*Edited*
Uff...ek din pitegi tu.😈
What a place to stop at.😒
Okay here I am, where do I start. You say you are no good at writing action yet this one floated beautifully. It was easy for my to picture each and every scene, and punch as I read the whole thing.
It felt as though the scene was playing out right in front of my eyes.
Starting from Rosy acting nonchalant as Mario whisked her away even when she knew she was threading on a dangerous territory to Arjun driving like a mad man to find his lady love. Brilliantly described and written, hats off.
Then there was the brave Rosy, always thinking even while she is under the influence of drug and bound with no way to escape.
Mario..what can I say about him, I didn't expect him to go down easy and he didn't disappoint me one bit, I hated him but I must say he is very impressive and ruthless to the bitter end. I suppose when you have worked hard to be where you are at it is not easy to give in so easily, never mind the fact that he would have lost it all eventually.
I am glad both Rosy and Arjun got in their share of punches when it came to Mario and I am glad they tried their best to catch him alive even though, they, especially Rosy, would have preferred him alive, in the end he left her no choice.
It was either him or Arjun and I felt bad that she had no choice in the matter. Once again the her mission her need for revenge on behalf of her precious child took backseat to her love, Arjun. She may not realize it now, but I think for now it was the best choice.
Even if Mario would have been left alive he would have never revealed anything on Sikandar, because he obviously aware that either way he would have died, at hands of Rosy and Arjun or at hands of Sikandar.
Besides deep down I think she knows that her revenge won't be complete without Arjun beside her.
😡 You not only got him cut with a knife but you got him shot too. Damn woman you are dangerous, warn kiya karo warna revenge is sweet dish best served cold, Samjhi ya Samjhaun!😈
Okay moving on...finally she gave in and let out her pain and frustration, her real reasons to marry the devil.
And finally Arjun realized what she gave up for him, for Rosh, for her father, for her entire family and that is just the tip of a ice berg.
Finally they both realize that beneath that deep bond of friendship, lies feelings much deeper, much stronger than mere friendship.
Finally they both realized that they are bound by more than the friendship and shared pain.
Finally they both realized that they loved each other and will always love each other no matter who or what comes between them.
I am so glad that things are out in the open before we move on to the next phase of this story, because this realization is needed for what is to come next.
This love for each other is what is going to get them thru whatever happens next.
Loved, loved the update, brilliantly done behna, seriously I am speechless as always.
I have something for you.😛
😈 Yes I am evil!😃
Enjoy behna.😛
Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 9 years ago
