Originally posted by: --Akshu--It was nice Maisy the library intro was hahaha so good I am glad it shaped up well π
He was familiar with the library obvio school days this guy has played along with beautiful girls
I loved the way he was looking around at what was happening in the library and suddenly looks at a girl he was so curious to know about those Hindi books Ranveer and uska library connection is really one of my most favourite things about his RA days xD Him making out with various girls on the library ke peeche wali stairs says so much about his character and I just don't want to ignore it ever.
I could so imagine the scene the way he must have said and Ruku must have turned
I liked the scene it was better she leaving a book he reading the name it was good I had liked RV-Rukmini ka intro scene in the show and all their library chit chats but I didn't want to drag it here hence sab ek hi mulaqat mein saffa chat!
My JeeMiChi ahhh miss them so much the scene u chose was fab
Thus scene was so hilarious and I liked u chooses a particular scene for JeeMiChi which has already happend
This was was cute she rejecting both nuts wale chocolates and kaju walen samose I could just imagine Omi's face lol What wouldn't I give to see that face again?
But the end was amazing she climbed up and left did this actually happen? Or u added it? Akshu beta, ab forget the show and concentrate on this fic π That hadn't happened in the show, I added that little detail here. It's pretty safe to assume that things are changing from here.
The last part ahhh Nonu and Moti so distant from each other wanting to share with each other as always but ahhh this is perfect Next chapter is totally RaHified! π³
Update Soonish Maisy Bus, updating abhi!
Muah
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