Gauna SS : Baby Doll Meri Sone Di...Part 5 pg 6 JUNE 23 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome dear
read all parts in one go
loved them all
bro-sis convo was nice
aadhi raat ko khana?? r they vampires??πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† just kidding
meeting bhavna again!!
waiting for next update
plz pm me the update next time

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Posted: 10 years ago
super
bro sis friendship like me and my sis
great update
love it
continue soonπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Loved the Bro-Sis bonding
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

manali ye dinner time kuch jaldi nhi thi πŸ˜‰ I mean 1.20 pe to acche acche logo ki bhuk mar jati hai πŸ˜†

Ice cream k baad coffee ye combination bhi samjh k bahar tha...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


gala kharab tha to sahi bhi ho skta tha...


mast update tha.




Anu hame to aise hi Bhaiyya..


Raat ko hame kuch na khana chayie hota hai... πŸ˜† 

Me & Cousin bro... Bhukkad kahi ke πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 4
 
 
" Namskar ab sduniye Vishesh Khabre... " That sweet & loud voice broken her sleep...
 
 
" Ammm ye Mumma bhi na inhe bhi Radio pe News suni hoti hai..." she mumures & pull duvet on her.
 
 
withinn i minutes she feels someone tickles her feets...
 
 
 
" Nooo , nahi... ouch... hey plz..." πŸ˜ƒ
 
 
" Uth ja... jaldi... varna kar dunga tere Boyfrnd ko call..." Gautham says
 
 
" ha ha uth rahi dhamiki mat de..." She says & get up...
 
 
After  some minutes they r in Kitchen.. drking tea.. 
 
 
Finally lot of hash Hush they comes to Chowpttay...
 
 
" In logo ko koi kaam nhi hota kya ???? subh subh aa jate  hai ...huhh" manali irritetdly says
 
Gautham just smile at her.. 😊
 
 
" Madam , chale????? nhi khade hokar to Weight kam nhi hoga aapka???" and winks atr her
 
 
They start for Jog...
 
 
Manali Madam run sklowly behind Gautham..
 
 
Suddenely she sees one vendor selling IDLI...
 
 
She slwoly divert her track & goes to Him... & purchase it & start to eat...
 
 One girl also comes there & sees manali...
 
 
" Ahumm kuch log kabhi nhi sudhar sakte... " she thinks & resume her Jog..
 
 
After eating Mnali again Jogs...
 
 
But suddenly her leg tripped on stone & she falls..
 
 
"ouch... Mumma...mera pair..." 😭😭 
 
 
One girl paas her & sees she is seating on ground & abt to cry...
 
 
" Hey , kya hua????  u need help?"
 
 
" Ya... my leg..." Manali pointed towards her leg..
 
 
"Oh... " that girl says & look at here & there
 
 
" Tumhare saath koi..."
 
 
" Mera bhai... per vo kahi nazar nhi aa raha..." Manali says looking here & there & that girl notices her tone is getting emotional..
 
 
" Its ok... just wait , he comes... " that girl assures her.
 
 
" Can i  borrow one call?? " Manali ask & that girl immeadtly pass her cell to her..
 
 
" Bhai... mai gir gayi😭 jaldi aao na...😭 "
 
 
" Ha . vo Bade stones hai na ... vaha ... ha..." Manali answers while looking at  surroundings..
 
 
After 15 - 20 minutes
 
 
 
That girl stands when she sees him.. coming hurridly to her...
 
 
His gaze fall on her..
 
 
" Hey , hi... " with that he give her sweet smile..
 
 
" Hi,  Nyc to see u here , Gud Mring... " she answers
 
 
" Mrng.." he says & immeadtly bend down to Manali..
 
 
" Kya hua baccha??? "
 
 
"mai gir gyi... mai uth nhi sakti... ab hame ghar kaise jaynge... " 😭  Manali answers with crying..
 
 
"Awww.. kuch nhi , mai hue na... " Gautham says while pathes her back.. then look at girl
 
 
" My sister Manali... "
 
 
that girl smiles...
 
 
"And Manu... this is... ahhh sry I forgot... " Gautham says
 
 
"Its ok... Bhavna... " she says
 
 
" Ya... this is Bhavna... "  Gautham says to manali.
 
 
" By d way tum yaha itni subha??? "
 
 
Bhavnma just look at him..
 
 
" Of course Jogging... u know Health & all.." Bhavna says
 
 
" Thank God... yaha koi to hai , jo apni health ke liye aata hai... " Gautham says
 
 
Bhavna just baffled at this & looking passerby & try to see if they are doing something weird..
 
 
" Excuse me mai bhi yaha apni Health ke liye hi aati hue..." manali yells & Bhavna immeadtly look at them..
 
