The freshers talent hunt...something that was mercilessly murdered by the cvs...loved this take on it...meaningful tha n allowed the characters to grow too...rather being reduced to a mere add on of no real value to the story...Phew! This makes me feel good..I thought I was going too rushed with it but I didn't want to drag it much..
Things aren't the same between them...n the best part is that they feel it too..I kind of feel bad though 😆 Angst angst karke I am making them drift apart sooo much! Nothing feels normal between them..am I doing it wrong? Do tell!Ranveer at his musical best yet Panchi slightly distant even annoyed stays on only to be forgotten by him...n he wakes up to her only when she walks up on stage n makes herself acknowledged by the world n by him too... yet he wants her to look out for him though on his part he has forgotten that she even sings...well loved their complex relationship. Ranveer, the adorable gadha, always was a bit of a tubelight when it comes to Panchi. Either he will realize her talent when he needs them for his own gain or acknowledge them when he has no choice but to do so, like it happened here. Or he will know everything about her but never say it. He'd need to be repeatedly clubbed on the head when it comes Panchi..and clubbed he will 😉Love the way she literally fades away unnoticed by a self engrossed Ranveer too busy with his own life...typical nonu...n me loved a ready to make herself felt Panchi...independent n ready to defy groupism...You know in the beginning of S2 how there were repeated hints to Panchi being the only one who is at the center rather than in any group, I effin' loved it. JeeMiChi triangle wasn't exactly how I wanted it but it was still amazing, how this one girl wrecked havoc in the life of two guys who control the college. Man, if this wasn't a RaHi FF..I would've loved to do a take on JeeMiChi triangle! who takes centre stage without her best friends help...nervous undoubtedly yet faces the music alone...panchi independent n not sad about it is a treat...n me loved when Ranveer accepts that he is a fool to think all her songs will be forever be for him...wow...yea he can't always take her for granted. You are so my best commenter :*They are at the point where their relationship s undergoing major changes..changes palpable to them...n now we will get to know whether these changes make their relationship stronger or makes them drift apart...The way things are shaping up..they gonna be drifted apart for some time. But I hope that when they do get together..it's satisfying to everyone.Avi comes in too..in small doses is good enough...Avi has to be there, he plays a major part. But since I can't divert from RaHi's POVs, he'll be seen through either Panchi or RV's eyes. Which is good I guess..at least he won't be butchered :|Loved the small little details that you have added...like the apple bit n sophiya's thoughts too. Sophia tou my jaan! <3Liked this part mais... loving the way you concentrate on innermost thoughts n reactions of these two...makes for thoughtful reading truly. That's just my style...being all descriptive about the feelings than the environment..glad you like it!Thanks a lot for this entire rewrite...loving the way you are taking it forward... this was about an incident which will definitely define their bond or the lack of it in future...I am just hoping that this Rewrite won't disappoint anyone..it's kind pressurizing 😆
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