Saath Nibhaana Saathiya

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice story!!!
waiting for next part...
hope gohem r 2gether... & koki is not with them... so they can have some privacy!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Hahahaha! Just wait and read what happened and what will happenπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: vikiliksfan

first of all thanks for changing meeru i don't like orignal meera
Love the bonding between Meera and rashi

finally positive side of rashi.πŸ˜ƒ

I was expecting more romantic scenes of jigar and rashiπŸ˜‰

i like rucha a lot 😳

One request plz in ur FF i would like to see ahem rashi relationship
Waiting for Gohem entry

once again superb startπŸ‘


Even i don't like the original Meera. So changed her.

Hopefully, in future you'll get more RaJi scene. I think for one update this much scene was enough. Na??πŸ˜†

Ahem-Rashi relationship??πŸ˜• What do you mean by that??

Thanks a lot!πŸ˜ƒ Hope you enjoy the concept and story!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Many wanted quick updates so i'm back with the Chapter 1.
But from now on, each update will come once a week or every 4days.

Thank you,
Zariyat
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Chapter 1:

Next day...
Children's room

Rashi was preparing Meera, Nikhil and Nihal for school. Now she was making braids in Meera's hair. Meethi entered.

Meethi: Rashi-bhabhi, nashta taiyar hai.

Rashi: (speeding up her work)Achha thik hai. Tu jaa mai aati hu.

Meethi left.

Rashi: Tum tino taiyar hogaye na? Kuch chhut to nehi gaya?

Nikhil: No, mumma. Humne sab le lia.

Rashi: Thik hai to chalo niche.

All came downstairs.

Downstairs
The kids sat with Hetal, Chirag, Parag and Janko in the living area. Whereas, Rashi rushed to the kitchen.

Hetal: Baa, dekha aapne? Itne saalo mei Rashi ne office aur ghar dono kaise achhe se sambhala hai...

Janko: Haan, Hetal. Gopi ke jaane ke baad ghar ki puri zimmedari Rashi pe aagayi. Aur Ahem ke chale jaane ke baad sab kuch Jigar ko akela sambhalna par raha hai.

Chirag: Ab mujhe ehsaas hua hai, ki Rashi ke kaam karne ka decision galat nehi tha.

Parag: Bilkul thik kaha aapne, mota-bhai!

Janko: Agar Jigar aur Rashi na hote to pata nehi kya ho jata...

-----Flashback-----
Kokila: Sari galti Gopi vau ki hai! Isske liye mai tumhe kabhi maaf nehi karungi! Mujhe tumhari shakal bhi nehi dekhni!
Gopi: (weeping)Thik hai, maaji. Agar yehi aapka fyasla hai to...to...mai abhi iss ghar ko chhorke aap sabse bohot durr chali jati hu.
Kokila: Bilkul sahi fyasla lia hai tumne!
Gopi was about to leave, but Ahem got hold of her hand and stopped her.
Ahem: Thyaro, Gopi!
Kokila: Ahem, tum...
Ahem: Nehi, maa! Agar Gopi iss ghar se jaygi to mai bhi ye ghar chhorke Gopi ke saath jaunga!
Jigar: Bhai, aap ye kya keh rahe hai?
Ahem: Nehi, Jigar! Agar Gopi jaygi to mai BHI jaunga!
Jigar: Lekin, bhai...
Ahem: Jigar, agar...bhagwan na kare aisa ho! Lekin agar kabhi Rashi ke saath aisa ho...tab tu kya karega? Rashi ko support karega ya...
Jigar looked at Rashi and then stayed silent.
Ahem: Ab tu hi bata, kya mera decision galat hai?
Everybody stayed silent.
Ahem: Mujhe pata hai koi bhi kuch nehi kehne wala! Kyu ki sab jante hai ki mai sahi hu aur Mom...GALAT!
Kokila: Ahem, tum...
Ahem: Nehi, Mom! Aaj nehi... Aajtak maine aapki harr baat bina kisi behes ke maani, lekin aaj nehi! Maine Gopi ke saath saath phere liye hai. Ekbar nehi DOBAR! To mai kaise vo saath vachan todh du?! 
Gopi: Ahem-ji...
Ahem: Maine decide karlia hai ki mai tumhare saath jaunga matlab JAUNGA! 
Ahem was about to leave when Kokila spoke her last words to them.
Kokila: Ahem, kya ye tumhara akhri fyasla hai?
He neither turn to see Kokila's face, nor replied to her, but held Gopi's hand and turned to the door.
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Hetal: Kokila, ye kya kar rahi ho! Roko...roko Ahem aur Gopi ko. Vodono jaa rahe hai.
Kokila: Nehi, mota-bhabhi. Ye unnka fyasla hai, jaane dijiye unnhe. Aajse mai unnka chehra bhi nehi dekhna chahti!
Kokila went upstairs. Then, Gopi and Ahem left from there...FOREVER!
-----Flashback-----


