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palbhar

@palbhar

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow!!!! These two are really going to take such a bold move... is it right? Not sure...

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Agree with what U said - U need to be different and that different brings difference to every story something NEW for readers to read and enjoy what U have to offer.

Am with them for the step they are going to take - what holds the interest --- is the way you are going to handle the respective characters introduced -- in your further updates --- which I am sure -- you will do it convincingly.

Was just thinking -- how the life of Prashant - Ishita turns out -- if married 😆
But there are cases where you find - these types clicking in a big way -- as their life do not define Love but fun...

Good one Shanti - waiting for the interesting part/ parts...

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jhil

@jhillyarya

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

dont have any prblm di for ur dffrnt type 😉 will enjoy tht no doubt nd waiting for th next

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Lincy_Lins

@Lincy_Lins

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice update shanti di...yes it is very diff story..but I loved this story a lot...
Waiting for next update..

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alekhika

@alekhika20

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow,fab part.
Updt soon.

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851370

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

Shanti the first thing I did this morning is check IF and saw your PM and read the update. Wow, I loved it.

You said it's bold, well I'm all for it. Married people running away is a Sin, but they're doing it cause they want true love and affection from someone who understands them. They're not doing it for fun. It's not as if they have loving and understanding spouse and they're still doing it behind their loyal companions.

Hey regarding my comment on the first chapter, on Prashant recording their intimate sessions, I saw your reply. Frankly speaking, I'm happy that you didn't showed it that way. I know a person like Prashant is capable of doing such gross things, but you didn't go to that route, thanks for that.

So now I'm waiting for *This Weekend* like AarYa to see what's in store in the next chapter. 😳

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ns1970

@ns1970

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow Shanti this is certainly different but I am enjoying it good job 👍🏼

What is the point in staying in a relationship when you are not happy

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kmfan_2

@kmfan_2

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vinnas
wow another awsum part dear..loved it very much ..well excution of thr feelings aftr aarthi confession ..both dnt want to loose anyone at any cost..as aarthi taken frst step next yash taken big step ..he directly approched her ..nd gave her chance to let her feelings out as he too in same condition...
Thanks dear...I wanted to show when one is fed up...one can't help but do things which seem irrational to us who are reading it...but only those who are in that situation will know what they feel and why they are doing what they are!

thr romantic expression of feelings ..im dead..

😳 😳

like u i dnt want it to end in next update ..want to see xtra dose..
now waitin fr thr plan of action to elope ..yash have nice excuse of his wrk..

That will be in the next update...

frwarding to see thr love filled togetherness ..ofcourse romance (dead moments)..too..

have a great time
love u dear...

Thank you so much my dear...😊

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annirogc

@annirogc

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

very nice part.. waiting for next

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roserosey

@roserosey

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

how two struggling souls ...ended up together confessing their love to each other and the support they need from each other ...was very well executed shanthi 👏...

waiting to know how they will together start their journey ...

as always amazing update...⭐️

i agree that this is a different stuff that u r writing 😃👏...great going so far 😉😃

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