Arjun FF.. The Lady in Red (A Arjun -Rosanna Fic) Ch 68-69 Pg 73 19.1 - Page 3

Anu

@anu91

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update dr...
Picture perfect...
Admiring ur writing avni...
Do publish as novel...definitely blockbuster hit...
Waiting for next part...
Congrats for new thread...

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry I am later but I am soo held up in many many things that I am not able to focus on anything else...but managed to read it today!

Coming back to the update...

Its super awesome...

Rosy at her best form, actually desi form, haan? she must be looking beautiful and dressed to kill fits her perfectly...the gun and pepper spray gives the apt touches to it...

So Arjun is there to baby sit and Karan-Rosy convo was too good...

then Arjun's jealousy seeing her with Mario...and the romantic moments...everything was beautifully written,

Mario is the spy na? hope he doesnt do much harm and just assumes Arjun as one of her admirers...

aww Arjun's gift was so beautiful and then making her blush...the sweet romantic convo...the almost kiss...very romantic and passionate...

cont soon

Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago

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750385

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

yup yup I am back

and this time no confusion

I am getting smart you see

I saw the hints here and there

ahaan... so sabkuch uss Again ke problem hai!!

hm hm...

waiting for the next part

Marion bani spy

uff iske problem kya hai?

ab kya hoga?

jaldi jaldi bolna

Karan miya... u will be dead when u see yr partner

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Firstly Congrats for the new thread
awesome update
loved it
Rosy-Karan convo was 😆😆
The Entire scene on the roof was playing in front of my eyes
It was beautifully written
So Mario spying them
interesting
his next move will be worth seeing
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Swara85

@Swara85

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

Hi.. Congratulations for the new thread..😊
Coming to update it was awesome..
Loved the moments between Arjun and Rosy..
Arjun taunting.. 😆 and that bracelet and her reaction..
" Butterflies..seriously?"
Karan and Ro convo..😆
someone is spying them..I guess its Mario..lets see
loved this part.. waiting for next..thanks for pm..

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 10 years ago

So Gabbar ,

Let me get this straight !!

Arjun and Ro wont still each other about there feelings - Idiots 😆😆😭

Karan is the calm one along with Sameer 😳

Ro was married to Yash aka Amit Deasi hired by Sikky to destroy the family and Ro knew it and she still played along ...

Yash is dead along with Anu ...and Ro well part of her is dead too ...

Loads of things still hidden ...

And most of all we have two hot headed ppl who are stubborn too ..and i pity the rest of them ...

Yrah Buddy ...good job ...loss of my hair is on you

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Anny90

@Anny90

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

nice banner...😃

i like it..'one step closer'..😃

"he would not make it this time, without her. "👍🏼

last performance!!😲

jumpsuit in alumni party.😛

he was and is deeply in love with her...and this is same for her..

time or distrance badhne se relationship weak hoti hai par yahan uski ulti effect dikhai de rahi hai..
love the bond between ro and his partner..

dont know but have feelings like this merio knows something about her that can lead her into danger..

nancy drew!!😃😃

lol he called her pretty and she is offended..😆

ohh...gift haan..😳😳

they only use words for argument but their eyes do more of the work of showing those deep emotions and feelings..😊

evry time ...i have to say this ...i love the update..😃

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smanchik

@smanchik

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Girl!!!

Amazing update; I am really quizzical about Arjun's behaviour, the reason is as far as I know, he wouldn't do anything without a motive. Yeah he might have gotten lost in the moment and didn't intend most of it but the But I don't think Arjun missed Periera observing him through out the party 😉, may be he did part of the confrontation with Ro to bring him out of his cave because Mario is really possessive about Ro. May be I might be over thinking this, but my alarms rang when you said Arjun didn't notice perera. I am waiting as of what will perera do, because you haven't even gave an hint of his emotions. So I am waiting eagerly for your next update. I really love how this story is shaping. I hope Rosy is not in for any real danger. Congratulations on your new thread. keep on updating.⭐️👏

with love,

your reader

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857870

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update
congraulation on the new thread
Arjun Rosy moments were amazing...wow Arjun gifted her a bracelet...loved her reaction
so Mario is spying on them
loved Rosy and Karan phone convo
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

unresed in Pg 3

Congrats on the new thread! 👏

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