discussing to listen .
Kiya: panchi hum na koi romantic movie dekhte hai ya phir shopping wat say.
Panchi : shopping aur waise bhi abc mall main sale hain .
Kiya: cool abhi chalte hain ..
Finally Ranveer decided to interrupt .
rv: hang on ladies . Panchi see movie tickets hum movie dekhne jaa rahe hain .
Panchi: nonu yeh toh sirf 2 tickets hain . Kiya aur kd ki tickets.
Kd: panchi tumhari bff ko aaj main apne paas rakhna chahta hun so any probs .
Kiya: wat but mere aur panchi ke shopping plan ka kya hoga?
saying this she pouted like a child . Panchi too pouted .
ransh exchanged they are impossible looks with eachother .
ransh: girls hum dono apni gf ke sath time spend karna chahte hain so get ready . Plzz
Kiyan uninterestedly went to room to change .
Rv: kd mujhe na doubt ho raha hain ki in dono ke bich kuch chal raha hain . Ab toh mujhe kiya se jealousy ho rahi hain .
He sounded so serious that Kd decided to check his expression that is he really serious and found it serious too.
Kd: Ranveer just shut it okay . (murmured) yeh teeno milkar na kisi din mera murder kar denge .
rv: kd kuch kaha kya tumne ??
Kd: nahi bas god ko thanx kar raha tha ki tum teeno ko meri life main bhej diya .
rv : awww how sweet kd..
Girls came out . And guys lead them to parking . Rahi went to see a movie while kisha went to beach .
(AT THEATER)
Panchi: nonu main popcorn khaungi, chips and coke .
Rv: okay mam me Ranveer shergill at ur service .
after watching movie Ranveer took panchi to her fav icecrem shop. Panchi was eating icecream while Ranveer was just stairing at her . Panchi noticed this .
panchi: nonu tum icecream nahi khaogey ..
Ranveer cleaned icecream which was on panchi's cheek and than said : meri fav icecream toh tum ho motii
saying this he kissed her cheeks and than softly gave peck on her lips ..
unknown to them all these was captured by someone
that person was following them and taking pictures . He clicked another picture and there was a small flash . Ranveer seemed to notice that . He looked here and there trying to find out source . Panchi noticed this and asked: nonu kya hua??
Rv: ahh moti woh kuch nahi aise hi. Tum ek aur icecream logi
Panchi: naki aur puch puch .
Rv bought another icecream but still was suspicious .
(AT BEACH)
Kd was standing with his jeans folded and enjoying the sunset.
Kiya looked at kd he was engrossed in watching sunset so she decided to play a prank. After a while there was a big splash and kd was soaked in water and credit goes to kiya gujral.
Kd: chicklet u r so gonna pay for this .
Kiya was about to run but kd held her from back and started tickling her . Kiya was laughing uncontrolably .
kiya: k..d... Ahh.. St..op..i..t.
Kd: no ways ...
After sometime kd stopped and turned kiya around so that they were face to face . He than removed hair which were on her face and kisses her forehead . Than they were walking towards a food stall .
some person was following them too since the time they had reached the beach . He was taking their photos too . And now he was following them . Kiya felt that
Kiya: kd I think someone is following us .
Kd looked around but found noone .
Kd: kiya itna crowd hain isliye aisa lag raha hoga ..
kiya was convinced by kd's explaination .
(AT APARTMENTT)
kisha entered apartment totally exhausted . Rahi were already there . They wishes eachother goodnight and went to sleep .
But at midnight someone quietly entered their apartment through window and went their study table.. He opened drawer and took pics of kisha and rahi 's documents and quietly went away .
(AT SOME PORSCHE HOTEL, MUMBAI)
Some one was looking at pics of rahi and kisha . He mailed all of their info to that owner ..
 
so guys here is part-2 . I hope thik ho . So plzz tell me how is this?? Good or bad
Edited by Prince6495 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Stavan tumhe to creative team me hona chahiye tha tbp
ke tbp abhi bhi hit chal raha reheta
coming to the update me pagal hogaye hu stavan
it was so awesome my RaHi, KiSha, RanSh, Kiyan sab mahol tha
plz continue soon

Ishita

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