Days with you - A RaHi os,, for Kriti - Page 4

Wow Neha what an OS!! The way u described Panchi from Nonu's view! Uff<3 Loooved each n every line <3 write more plss

thanks for the PM :) i will surely comment about it once i read it :)

Omg! Omg! Omg! 😊

M sorry m late
But Neha wow this is beautiful the way u described it was out standing
Rainy days she is struggling and she gets wet and for him she looks amazing and sexy in rainy days
In some days she wears short clothes high heels and he hears other saying geez look at her so cuteee

In summer days we hates it as she us sweating al the time and is using set tissues and rv finds it lucky hahaha he wanted to e them but he realizes she will throw them in the garbage that was hilarious and in winter seasons she is covered fully except her face and he can see her lips and eyes awww

And in gloomy days she is active and he loves her days with her as it's new everyday

Such a cute concept Neha I loved it
Keep writing more
Muah <3

Originally posted by: Sarah_Angel9

Wow Neha what an OS!! The way u described Panchi from Nonu's view! Uff<3 Loooved each n every line <3 write more plss

Sarah thanks for those lovely comments n loving each line...m super duper glad...

Originally posted by: tinaswea

Omg! Omg! Omg! 😊

It was fabulous!

Ranveer ! I am in love with this guy! He loves her girl sooo damn much!

Uh wrote it sooo beautifully! 

I loved it 😊 

I loved the way you wrote everything!  The concept was new and unique! 

Aww.. the way Ranveer was explaining panchi's beauty was superb! 

You are awesome! 

You write extremely welll!

Keep writing! 

Lots of love 

Tina 😊

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

M sorry m late
But Neha wow this is beautiful the way u described it was out standing
Rainy days she is struggling and she gets wet and for him she looks amazing and sexy in rainy days
In some days she wears short clothes high heels and he hears other saying geez look at her so cuteee

In summer days we hates it as she us sweating al the time and is using set tissues and rv finds it lucky hahaha he wanted to e them but he realizes she will throw them in the garbage that was hilarious and in winter seasons she is covered fully except her face and he can see her lips and eyes awww

And in gloomy days she is active and he loves her days with her as it's new everyday

Such a cute concept Neha I loved it
Keep writing more
Muah <3

Please no sorry dear...u read it no that's enough..

so sorry Neha I know I am very late sorry

coming to the OS Neha fantastic reading this I made the best use of my time.

Ranveer falling in love with panchi every season is so cute and ya Romantic 😉
How he observed each and every detail of his love , how he admired her beauty (no doubts anybody will be mesmerised by her beauty because she is beautiful)How he is attracted towards her in rainy season, how he is jealous of the wet tissue she uses in summer that was so cute

The thing I loved was how u described her dresses her appearance I can imagine panchi in those dresses

keep writing dear
Madhura

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