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-Carrie-
-Carrie- @-Carrie- IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by kunchu


so here u are
welcome back
The case moving in swiftly
Ramona and Rajneesh do sound very bad. Cheating on behind their spouses, even when they are related
Where is the kid?? very eager to know more
Alisha's past is sad. 
but the end was so sute

Yup! Me Ms Late Kate! 😆

Thanks 😳


They are worse. 🤢 Coming up in following parts. Even about the kid.

Yeah! The Gentleman 😆

Thanks for the comments Helna


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laila1994
laila @laila1994 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update🤗
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Alisha is orphan But still full of life😃
Her casual talk with Arjun was very nice.

What's with Arjun's family???
Does he has a same past as he has in Arjun serial???
Or is there anything else???

Rajneesh & Ramona were having affair 😲
I must say they compliment each other.🤪
Both are pure evil😡

If Ellie is Rajneesh's daughter then why she was neglected by her own father???
& why Adhira cares so much about her???
Something is really fishy going on here

Alisha Blushing😆
Arjun the prince charming
Like Alisha, I too like chivalrous heroes 😃
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shreya09
Shreya @shreya09 Goldie
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly i am in love with Alisha 👏 & also jealous on her ( you know why 😉)
but on a serious not... i very lovely and inspiring characterization 👍🏼
Rajneesh & Ramona... both the cheaters 🤢
somehow i feel Rajneesh got a good reward for his deeds !
Adhira... more mysteries to be resolved
looking forward to see how the case unfolds 👍🏼
& now Arjun !!!!!! *blush* *blush* ☺️ ☺️ 
the starting & the ending parts of this update... i am blushing more ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 
but i am waiting for the revelation of his past life too...
great writing Zuby 👏 👏 👏 👏 
wonderful 👏 👏 👏 👏 
now i hv already started waiting for the next part 😃
but you take your time 😊
no pressure 😳 Edited by shreya09 - 9 years ago
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nwshbsws
nwshbsws @nwshbsws Newbie Inactive
Posted: 9 years ago
So Zuby Madame is back with her awesome updates. Welcome!! Welcome!! You know how many times I have been on the verge of sending you a msg, asking when are you going to update. But then always stopped myself, saying that writting is an creative process and an author should always be given time and space.

Now to the update. Urghhh...Rajneesh and Ramona sick people. Being related yet having an affair right under the noses of their spouses. And Ramona pretented to be so concerned for Aadhira. Sick woman and an equally sick man. Didn't even care for his child.

I loved the Bohemian trait you have added to Aadhira's character. It matches beautifully to the face you have chosen for Aadhira's character.

Hmmm...So does Aadhira and Alok know about this dirty scandal? How is the child and speech therapist related? Will be eagerly waiting to know all about it in the next update.

Now most importantly, yummy grilled cheese sandwich and hot cocoa served by an even more yummier ACP Rawte. Have a wish of being served cheese sandwich and cocoa by Shaleen. What a fantasy! Loved Alisha's spirit and spunk and Arjun's concern for her to not let her leave in storm. And yeah, just like Alisha, I am also a sucker for heroes who keep away from damsels despite temptation.

Thanks for the pm.
Love,
Anwesha

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fly.high
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Posted: 9 years ago
so finally u back! missed u!
I m loving this case! its giving enough scope to us to search for the criminal...

Ramona and Rajneesh r such a cheat..nd so dubplant minded!

but i still have this voice coming out frm my Instincts that Aadhira has smthing to do with this murder thing!

well lets see...
waiting to knw more abt th child..again the instincts of mine r saying she has a pivotal role in the story!

Alisha...i m loving her character very mch..'nother awsm creation of urs :)

continue soon

love.
Me
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Moodie-Munchkin
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally You are backk Didu!! Missed You...😊 And thankfully u updated this! Another Masterpiece of urs..😃 Well..The starting itself had me..😳😳 Imagine being served Superr Yummy Grilled Sandwhich And Delicious Hot Cocoa by The Even Yummier And Hott ACP Arjun Rawte.. Not only a super cop but A Good Cook as well!! 👍🏼 But I sooo lovee Alisha!! ❤️❤️ You know why? Cuz I can relate to her!! A True Fan Gurl but in her limits!! 😆 Attagurl! Felt Bad abt Alisha's Past..Poor Gurl! 😔 So Rajneesh And Ramona were cheating on their partners...!!!! Bloody Cheaters..😡😡 Wasnt she his Aunt by relation?? Goshh..🤢 I lovee the Bohemian Touch You have given to Aadhira's character...Beautiful!! Suits her perfectly!! 👏👏 And now for The last!! Staying In Arjun's Cottege fr a Night? Ohlalala...😉 And Lyk Alisha too Im a sucker fr guys who keep away frm Damsels no matter how Much The Temptation!! ❤️ Rawte is a true gentleman! ❤️❤️ It was a Ittu Update par Koi Na! Thanx nd Continue!
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-Carrie-
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by laila1994


Update🤗
***************************************

Alisha is orphan But still full of life😃
Her casual talk with Arjun was very nice.