 
" Ha kyu nhi ... per fark sirf itna hai , ki mai apni heatl ki fit rakhna chatha hue , kum karna chahta hue , aur tum... apni sehet bane ne ke liye yaha aati ho... " Gutham taunts her in sweet tone...
 
 
Suddenely Manali pich his leg...
 
 
" Goyta... tu chal ghar... aaj teri aarti na utar va de na... to dekh... " Manali says while grrethed her teeths. 😑
 
 
 
" Are va ... Mani mau... mai bhi kuch kam nhi hue.. samjhi... "
 
 
" ha ha .. "
 
 
" ae chal chooth.."
 
 
" Ab ja... "
 
 
" Chal chal..."
 
 
 
Suddenely Bhavna yells
 
 
"Stop..."
 
 
Gautham & Manali stops & now glaring at each other...
 
 
" I think tum logo ka ye session to chalta rehega... Bye.. guys.. and ys nyc to see u agin.. " Bahvna says
 
 
" Oh , ys... why not wny not????? hum roj milnge... ya... " Gautham answers while looking lost
 
and Bhvana baffles
 
Manali just look at both & smile..
 
 
" Buddhu , ladki pasand hai , per kabhi khud nhi bolega ... mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.. "  Manali thinks.
 
 
 
" Hey , wht abt Coffee???" Manali ask
 
 
" Hmmm , " Bhavna says while looking at Gautham..
 
 
" lagta yaha bhi same hai... huh.. yaar sare bande ki love story mujhe hi set karni hai kya??" Manali thinks
 
 
 
" Only half Hour... and plus we will drop at Home.."  manali says
 
 
" Ys ys... " Gautham says & Bhavna smiles
 
 
" Thank god kuch to bola..." Manali thinks
 
 
" Bhai .."
 
 
Gutham look at her & help her to standing on her feets , he pull her closer to himself..
 
 
" Chale.." He says
 
 
& three some walks tiowards car..
 
 
 
Gautham help Manali om backseat , while Bhavna take front seat..
 
 
" Bhai.. mera pir????? Omg agar mai chal nhi paayi to???? "
 
 
Bhavna just look at Gautham , gautham silently drives
 
 
" Omg... hairline fracuture hua to????? my God..."
 
 
" Hey its k... only sprain hoga... trust me.." Bhavna says in smooth tone..
 
 
" Lekin phir bi... prceution is must..." manali says
 
 
Gautham chuckles
 
 
" Dn't worry Bhavna.. Madam ki aaj date hai.. vo bhi 3 mahine baad... and Madam ka pair... so ye drama chal raha hai.." Gauthanm says
 
 
Bhavna just smiles..
 
 
" Oh God i have to call him... " Manali says &  call him
 
 
" Gud mrng Baby... acha suno na.. aaj na mai gir gyi.. "
 
 
" Ab????? hum jaynge na aaj???"
 
 
" ha.. plz... ys... Oh how sweet of u.. acha baby u know aaj na ..( Manali says sweetly... & looking at Mirror , Gautham just look at her ..) jane do... baad mai baat karte hai , yaha bheed bahut jayda hai...
 
 
" Ya baby.. me too.." with that  she keep cell.
 
 
 
Precap :
 
 
Coffee moments
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Posted: 9 years ago
🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
 
Awww... Mani Mau eating idli on the beach 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
 
Ewww... bechari Mani Mau gir gayi aur pair mein chot lag gayi ...
 
And Gautham is such sweet brother ... Manu k boyfriend se usko koi prob nahi hai πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
 
ab Manu ko apne Bhai ki love story to set karni hi padegi πŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺ
 
Kya beginning ki Manu ne... coffee πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...
 
haaye mai to abhi se cafe mein pahuch gayi  β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ
 
but the last part was damn hilarious... 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
 
"jane do... baad mai baat karte hai , yaha bheed bahut jayda hai... " 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
 
 
waiting for coffee moments
Edited by bgargate - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...
Awesome update.
I really loved it...
Hehe...
Jogging karte waqt Mani mau idli kharahi hai...
Aiyyyooo...
Gautham bhai is such a sweet brother...
Loved everything...
Aww...
Mani Mau ko prain aagaya...
Continue sooonish...
Do pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 5


They enterd in Irani Coffe Shop...


Bhavna scan area..

"Dn't wry yaha Best Coffe meilgi tumhe , aur ha Gotya ko Dhudna ho na to yahi aana ... " Manali provides extra.. 


" Mau har baar tera bolna jaruri hota hai kya???? " Gautham who support her ask irritatedy..


" Aaaouch mera Sonu rut gya???? ore baba ... sry na ..." Manali sweetly says & give quick kiss on Gautham's cheecks..


Bhavna just smile at this.. while Gautham just glare at his sister..


" Bhai, mujhe na vo vali Coner ki seat chayie..." Manali declares & Gautham takes her there , Bhavna just following her.. Manali pull Bhanva near her..


