Originally posted by sneha02
Okay so i had somehow managed to miss the fifth update n when i laid my eyes on the sixth one i was like haila.where's the continuation of the mud pouring incident...mais just had a talk with the cvs or what...she too made the incident vanish...M mad...but then i looked back n found my answers...thank god i did...yepp..
Pata hai, I was waiting and waiting and waiting for your comment on the 5th chapter! Your absence there sort of pissed me off. And socha bhi kaise that I will skip incidents! RUDE! The fifth chapter is a really important piece in the jigsaw puzzle of Ranveer n Panchi relationship..completely missed by the cvs...this incident made them move away n their closed world opened up to others...
Their confrontation in the show could've been prolonged or better presented but like everything else, it was half baked. even earlier it ws just about them...yea rv had flings but nothing major or something more important than the bond that they shared...yep it was more of moti always clinging on to him while he took her more for granted...even samar came closer to moti cause nonu allowed him actually wanted him to...sachi is another part that me adored but cvs being cvs hamesha wayward ho jate hain...
SaChi...yaad mad dila! πanyway.. okie so eyes is totally about panchi alone n her emotions at being left alone by her best friend For me...n i totally felt her emotions...very well described..n the way her college mates reacted made me feel her predicament...loud n clear...sympathised with her infact empathised too as i had a bad memory recall of the time when i was in standard five...
This incident really is something which I feel hit close to everyone...being publicly humiliated sucks so much! oh well moving on... ranveer in this part ws a total jerk for me sorry...whtever might have been his reasons moi just cant look past at what he did..he left his best friend alone at a time when she needed him the most...unforgivable for me... nopes...n me couldnt even feel his pain when he blinked his eyes away... nahi yaar...panchi just stated plain facts sans emotions n tears... so he should have gone into introspection but he was hurt...okie chalo he was hurt at his moti talking to him like that but then his hurt was misplaced for me... cause no explanation justifies his absence for me...The conversation between these two ws natural n very well.handled... n moti's reply ws perfect... yep he infact did commit a grave error to misunderstand panchi... n the rift is pretty broad n clear now... wont say m loving it...but dooriyan bhi hai zaroori..
Maine RV ko bohat bada villain bana diya π But it happens...abhi he really is at the fault. Hopefully that won't always be the case in regards to him. Bohat dooriyan hogayi hain na? Let's change the tempo then! The sixth part was more of outsiders walking into Rahi's world...Rukmini..well she still doesnt interesrt me at the moment...
good thing she is just a minor but integral part..it doesn't matter if it's universally liked or not. n her face being a mirror is the exact opposite of what we got in the show...oh well you dont have actors to handle so you do have an upper hand...Me loved this jeemichi meeting in the show itself...n you made it better...loved that little panchi bit...very well done...so unlike panchi in the show but lovely too..she is spirited though not all that adventurous or opiniated either but given a chance at being all bindass she could have done it...well me would have loved to see her doing this atleast...so that twist in the end made this chap so fulfillinh...N yea Rahi all distant n far away...hayyee...cant wait to see them ek saath again...
Panchi's reaction with the table climbing really is SO unlike her. But I took a leaf from her later character development. It was just a little glimpse of what she will be, she hasn't reached that place yet. Despite all her maturity, this girl has a right to her share of free spritedness. More on that later πThanks for this mais...love your efforts...makes Rahi come alive once more..nope they are not over for me still but this ff makes my missing them a little lesser... thanks so much...
I just hope I don't screw it all up and make it all worthwhile like it's supposed to be..