What's with Arjun's family???
Does he has a same past as he has in Arjun serial???
Or is there anything else???

There is past, as there always is a past 😆 What it is jaane ke liye padhtey rahiye 😳

Rajneesh & Ramona were having affair 😲
I must say they compliment each other.🤪
Both are pure evil😡

If Ellie is Rajneesh's daughter then why she was neglected by her own father???
& why Adhira cares so much about her???
Something is really fishy going on here

Its complicated. Hope you will like the twists & turns as they happen 

Alisha Blushing😆
Arjun the prince charming
Like Alisha, I too like chivalrous heroes 😃

Hai na? They dont make em like em any more 😛

Thanks for the comments! 😳
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-Carrie-
-Carrie- @-Carrie- IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by shreya09


Firstly i am in love with Alisha 👏 & also jealous on her ( you know why 😉)
Me too! He belongs to us. Period! 😆
but on a serious not... i very lovely and inspiring characterization 👍🏼

I love such characters. Really make us step out of ourselves & take a good look at our attitude.

Rajneesh & Ramona... both the cheaters 🤢
somehow i feel Rajneesh got a good reward for his deeds !
Adhira... more mysteries to be resolved
looking forward to see how the case unfolds 👍🏼
& now Arjun !!!!!! *blush* *blush* ☺️ ☺️ 
the starting & the ending parts of this update... i am blushing more ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 

I know you want a grilled cheese sandwich like...right now. hai na????😆

but i am waiting for the revelation of his past life too...
great writing Zuby 👏 👏 👏 👏 
wonderful 👏 👏 👏 👏 
now i hv already started waiting for the next part 😃
but you take your time 😊
no pressure 😳

Thank you, Shreya😳 I know u r busy too still u came to read & comment!

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-Carrie-
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by nwshbsws


So Zuby Madame is back with her awesome updates. Welcome!! Welcome!! You know how many times I have been on the verge of sending you a msg, asking when are you going to update. But then always stopped myself, saying that writting is an creative process and an author should always be given time and space.

I am an accounatant by profession & this being the financial year end its been crazy around here. But finally things have turned sane again & here I am 😃 Hope u r well! 

Now to the update. Urghhh...Rajneesh and Ramona sick people. Being related yet having an affair right under the noses of their spouses. And Ramona pretented to be so concerned for Aadhira. Sick woman and an equally sick man. Didn't even care for his child.

Real sociopaths both are. Cut from the same cloth. More coming up!

I loved the Bohemian trait you have added to Aadhira's character. It matches beautifully to the face you have chosen for Aadhira's character.

This woman belongs to the old austere era. Add insult to injury she is surrounded by greedy narcissistic people. A most sympathy deserving character. 

Hmmm...So does Aadhira and Alok know about this dirty scandal? How is the child and speech therapist related? Will be eagerly waiting to know all about it in the next update.

Now most importantly, yummy grilled cheese sandwich and hot cocoa served by an even more yummier ACP Rawte. Have a wish of being served cheese sandwich and cocoa by Shaleen. What a fantasy! Loved Alisha's spirit and spunk and Arjun's concern for her to not let her leave in storm. And yeah, just like Alisha, I am also a sucker for heroes who keep away from damsels despite temptation.

As I had said during my earlier FF too I weave my fantasies about Arjun/ Shaleen into stories😛 I wonder how you & my other friends like it so much😆
 Yes! Its my wish to be fed by Shaleen 😳

Thanks for the pm.

Thanks for the comments, Anwesha!😳
Love,
Anwesha

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-Carrie-
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Aisha.Vashishth


so finally u back! missed u!
I m loving this case! its giving enough scope to us to search for the criminal...

Ramona and Rajneesh r such a cheat..nd so dubplant minded!

but i still have this voice coming out frm my Instincts that Aadhira has smthing to do with this murder thing!

well lets see...
waiting to knw more abt th child..again the instincts of mine r saying she has a pivotal role in the story!

Alisha...i m loving her character very mch..'nother awsm creation of urs :)

continue soon

love.
Me

👏👏👏

Readers like you make me really nervous😆 I must tighten my script  now🤔

Good to see you again! Hope u r well! Do drop in twitter some time na? 


Thanks for the comments.
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