"Vaise aap Coffee lengi ya..."Gautham ask


" Omg My dear Bro ... tum bhi na aisa lag raha ki tum logo ki aaj shadi hai & tum log aaj hi shadi mai pehele baar mil rahe ho... whts that aap & all... just call her Bhanva or  Bhabs... and vo itni bhi buddhi nhi hai ..."


Gautham just feeling embrassed , while Bhavna just try to digest... both are silent


" Viase Bhavna Di yaha Coffe achi milti hai , and ha nyc Toast also , then If u ever try Garlic Bread here , karna bhi mat ekdum bakwas... aur ha just try sme Sweet Biscuits... ya phir U like Cold Coffe??? aur what abt  ..." Manali abt to ask further suddenely waiter comes


" Kya laau Madam????"

Manali just look at him...


"Aeeewww tu aaj bhi naha kar nhi aaye kya?"


Gautham just glare at her..


" Bhai Do Hot Coffee , with Sweet Biscuits , one Cold Coffee with cream... and ha dn't forget Sandwitches.." Gautham place order , while Bhavna just look at them


"Ye dono bhi na , mujhse to kisine pucha hi nhi ,  kya chayie , but jane do badi bhookh lagi hai... " Bhavna thinks



" Mai Baby ko caal karti hue , bechara use to time bhi nhi milta Breka fast karne ka... " Manali sadly says & type sumthing in her cell.


" Aakar karega bhi kya????? sab to tu safa chat kar ke jaye gi na..." Gautham says


" Forget it..." Manali angrily says

& now her all attaein to Bhavna


Manali jitni bhi info nikal sakti thi , de sakti thi , vo sab kar liya madam ne...


Now they enjying their break fast..


Bhavna just drink one sip & makes faces..


"Ooo , shayd ye Coffee jyada hai is mai.. " Gautham says & put some sugar in her Coffe ..


" Actually hum dono starong hi pite hai , so ,, sry mujhe puch lena chayie tha..." Gautham says in guilty tone...


" Its ok... " Bhanva says & smile..


Gautham also smile &  both lost in each others eyes...


Manali just look at them


"Haye kitni cute lag rahe ho dono... thank god is bandar ko koi to human pasand aaya..." Manali thinks & look around & suddenly yells


"Gotyaaa..."


BHanva & Gautham just scares & comes from trance... both worridly ask her


"Kya hua??"


" Gotya , chal ho jaye Sach Ka Samna????"


Gautham just look at her puzzly


" Aa gya Baba Irani..." Manali says with naughty smile... Gautham look back & then look at his sister


" per shart yaad hai na , acha agar tu hara to mai jo kahu , "


" Ok Miss..." Gautham says


Manali raise her hand ( like she blessing him ) Param pujya Devi Manali ki Aashiwards sada tere saath rahe , I love u my  Gotya..." Bhavna just control her smile...


Gautham just turn back & look here & there & sees one standing Fan is there.. he slowly change dirction of Fan & raise Fan speed... toawards that Baba Irani..( Owner of Hotel )



and within a minutes Fan ne uska kaam kar diya... Baba Irani ka wig ud gya...lol



Gautham just look at Manali with fake smile , who give him wining smile...


" Koun jeeta?" Bhavna ask


" Of cousre mai.. , ab kuch intersting karna hoga Gotya tumhe... kuch aisa jise mere Dil khush ho jaye.." Manali says


"Per shart kya thi???" Bhavna ask


" Oh, ya actually na Gotya ko lagta tha ki ye Baba ke asli baal hai , and i think ki ye wig hai... and yuups finally ye wig nikal aaya... " Manali informs


"So , ab??" Bhavna ask in excting tone..


" Ab Gotya couple dance karega ,... "


" Www... htaaa???? " Gautham yeels loudly... bringing others attition


" Ys, plz na plzzzplzzz... "



" lekin mai akle kaise???? couple dance?????" Gautham ask & look here & there...


Bhavna also worrdily look at here & there..


" Kyu ye Bhvna Di hai na.." Manali says & pats Bhavna'sback...


Bhvan just spat her Coffee..


"Mujhe nhi aata dance..."


" Are to Gotya ko kunsa aata hai , just jaao  , mai hue na..." Manali says


Gautham& Bhavna just look at each other


" Dance karoge , ya kuch aur..." manali says


" No way , we are doing dance , come Bhavna ... " Gautham says


Now both Gautham & Bhavna stand & hold each others hand...


" Chalo guys song plz..."and one waiter start song...


" Nanha Munna rahi hue... "


" Ae band kar... is se acha to mera cell hai "

"Manali immeadtly start song



PRECAP :


Kounsa song hai??

" and how Gautham & Bhvna dance on it , kya koi change hoga unke relatioship mai????


and what abt Manali's BF???



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
it was amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon