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Destiny, Fate & Love Thread 4. Chapter 68 (B) - 76.

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DESTINY, FATE AND LOVE

THREAD # 4

 

The writer smiles at the readers then look up.

Reads what is written up.

Fourth thread? Really????

 

The Writer gets excited and grins like a total loon! She jumps up and starts dancing like a monkey happily.

Deepa(Spvd) and Kittu(Chavvi16) wonder whether they need to throw the writer into mental asylum!

 

The writer, after dancing crazily, looks below and smiles at the readers nervously,

"Guys! I have put up the title track right below so play it, enjoy it and then go further! Wait for a while though as it takes time to load depending on your browsing speed!"

 

 

"Do tell me what you think about it!", the writer murmurs and is about to write further when there is a commotion at her door. The writer looks at her door curiously and the door opens. In walks Daadima dragging Maan and Geet with her followed by Naaniji who is bringing Arnav and Khushi with her. The old ladies stop in front of the writer.

 

Naaniji: Kalpana Bitiya! Humaari maangein poori karo!

 

The writer looks at Naani for a while and then blinks, confused as to what is happening.

 

Daadima: Haan Betaji! Aapko humaari maangein poori karni padegi!

 

The writer looks at Daadima and Naaniji in confusion and nervously speaks up,

"Err... Kya maangein hain aapki?"

 

Naaniji: Humaare Arnav Bitwa ki shaadi mein koi kami nahi rehni chaahiye!

Daadima: Maan Bete ki shaadi bhi ek dum perfect honi chaahiye!

Naaniji: Shaadi ek dum khaandaani tareeke se honi chaahiye!

Daadima: Mehmaan ek hazaar ke aas paas hone chaahiye!

Naaniji: Tumhaare saare doston ko bulaao!

Daadima: Mandap har tarah ke phoolon se sajaao!

 

The old ladies keep on giving more demands for another half hour as writer and the couples look wide eyed at the ladies. The demand is so long that half of the readers have gone to sleep while other half have plugged earphones in their ears and are listening to the title song again and again.

 

Finally the demands about marriage end and the couples and writer heave a sigh of relief. But the old ladies are far from finished. They start discussing where the honeymoon should happen and what all sightseeing the couples should do. ASR and MSK's eyes almost pop out at what their grandmothers are saying while Geet and Khushi blush so much that they resemble tomato. The writer feels thankful that she won't be writing the honeymoon and her story ends at the marriage of both the couples.

 

When the honeymoon demands end, the ladies start a new demand. They want Maaneet and Arhi to have atleast 10 kids. Khushi looks at the ladies in horror while Geet almost faints as they imagine giving birth to 10 kids.

 

The old ladies get carried away and give more demands. The couples look at writer and the writer looks at them. All five sneak away while Daadima and Naaniji continue with their demands. They did not even notice the couples and writer slinking away. After another half hour, they realize that they have been left alone and others have gone away. They pout and look at each other sadly.

 

ZindagiRocks_21, Deelight and fffan123 glare at them and they realize that with others gone there is no one to do the intro and the readers want their intro. They sigh.

 

Naaniji: Ab kya karein?
Daadima: Chalo! Hum hi intro karte hain.

Naaniji: Second thread ka intro Geet aur Khushi ne kiya tha.

Daadima: Third thread ka intro Maan aur Arnav ne kiya tha.

Both together: Aaj hum karte hain!

 

Deepa, Kittu, ZindagiRocks_21, Deelight and fffan123 wake others up and all look at the ladies curiously.

 

Naaniji: Sabhai readers ko hum dono ki taraf se saadar pranaam!

Daadima: Aur aapki writer ko bhagaane ke liye hum dono ko kshama kijiye!

 

The readers accept their apology and eagerly wait for the intro!

 

Naaniji: Aayiye! Aapan sabhai ka DFL ke chauthe thread ma swaagat hai!

 Daadima: Baithiye! Aur iss kahaani ka anand ek chai ke garam pyaale ki saath uthaayiye!

Naaniji: Arre! Garam chai sunke toh humka bhi peene ka man kar raha hai!

Daadima: Toh chalo! Geet aur Khushi ke haath ka chai peene chalte hai!

