ARIYA FF- ~*MAIN DEEWANA MERI DEEWANI*~pt2-pG12

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Hello guys...
yaa m back with another dose of ARIYA...
pata hai yanhi soch rahe hai na ki pagal ho gayi hai ye ladki...
abhi kal hi ek Story complete ki aur aaj new start bhi kardi...
kya karu guys muje na ARIYA mania ho gaya hai...
so can't stop my self from writing on them...
so bear with me...
i am giving you all prologue and character sketch.
then tell me should i continue or not...



ARIYA FF- ~*MAIN DEEWANA MERI DEEWANI*~
Prologue:
What happens when u love someone but u can't tell them. What happens when someone loves someone madly but gets rejected and starts to hate them. What happen u come to know that the person u love most have no feelings for u. and then u come to know that they are denying your love because of some circumstances. What will happen when a lover decides to get his love back any how. The story is about the lover who is madly in love with a girl and now was firm to get her back.
 
Character sketch:

ACP Arjun rawte- 25 year old- 2nd in command in ETF.

A hot headed  but super intelligent and sharp cop. Fun loving guy and a big prankster and very friendly with the team. But very strict and khadoos when it comes to work. Had lost his parents in very small age in an accident. Best friend of sameer rathod and aaisha. Partner in crime of aaisha against sameer. Love was "faltu" stuff for him until someone's entry & his life get changed when that person enter in his life.

ACP Sameer Rathod- 26 year old- chief of ETF.

A very strict and law bounded cop. But from heart a soft person. Also Fun loving guy and big prankster. Also very strict when comes to work. He had lost his father in child hood and lost his mother when he was in college. Best friend of arjun and  in love with aaisha.

Aisha kapoor- 21 year old-

Last year college student and taking training for joining police force. Elder Daughter of raw chief and Elder sister of Liza kapoor. Very strong girl like lady dabang. In love with sameer and best frien of arjun, shree, chotu, riya. Partner in crime of arjun against sameer.

Liza kapoor- 19 year old-

first year college student of forensic science.  Younger daughter of raw chief and younger sis of aisha. Best friend with shree, chotu, and riya. feels something for shree but herself doesn't know. Always bickering with him. One is east then other is west.

Shreekant sen/shree- 22 year old- technical expert of ETF.

Best friend of chotu, liza, aaisha, riya. feels something for liza but he him self doesn't know. Have tom and jerry type relation with her. Everyone teases him for his mad love for gadgets.

Chandrakant patil/chotu- 22 year old- ETF commando.-

Best friend of shree, liza, aaisha, riya. In love with his 11:30 wali. Loves food.

Riya Mukherjee-

well she is mystery of story. A mysterious girl. Her character Will be defined in story as it progress.

Note:
no roshni's past in arjun's life.
riya is not part of ETF

 i know bahot bakwas title hai... but isise kaam chala lo...
so now i have given prologue and character sketch...
now tell me should i continue or not???


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awesome concept
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Great start...eagerly waiting to read more...
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interesting concept
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prologue and cs is nice
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Fantastic concept
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Awesome Prologue & CS
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Superb prologue dr...!!
CS is mind blowing...!!!!
Wow Riya is mystery...!! I m sure that Arjun will solve this mystery...!!!!
Vry excited to read the first installment...!!
Thanks for pm sweetie...!!! Continue soon...!!!!
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interesting concept
plz jaldi jaldi update karo lipi plzzz