This chapter is so mesmerizing Maisy...Me Just loved it...I clearly imagine the scene where RV was playing guitar and Panchi offered him that apple. I am Still in that mode...The emotions RV felt when Panchi was on stage...I must say, you described it so beautifully.. .Your words create magic dear👏...Love the flow of emotions from both the side..Can't wait to read more so plz do continue soon...Take care
PS: Yaay,I am first one to comment😳
This content was originally posted by: ARandKJFanRes
I'm here :DUnresFirst of all Mais, I love the concept. Thank you! <3 Though I was never a typical RaHi fan, I loved their story as much as I loved KiSha's. I kind of forgot that you are a KiSha fan 😆 It was heartbreaking to see the story turn into something else altogether so thank you for writing this! *sigh* we RaHi fans always had it rough.Now, onto the story.First chapter:Such a simple beginning and it was pure RaHi! One thing I've always admired in you Mais is how you capture the basic essence of the character so effortlessly! Happens..when one spends all the time thinking about characters than their own life tou aisa hi hota hai xD The way only Moti can understand Nonu and also how only she can provide to him the comfort he requires is so heart-touching <3 Also, I love how you've shown Panchi's childishness the way it is supposed to be. It's not immature as many people tend to make it. Ikr! She is such a perfect balance between childish and mature..mostly only one aspect of her personality is focused on i.e. her maturity. But she isn't perfect and by god, she does make mistakes. And I am so going to make her make mistakes here.Then came Ranveer's thoughts. This is all I hoped he would be in S2. The 'man' who would give a tough fight to KD. Your spin on it is exactly what I hoped it would be. This was the Ranveer I came to love in S1, the one who gave a tough fight to who he hates without even touching him. Aaah...s2 ki beginning wala RV! Seriously, I fell for him all over again there! Though the happy go lucky Nonu is no doubt precious but this no-nonsense man who gets what he wants and gets it on his own fair terms is just..aaahhh! *heart eyes*"Hum ne apni life mein bohat galtiyan ki hain, kya kya repeat nahin kar paoge?"- This line my friend, is perfect. This is literally the basic premise of the story. Panchii :') Mature, understanding Panchi. The way she was meant to be as a fully developed character. She is right, mistakes are to be learned from but there comes a point when we stop learning because it's just too much to take in. The way I see RaHi, all their development came from mistakes. The mistakes he made and the mistakes she made. Their whole progression lies in how they fix those mistakes and change because of them. But you are right, there are some mistakes one just can't fix. They remain their, lurking in the corner, not always visible but never quite gone. And when the consequences of those mistakes come rushing in without a warning...that is always tough.Finally, the beginning of the break. I guess they were far too broken by then. Their bond did change a lot didn't it. It has changed and change it was supposed to be. They are growing up, their bond can't remain the same. For them to be with each other as man and woman, their bond can't remain of that of a boy and a girl. It will shape itself accordingly.Second chapter:Smooth, simply smooth transition. Also, YOU GAVE PANSH <33 Can't help it! And the dialogues are so RV :O I love how you prove me right har baar 😆 I am seriously not very good at dialogues so this make me happy! The exact point Panchi stopped reacting is so precise. 'Like everyone else'- She's not everyone else, she is Panchi, her Nonu's moti. This piece is so unique because Panchi doesn't dance to his tunes and doesn't forgive as easily. Yes, yes, yes! This is what I always loved about her! Despite her putting him first all his life, when it comes to her own self, she does what she wants to do and not think about him much! Aah! You put it so perfectly! <3The final two paras left me speechless. There's literally nothing I can say. It's so damn perfect Mais. Thanks yous!!Hope you're satisfied with the comment! :) YESSS!!I'll be reading Chap 3 later :D~You Know Who ;)Meri Dude!
This content was originally posted by: sweetdesireThis chapter is so mesmerizing Maisy...Me Just loved it... Thankies Geet! <3 I clearly imagine the scene where RV was playing guitar and Panchi offered him that apple. It was taken from the show..aisa hua tha 😆 I am Still in that mode...The emotions RV felt when Panchi was on stage...I must say, you described it so beautifully.. .Your words create magic dear👏 Awwiiee..I just try to do justice..feels good that you like it!...Love the flow of emotions from both the side..Can't wait to read more so plz do continue soon... I know this chapter took some time..hopefully that won't happen again! Take care
PS: Yaay,I am first one to comment😳 You are always the first! 😳
This content was originally posted by: shammukhsplendid. how much i hated Rv at that time when he was paying all his attention to Kiya (may be due to the offscreen thing) ignoring panchhi 😔and when in trouble he used to come to panchhi like for a screenplay for their performance. panchhi suffered a lot that time.then Avi came into picture.
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