Tears dropped from Janko's eyes, remembering those dreadful moments.

Dining Area
Rashi brought the meals to the table and set them properly. She was all messed up, her dress got dirty and her hair was also messed.

Rashi: Meethi, kitchen mei kuch aur reh gaya hai kya?

Meethi: Haan, Rashi-bhabhi. Mai leke aati hu.

Rashi: Nehi...tu rehne de. Tujhe aur bhi kaam honge. Tu jaa, mai leaungi.

Meethi left and Rashi went to the kitchen.

Jigar was the first one to come there.

Jigar: Mmm...breakfast looks tasty.

He was about to sit in the breakfast, stopped remembering something.

Jigar: Breakfast to yaha hai. Lekin breakfast bananewali meri pyaari si, khubsurat si wifey kaha hai...

He went to the kitchen.

Kitchen
Rashi was arranging a tray with meals. Jigar entered and spotted her. He was laughing silently seeing her messed up condition. He slowly went behind her, opened her hair-clip.

Rashi: Jigar-ji, aap!

Jigar: Shhh...

He tried to arrange her hair, which made her blush.

Rashi: (blushing)Jigar-ji...aap...aap kya kar rahe hai?

He was arranging her hair and cliping her hair.

Jigar: Lo! Hogaya!(moved away)

Rashi: Thanks a lot! Ab chaliye hatiye, mujhe bohot kaam hai.

She was leaving, but Jigar held her hand, pulled and wrapped her in his arms. She got all red.

Rashi: Jigar-ji, aap kya kar rahe hai...

Jigar: Tum meri wife ho parosi ki nehi!

Rashi: Lekin ye kitchen hai! Yaha koi bhi aasakta hai.

Jigar: Aane do...

Rashi: Jigar-ji, mujhe bohot kaam hai. Uss...usske baad office bhi to jana hai...

Jigar: Rashi, tum...

They heard footsteps of someone.

Rashi: Jigar-ji, koi aaraha hai. Abto chhoriye na!

Finally, he released her. Meera entered.

Meera: Maasi, hume der hog

Rashi: Haan, beta, chalo.

Rashi left with Meera, followed by Jigar.

Dining Area
Meera, Nikhil, Nihal and Jigar sat for breakfast. Rashi went and called the others. All the others also sat for breakfast. Rashi was going somewhere.

Jigar: Kaha jaa rahi ho, Rashi?

Rashi: Kakiji ko bulane.

Janko: Rashi, tu janti hai vo nehi aane wali. Phir bhi harr din tum Kokila ko sabke saath baeth ke khane ke liye bulati ho.

Rashi: Baa, maana ki mere bulane pe bhi Kakiji nehi aati. Lekin hume koshish jaari rakhni chahiye.

She smiled and left from there.

Janko: Rashi kitni badal gayi hai na...

Kokila's room
Rashi and Meethi reached the door. Meethi was carrying a tray with breakfast. Rashi knocked on the door.

