Gauna SS : Baby Doll Meri Sone Di...Part 5 pg 6 JUNE 23

Posted: 10 years ago
 For someone sooo Special...


Love u both...




Part 1



She just come out from Exit Door.. and abt to plug Earphone in her ears... but alas her cell rings... She irritately sees caller Id & rolls her eyes...


"Huh , aa gya mera Pujya Mata ji ka call , are Beta ,,, vo jo Delhi wale Singh Uncle hai na , unhone ek rishte bheja hai ter liye , ladka acha hai Sushil hai , Sanskari hai... aur uper se Khud ka ghar bhi Delhi mai..." She mutters...  and attend call.



"Nikal gyi Ofc se?"


"Ji,, abhi... "


"Acha sun vo Delhi Wale Malhotra Uncle hai na,,, "


"Who's Malhotra ?????" she ask confusedly in loud tone...


" Are vahi jo teri Papa ke Chachu ke Dost ke hai na vahi..." Her Mother says


"Va , kya rishta hai..." She thoughts..


" Tu sun rahi hai????? dekh ab ki baar tujhe maana hi padegi hamari baat , ladka acha hai , Sushil hai , sanskari  hai  ..." her Mother starts & she  closed her eyes...


" Ma... bas... mai us Shushil ka kya karu????? Ghar mai Bai hai , jo saaf karti hai , aur Sansakri???? uska kya aachar dallu... cmon Maa , koi acha ladka dekho... " She now getting angry...


"Bhavnaaa... kya bol rahi hai , kaise baate kar rahi hai????? kya yahi sab sikhaya humne tujhe???


" MAAA... plz aap apni Tape mat chalu karo... plz... mujhe Shadi karni hai , koi Gudiya ban ke nhi rehna kisi ghar mai... aur Maa mujhe jaise ladka chayie jab tak vo nhi milega ... mai shadi nhi karrungi... sun rahi ho aappp????" she alsmost yells loudly & people look at her...



" Itna chilla kyu rahi hai , gala kharab hua , aur aawaz badal gyi to??? koun karega tujhse shadi????" Her Mother worridly ask...


" Maaa... plz... ek baat jaan lo agar mai yaha Duniya mai hue , to mera Bekoof  bhi yahi hoga ... and dn't wry vo mujhe khud hi mil jaaye ga... U know na Im damn Sexy..." She answers happily..



"Bhavnaaa ... kya hai??? kaha se sikh ke aayi ye..."


"OH God , aisa Rajesh bolta hai..."


"Rajesh??????? kahi tune vaha apne liye??? kahi vo Rajesh???" Her Mother worridly ask...


" What??????? Rajesh??????? yuckkk Maaa... " She immeadtly remebers Rajesh...

" Large spects , full sleeves Shirt , using so much Oil in Hair... and plus smile werdily... " she just feeling yuck...


"Maa plz bahut hua , rakh do... mujhe Shanti chayie..." she almost lost her cool...


"Ha thik thik hai , ... acha aaj Mangalwar hai , jara Mandir jake aa,,, Galti se Bhagwan tujhe bhi koi paagal de de tera jaisa..." with that her Mother cuts call...


She cuts call & close her eyes to control  herself.. & then open eyes & found almost passerby stop looking at her...


"Excuse me... yaha koi free ka Movie nhi chal rahi... jaao bhago yaha se..." she yells & all runs...

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 9 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
She is damn tired now... Her Boss eat her Brain enough... and baki ka vo to Maa ne kha liya... lol...

She just want that someone pick her in his arms & keep on Bed ...

She looks at Sky... " kyu mujhe sata rahe ho????? mujhe kya chayie pata hia na tumhe???? mujhe Kamina chayie , aur ek sweetu bhi , aur na jo mujhse der sara pyar kare aisa Bf chayie..." she speaks in her mind...

She hears someone call her , she look up & says her frnd Pooja call her , she Seat on her BF  Stylish Bike... & wave her hand to Bhavna...


"Hey , Puuu... " Bhavna forcefully yells



"Bye Bhavna... take care..." Pooja shouts & goes in front of her...