 

Both the ladies walk out of the door, hunt down their granddaughter-in-laws and go home to have garma garam chai from their bahus' hands. MSK and ASR, like typical husbands, follow their wives at the thought of drinking something made from their hands.

 

After a while, the writer looks into her house sneakily wanting to know whether the ladies are still there or not. Finding the place empty, she heaves a sigh of relief and joins her readers.

 

She grins at Kittu, "Dekha Kittu! You asked me not to faint in the intro aur is baar main faint nahi hui!"

 

She takes a deep breath and then smiles widely at the readers.

 

Hello people, my name is Kalpana and I am the writer of Destiny, Fate and Love.

I am really thankful to all my readers for making my story reach fourth thread.

Thank you guys, for your continuous love, support and encouragement. I really love your reviews and appreciate the few moments you spend for me, not only reading my work but also pressing likes' and commenting on it. Thank you, guys!

 

FOR NEW READERS, PLEASE CHECK THE FIRST THREAD OR ELSE YOU WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO MAKE A HEAD OR TAIL OF WHAT I AM BLABBERING ABOUT IN THE NEXT CHAPTERS! THE LINK TO FIRST THREAD IS IN THE NEXT POST!

 

FOR OLD READERS, GO AHEAD AND READ FURTHER!

 

Next post has the Index where you will find the link to the last thread and new chapters!

 

The third, fourth and fifth post has a surprise to my readers! Do check it out! This surprise is made due to request made by fffan123! So thank fffan123 if you like the idea!

 

The sixth, seventh and eighth post has the WISH LIST!

It is arranged as per the thread in which it was mentioned. Check whether your name is there or not! You might not remember whether you made a wish or not!

 

THANK YOU FOR READING!

 

Kalpana!

 

 

P.S. If you enjoyed this intro, do check out the intro for second and third threads, it is even more hilarious!

 

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MAIN CHARACTERS


Maan Singh Khurana: 28 years old currently

Gurmeet Choudhary





Arnav Singh Raizada : 26 years old currently

Barun Sobti





Geet Raizada : 21 years old currently 

Drashti Dhami





Khurana Kumari Gupta : 20 years old currently


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SUPPORTING CAST FROM GHSP SIDE


Daadima aka Savitri Khurana

Drashti Dhami ,Gurmeet Choudhary & Anju Mahendroo



Dev Singh Khurana : 26 years old currently





Naintara Dev Khurana (NT) : 25 years old currently





Anvesha Arjun Rathod (Annie) : 25 years old currently




Arjun Rathod : 26 years old currently

 

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SUPPORTING CAST FROM IPKKND SIDE


Naaniji aka Devyani Raizada

Barun , Daljeet , Akshay , Karan and Jayshree




Maamiji aka Manorama Raizada

Daljeet and Utkarsha




Anjali Shyam Jha : 28 years currently

Daljit Kaur





Shyam Jha : 28 years currently

Abhaas Mehta





Aakash Singh Raizada : 25 years old currently





Paayal Kumari Gupta : 24 years old currently

Deepali Pansare





Ammaji aka Garima Gupta 

Sanaya, Deepali and Pyumori





Buaji aka Madhumati

Sanaya, Deepali and Abhaa on the sets of Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon




Lavanya Kashyap : 22 years old currently

Sana Khan





Nandkishor (NK) : 23 years old currently

Karan Goddwani



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WISH LIST


Dear new and old friends,

For those who don't know this is a special post called wish list!

Any scene my readers wish to see all you have to do is mention it through your review or mail and I will try my best to fulfil it. This post will contain a list of all your wishes!

I will also note who has requested it and when it was requested.

Once it is fulfilled, I will note it as fulfilled.

 

I have taken the note of all the wishes made by you guys until and have it posted it in three posts!

 

Now I cannot guarantee that I will put each and every one of your request in the story but one thing I can promise and that is that if I cannot add it into the story then I will write it as one shot dedicated to the person who requested it.

Thank you for your constant support. Love you guys for it!

Thank you!
Kalpana!