Kokila: (from inside)Kaun?

Rashi entered, opening the door.

Kokila was sitting on the bed.

Kokila: Kyu ayi ho yaha?

Rashi: Kakiji, vo...breakfast...

Kokila: Mai niche nehi jaungi! Nashta yehi pe rakhke jao.

Rashi: Kakiji...

Kokila: Rashi! Jitna kaha hai utna karo.

Rashi nodded and signaled Meethi to enter with the tray. She placed the tray in front of her, then they left.

Dining Area
Rashi came and started serving food to everyone.

Hetal: Rashi, aur kitna kaam karogi? Office bhi sambhalti ho aur ghar bhi sambhalti ho. Ab baetho, humare saath nashta karo.

Rashi: Nehi, mummyji, mai serve karne ke baad hi khaungi.

Chirag: Beta, tum kitna kaam karti ho. Baetho, sabke saath khao.

Jigar: Haan, Rashi, abhi breakfast karlo. Nehito office jane mei der hojayegi. Aaj meeting bhi to hai.

Rashi: Thik hai. 

She joined them for breakfast.

Office (Modi Constructions)
Jigar: Rashi, tumne presentation ke files le liye na?

Rashi: Aap chinta matt kijiye, maine sab le lia hai. 

Jigar: Thik hai, chalte hai.

Both left the cabin.

Conference Room
Rashi and Jigar entered, everyone greeted them. Then they shook hands with the client.

Client: Let's start the presentation?

Rashi: Ya, sure.

Jigar sat with the others, and Rashi started the presentation.

After the presentation was done, everyone stood up and clapped.

Client: Well done, Mrs. Modi! I liked your presentation very much. Manna parega, Mr. Modi, you've got a very intelligent and beautiful wife!

Jigar: (smiles)Thanks.

Client: To...kal se hi kaam shuru kardete hai, what say?

Jigar: Kalse possible nehi hoga. Actually, mujhe dusre project ke liye kal Shimla jana hoga. We can start working after i come back. Okay?

Client: Okay. Now, i'll take your leave. See you.

The client and others left. Only RaJi were left in the room, alone.

Rashi: Jigar-ji, aapne to kaha tha ki aap aaj Shimla jaa rahe hai.

Jigar: Haan, to?

Rashi: Abhi to aap ne client se kaha ki aap kal jaa rahe hai...

Jigar: Kyu? Koi problem hai agar mai ekdin aage-pichhe karu?

Rashi: Nehi... Mai to baas aise hi.

Jigar: Tum mujhe yaha bhagana kyu chahti ho? (teasing)Mere jaane ke baad kahi tum kisi aur ke saath ghumne to nehi jaati...

Rashi: (hitting on his arm)Jigar-ji!

Jigar: (laughing)I was just joking. Actually, aaj ek press conference hai. Iss liye thora delay karna parha.

Rashi: Ooo. Agar aap aage jaate to aage kaam khatam karke Meera ke birthday se pehle wapas aasakte...

Jigar: Tum to serious hogayi! Explanation kyu de rahi ho? Mai to aise hi mazak kar raha tha.

Rashi: I know, Jigar-ji. Ab chale? Bachho ko bhi pick karne jana hai.

Jigar: Haan, aur unnhe pick karne ke baad hume press conference mei bhi jana hai. Let's go.

They picked the files and left.


At school
All the students were out. Parents were taking their children back home. Nikhil and Nihal were with their friends. And Meera was standing with her friends.

Friend 1: Meera, mere papa aye hai. Mai chalti hu. Bye!

Meera: Bye.

She saw her friend going back home with her dad.

Friend 2: Achha Meera, aajtak humne kabhi tere dad ko nehi dekha. Vo tujhe kabhi lene kyu nehi aate. Aisa kyu?

Meera: (in her mind)Mere dad...unnhe to shayad maine bhi kabhi nehi dekha...