"Pooja ki Bacchi...😡 her roj apne BF ke peeche baith ke mujhe haath dikhati hai... huhhh , ek din tujhse acha ... excuse me... Bhavna likes Best... hmmm ( she correts herself ) Best Bf hoga mera... aur tu kya sari Ofcki Girls dekhti rehegi use... huh...😡 " with that she fultters her eyelashes & take out Clutch from her Kapri's pocket... & tied her hair & starts to walk..


While walikng she plug her earphone in her ears...


" Ho , Baby Doll mai sone di... "


she  also sings slowly with lyrics... ... she take Chips from Shop...



"Ise khana jaruri hai Bhavna , varna   pet mai se sare Animals bahar aa jaynge..." she talks to herself & strats to munching on her Chips...


She  abt to Cross Road... & looks at right side... and she is scared , One Car speedliy comes to her , she dn't know what to do????? her feets just stick on Road , she tightly close her eyes & put palms on her ears... Death comes to her , she thinks...



But suddenely she gets pulll by one side... she hit on some thing ...



"Are marna hai to mari Gadi mili thi kya????? jaa kahi jakar dub mar..." she only hears that wrds...


"Sry Uncle... plz... " she hears soft wrds.. Her body is trembling , she just hold something for support... & smlees something ... one freagnace ... she immeadtly feels relax.. but her heart thumping loudly...




"Hey , relax... its K... " she hears ...


Now her mind plays Games...


"Vo gadi mujhe uda deti to??? ya phir mai uske neeche aati to???? omg..." she thinks & tightly hold something...


" Plz... dekho... kuch nhi hua , U r safe... " again one voice try to calm down her , but now she feels someone touch to er ack... like someone try to soothing her... her eyes immeadtly feel with tears...


But she does not leave that thing & start to tumphing her foot on Road...


But some one slowly push her ...

She looks up & find something , one guy holding her by her waist , & she just look at him...

He cups her face with his hands... "Its ok... bas aisa hota hai ha... Paani piyogi??"


she nods in yes...

He take her rodside & purchase water bottloe for her... he open seal & give it her...


She hurridly drinks & chokes...


He just look at her , he immadtly paths her back again...


"Dheer dherr... " he says & she calm down...

She rub her eyes & look at him , He save her , and of course she want to thank him...


but she just lost in him...

His looks , omg...


Black  eyes who just give her confusing look...,


In her wrds he is truly handsome and stylish...

"Gora chitta , balck eyes ,  right height , and lovable nature... " she thinks


"Lovable Nature????"  "Kyu nhi?? abhi to kitna acha care kar raha hai meri ,,, " Bhavna immeadtly corrests herself...


"Hey,,, kaha kho gyi???? mera itna darvana to nhi dikhta???? he ask her&  he smile...


She just want to  kiss his cheecks , he is sooo cute... 😃


She faintly smile... he smile too...


" Can I drop U??" he ask


Bhavna just smile at him again...


"Excue me????"


" Ha.." Bhavna dreamily answers... 


He strats to walk  ,and Bhavna abt to follow him , but she yells in pain..


"Ouchhh"


he immeadtly turn & look at her , she holding her leg...


"I think its sprine... dn't wry , just take my support... " he says


But she feels nervous..


"Hey , dn't wry mai mauka ka fayda nhi uhtne wala... Chilll" he says with smile...


"Haye kya aawaz hai ..." Bhavna again goes to her dreamland...


"Hey ... " he wave his hand in front of her face & she comes from her trance...

He forwards his hand & take her hand & places it on his shoulder , and then he keep his other hand on her waist... and both slwoly walks to his Car..



Precap :


vo to... Bhavna hi bata payegi...


kya karu , uske Dil mai kya hai i dn't know... 😉


ab ghar jake kya karegi uske saath??????😆

Posted: 10 years ago
That was sooo sweet 🤗
 
Mai shadi ke pehle aisi hi thi 😉😉
 
And apni mom se aise hi jhagdti thi ...😛
 
And mujhe bhi real life mein mera hero mil gaya ... but aise road pe nahi mila😆
 
But this story is sooo lovable 😊
 
And I love this song ... Baby Doll mai Sone di 😉 ...  and I guess this is the perfect title for the story 😛
 
Ye duniya, ye duniya pittal di... Baby Doll mai sone di ... Bhavna is the best 😉 ...
 