 

 

 

THREAD I WISHES

 

 

1. Chhavi16 : Page 25 : Wanted to see romantic scenes if not from main leads then from supporting characters

 Fulfilled in Chapter 19 Thread I Page 29

 

2. Chhavi16 : Page 39 : Geet should meet Khushi

Fulfilled in Chapter 35 Thread I Page 89

 

3. Spvd : Page 40 : Wanted Popcorn to be included

Fulfilled after Chapter 23 Thread I Page 41

 

4. Chhavi16: Page 42 : Wanted the boys to fall first in love

Fulfilled in Chapter 28 Thread I Page 58 and Chapter 30 Thread I Page 68

 

5. Chhavi16: Page 45 : Wants to see jealous Maan and Arnav

Fulfilled in Chapter 67 Thread III Page 137

 

6. Spvd : Page 47 : Wants Arnav Buaji Comic scenes

Fulfilled in Chapter 53 (A) Thread II Page 121

 

7. FragileAngel : Through Mail : Separate Posts for Maaneet and Arhi once!

Fulfilled in Chapter 25 (A) & (B) Thread I Page 47 and 50

 

8. Spvd : Page 65 : Exclusive Post just for Maaneet (the way ch. 28 was dedicated to Arhi)

Fulfilled in Chapter 30 Thread I Page 68

 

9. Spvd : Page 65 : Icecream scene for Maaneet

Fulfilled in Chapter 37 Thread I Page 100

 

10. Suhaaana : Page 67 : Exclusive Post just for Maaneet (Check Wish No. 8 for details)

Fulfilled in Chapter 30 Thread I Page 68

 

11. Spvd : Page 69 : Deepu wanted to kiss Dadi's and Maan's cheeks

Fulfilled after Chapter 31 Thread I Page 72

 

12. Chhavi16 : Page 73 : Wanted the girls to fall in love slowly

Fulfilled (Atleast I think it was slow enough! Not sure about her though)

 

13. Spvd : Page 78 : Wanted Khushi to tell Arnav she thinks Chote is a 11 yr old kid.

Fulfilled in Chapter 54 (A) Thread II Page 135

 

14. Chhavi16 : Page 90 : Wanted to see all four leads in the rain.

Unfulfilled : Cannot put it in the story. Will write it as a one shot later.

 

15. Spvd : Page 96 : Wanted to see Geet in office bringing lunch for Maan

Unfulfilled : If I did this, there will be lot of plotholes. Will write it as a one shot later.

 

16. Spvd : Page 96 : Wanted to see a tie scene between Maaneet

Fulfilled in Chapter 43 Thread II Page 8

 

17. Spvd : Page 96 : Deepu wanted to kiss Arhi

Unfulfilled : Small scene 4 coming up soon!

 

18. Arshi_1982 : Page 97 : Wanted a scene where Geet is bold and Maan blushes

Unfulfilled : Not sure where to put the scene!

 

19. Arshi_1982 : Page 97 : Wanted to see a retro party at KC with Geet and Khushi dressed in modern style

Unfulfilled : Not sure where to put the scene!

 

20. Arshi_1982 : Page 97 : Wanted to see Khushi and Arnav dhaaba scene with Deewana tera' in the background

Unfulfilled : The song does not fit the story. Will write it as a one shot later!

 

21. Maaneet099 : Page 102 : Want to see Anjali and Maan Scene

Fulfilled in Chapter 44 Thread II Page 17 & Chapter 53 (B) Thread II Page 127

 

22. Spvd : Page 102 : Want to see Geet / Soni in KC

Fulfilled in Chapter 57 Thread III Page 58

 

23. Arshi_1982 : Page 112 : Wanted dance sequences in engagement

Fulfilled in Chapter 54 (A) Thread II Page 135 & Chapter 54 (B) Thread II Page 144

 

24. Chhavi16 : Page 144 : Wants guys to confess first.

Fulfilled (I Hope so)

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THREAD II WISHES

 

1. Maria_awan : Page 2 : Wants Arhi & Maaneet Confession soon!

Unfulfilled : Confession took a lot of time!