Friend 3: Meera, kaha khoo gayi? Batana! Tere mom ya dad tujhe kabhi lene kyu nehi aate?

Meera: Kisne kaha nehi aate? Humesha hi to aate hai. Dono hi mujhe lene aate hai.

Friend 2: Lekin humne to kabhi unnhe nehi dekha. Humesha tere kaka aur maasi tujhe aur tere bhaiyo ko lene aate hai.

Meera: Vo dono mere kaka-maasi nehi, vo dono hi mere dad-mom hai.

Friend 3: Ye kaise hosakta hai?

Meera: Kyu nehi hosakta! Mere kaka ya fupa mere dad hai, aur kaki ya maasi hi meri mom hai. Ye sab baatei tumlog nehi samjhoge!

This conversation was heard by Jigar and Rashi, which made Rashi emotional. Tears dropped from her eyes.

Jigar: Rashi, kya hua?

Rashi: Jigar-ji, aap ne suna na? Meera ne kya kaha...

Jigar: Rashi, dekho khud ko sambhalo. Hum hi agar...

Rashi: Jigar-ji, chahiye hum jitni bhi koshishe karle, Gopi aur Jiju ki kaami kabhi puri nehi karsakte.

Jigar: Maanta hu ki hum unnki kaami puri nehi karsakte. Lekin hum koshish to kar sakte hai na?

Meera came to them.

Meera: Baba, Maasi.

Rashi turned away to wipe her tears.

Meera: Baba, maasi ko kya hua?

Jigar: Vo...kuch nehi, beta.

Rashi wiped her tears and turned to them.

Rashi: Mujhe kya hoga? Kuch bhi to nehi!(gave a small smile)

Nikhil and Nihal came. Then all sat in the car and went to Modi Bhavan.


At night- In Modi Bhavan
Living Area

Everyone, except Kokila, were sitting.

Parag: Aajka khana bohot achha tha.

Chirag: Haan.

Hetal: Rashi, Jigar, tum dono time pe press conference mei pohochto gaye the na?

Rashi: Haan, mummyji. Bachcho ko school se pick karne ke baad hi hum chalegaye the.

Chirag: Waise, Jigar, press conference kaisa tha?

Jigar: Bohot achha tha, dad. Kalke newspaper mei ye interview chhapega.

Nikhil: Hume bhi waha bohot mazaa aya!

Everyone laughed.

Parag: Ye to bohot achhi baat hai. Kyu ki aage jake karobar innhe hi to sambhalna hai.

Chirag: Good. Kehna parega, Rashi humara business bohot achhe se handle kar rahi hai.

Rashi: Thank you, Papaji.

Everyone continued their conversation.

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Hope you all enjoyed this update!😊 I'll try to give subtitles from the next update.

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Edited by --Zariyat-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Thanks for PM..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: --Zariyat--

Even i don't like the original Meera. So changed her.
😳

Hopefully, in future you'll get more RaJi scene. I think for one update this much scene was enough. Na??πŸ˜†
πŸ˜›yup it was cute

Ahem-Rashi relationship??πŸ˜• What do you mean by that??
I meas as a sister brother relationship. πŸ˜›

Thanks a lot!πŸ˜ƒ Hope you enjoy the concept and story!

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Posted: 10 years ago
omg ahem left with gopi  so cute love this twist

Tum meri wife ho parosi ki nehi
hahha jigar totally funny🀣

Rashi is helping jigar wow. she has become super woman

kakri hamesha kakri rahe gi😑

Nice story plz update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow. Awesome update. Loved Rashi. She has taken the responsibility of home nd office. She is the best. Nd loved the way ahem supported gopi. Great. Continue soon
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Awesome update.

Loved it.
Thanks for PM..

Glad you liked!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks! More RaJi scenes coming!πŸ˜‰ There's LOOOT more to happen!

Oh! Of course! First let them meet, then let them come back to MB.