Haaye... ye story jaldi se aagey badhao 😉
 
Posted: 10 years ago
wow di..
awesome start.
just loved it.
do continue soon.

Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start
just loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago
👍🏼 good start...

diii aap shadi k pehle aisi thi...matlab ap apne friend se jalti thi...jab wo apne bf k sath jate the 😆 ab apka bf nhi tha isme apke friends ki kya galti 😉


kidding...


aur road cross krte whqt dhayan dia karo...hamare yahaan to kaan me lead lagayi ho aur aap road cross kr rhe hai to police wale rok lete hai...kehte hai lead nikalo...mujhe bhi ek baar kaha tha 

good start ...lets see what happen next 😉


Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by chulbuliannu


👍🏼 good start...

diii aap shadi k pehle aisi thi...matlab ap apne friend se jalti thi...jab wo apne bf k sath jate the 😆 ab apka bf nhi tha isme apke friends ki kya galti 😉


kidding...


aur road cross krte whqt dhayan dia karo...hamare yahaan to kaan me lead lagayi ho aur aap road cross kr rhe hai to police wale rok lete hai...kehte hai lead nikalo...mujhe bhi ek baar kaha tha 

good start ...lets see what happen next 😉


 
 
Jalti thi???? mai to drool karti thi ... meri friend k gharwale ready nahi they unki shadi k liye... to maine usko bola tha ... ki agar teri nahi huyi to mujhe iske saath fit karake jaana 😉😉😉
 
AB wo Banda sach mein bada handsome tha 😉😉😉
 
Umm... kaan mein earphones laga k cross karna to mujhe bhi pasand nahi hai 😊 ... par ab aisa hottie bachane aa raha ho to jaan khatre mein dali ja sakti hai 😳😳😳
 
 
 
 
Posted: 10 years ago
Oyeee Hoyeee Meri Sone Di Babydoll Bhavna Di..😆😆 Tussi Ho Ke Gye Dreamland Me?? 😆 U know what? Main toh abhi bhi aise hi laddti hunn apni mumma se..😆😆 Main Heera Hunn Heera toh Mujhe Bhi Solitare jaisa hi koi chahiye na..😉 Aur Di..I love ur atitude yaar!!!! Kya mast ladki hai yeh..Ditto mere jaisi..Mere bhi frnds ke bf hain..And jab wo meko chidhate hai to bhi main aise hi bolti hunn ki dekhna Mere Boyfriend ko dekhke tum log flat ho jaoge!! Ahaaann..😉 Aa gye mere bhai..😉 He is the best!! 👍🏼 Bhavna Di..Ghar to leke jaa rha hain bhai tumhe but kuch ulta-seedha na karliyo!! 😉 Awsumm Manu Di..Thanxx fr pm Bhavna Di..Continuee Soon Manu Di..😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by bgargate


 
 
Jalti thi???? mai to drool karti thi ... meri friend k gharwale ready nahi they unki shadi k liye... to maine usko bola tha ... ki agar teri nahi huyi to mujhe iske saath fit karake jaana 😉😉😉
 
AB wo Banda sach mein bada handsome tha 😉😉😉
 
Umm... kaan mein earphones laga k cross karna to mujhe bhi pasand nahi hai 😊 ... par ab aisa hottie bachane aa raha ho to jaan khatre mein dali ja sakti hai 😳😳😳
 
 
 
 


rofl...maine aisa kuch kabhi nhi kia...real life me mere saamne bahut kam hi handsome bande saamne aaye...

waise agar aisa banda hoga to main bhi car k niche aane ko ready 😉
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start...
Superb...
Imagining Bhavna di...😆😆😆
 
Continue soon...Thanks for PM bhavna Di...😃😃😃

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