 

2. Maria_awan : Page 2 : Romance on any song of Salman Khan

Fulfilled in Chapter 68 (A) Thread III Page 145

 

3. Chavvi16 : Page 3 : Boys will be the one to say I love you first.

Fulfilled in Chapter  48 (A) Thread II Page 51 for Maan and Chapter 54 (B) Thread II Page 144 for Arnav 

 

4. Fffan123 : Page 3 : Night Time Romantic scene with old songs

Unfulfilled : Will fulfil it as a one shot later!

 

5. The Dark Knight : Page 5 : Want a jealousy scene of Maan!

Fulfilled in Chapter 67 Thread III Page 137

 

6. Flowers4u : Page 5 : Double date of two jodis!

Unfulfilled : Will write as a one shot later!

 

7. Sonarajasingh : Page 5 : A jealous Khushi!

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 54 (B) Page 144

 

8. Spvd : Page 12 : Arnav gets a chance to get jealous!

Fulfilled in Chapter 67 Thread III Page 137

 

9. Spvd : Page 12 : Wants Maan to propose in proper style

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 48 (A) Page 51

 

10. Spvd : Page 12 : The Raizadas should get to know Arnav's job as driver

Unfulfilled : Will write as a one shot later!

 

11. Mina420 : Page 20 : Wants Geet to get hold of Maan's baby photos!

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 45 Page 25

 

12. Mina420 : Page 20 : Wants Khushi to see Arnav's baby photos!

Unfulfilled : Thinking of a way to fulfil it!

 

13. Spvd : Page 29 : Wants to see Geet seeing Maan's dusht daanav avatar at Office

Fulfilled in Thread III Chapter 57 Page 58

 

14. Spvd : Page 49 : Want Arhi romance with phone interruption (like during Payash First date!)

Unfulfilled : Will write a one shot later!

 

15. Spvd : Page 88 : Want someone to record Arnav's antics with Khushi during their romance time before the big twist and show it to Raizadas.

Unfulfilled : Will write it as a one shot later!

 

16. Spvd : Page 88 : Want Thoda Sa Pyaar Hua Hai & Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan picturised on Maaneet.

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled soon!

 

17. Chavvi16 : Page 145 : Kittu wants to meet Arnav once and thrash him!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled soon!

 

 

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THREAD III WISHES

 

1. Chavvi16 : Page 8 : Chhavi wants to thrash Brij!

Fulfilled in Chapter 55 (B) Thread III Page 23

 

2. Spvd : Page 18 : Wants to see Arnav and Geet together and Arnav bechara get tortured by Geet's bak-bak.

Fulfilled in Chapter 66 (A) Thread III Page 116

 

3. Spvd : Page 34 : Wants to slap Maan once!

Fulfilled in Chapter 55 (E) Thread III Page 42

 

4. Spvd : Page 40: Wants to see Arnav and Geet together!

Fulfilled in Chapter 66 (A) Thread III Page 116

 

5. Spvd : Page 57 : Wants to kiss and hug Dev!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled soon!

 

6. Spvd : Page 62 : Wants to hug Naintara!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled soon!

 

7. Spvd : Page 66 : Wants an One Shot where Arnav regrets, repeats and grovels for his behavior with Khushi!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled in the story soon!

 

8. Spvd : Page  79 : Geet should scold Arnav for the way he treated Khushi!

Fulfilled in Chapter 65 (B) Thread III Page 103  

 

9. mannu_minnie : Page 87 : Want Geet to do some jasoosi on Arhi and bajaao of Maan!

Unfulfilled : Sorry! Cannot be done! Poori story ki band bajaayegi!

 

10. sriif : Page 101 : Wants Geet to make Maan so jealous that he should become possessive about her!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled soon!

 

11. Chhavi16 : Page 101 : Want Khushi to scare Arnav but in different way!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled just for you!

 

12. Chavvi16 : Page 101 : Wants Arnav to pay before Khushi forgives him!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled soon!

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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD
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wow new thread
and you didnt faint
thats the best
damn have too many wishes me
waise you fulfilled them all so well
nani and dadi introduce
wonder who will do fifth one
hope it does reach that
and there is arnav or maan to shock family
loved the track
just so beautiful
poor maneet and arhi and kappa
had to listen to their babbling
i feel bad for them
what a surprise dear