OS *DARK LOVE* - Page 2

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

 Just love the OS dear

very intense and portrayed beautifully

Love the story

awesome

do write more

Geet

Thanks a lot Geet

Originally posted by: SweetAndSpice

Haye ⭐️⭐️

You know there was a very similar two shot which someone wrote! It reminded me of that two shot...

The person wrote the same for Swaron Kriyansh Kisha and Rahi... 😉😉😉

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Ok well for me it was obvio KISHA 

Coz KD's character is a 'BAD BOY'...ye sirf more intense version of Bad boy hai!😆😉

I loved it!!! ⭐️ A OS full of angel  and devil 😈

Seeing the good side of the bad boy ❤️

I assume KD did not die ❤️ because I can't bare sad endings 🥺

Intense chemistry ⭐️

I want to read further 😳 I wish this was a FF 😳 I loved it that much 😳

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You know I guess your the only guy who I have seen loving Kisha soo much 👏👏👏

Yeah there are some ppl but you take soo much effort and write Kisha FFs and OSs!⭐️

I really appreciate that!🤗

yaa i have read that two shots . It was awsome

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Beautiful OS Stavan

 

Amazing as always

So... I toh imagined it on Kisha... 😃

😭 Sry bt I hated d end...🥺

Can't imagine Kisha separate esp. anyone's death...

Sry just my POV...

Bt really amazing 😃

Keep writing 😊

thanks a lot Khushi

Originally posted by: sneha02

Stavan a really beautiful os...found it amazing

The girl with her love actually evokes feeling in a tough nut n the guy all rough outside is a real softie inside...what a lovely pair...

The end made it intense n since the mood s sombre all through me liked the end that way though me hates separation..

Love all your works yaar..keep rocking

Thanks for this

Thanks a lot Neha

Originally posted by: KDreamer

Stavan bhai...u r awesome...

Kya os hai...wow...

I love bad boys...wid golden heart...

Badhiya os...

Sweet girl...bad boy...best combo...

...socho yaha kiss pehle..proposal baadme...wo bhi inyense wala kiss...

Waah kya baat hai...

I imagined it on kisha...

Bt ending...was really gud...

Loved it...

N ya...ofcourse i imagined it on my kisha

Thanks a lot shatz

Hey Stavan.
I loved the os,its amazing.
Nice concept.
Ur stories are always unique and beautiful.

Edited by priya1101 - 10 years ago

Wow Great OS, For me The Girl was obvsly panchi bc so sweet & sensible, & the boy, it was the Jerk RV from S1..though i don't like sad endings bt i liked this os, really beautifully writen:) write more

Originally posted by: priya1101

Hey Stavan.
I loved the os,its amazing.
Nice concept.
Ur stories are always unique and beautiful.

Thanks a lot Priya

Originally posted by: Sarah_Angel9

Wow Great OS, For me The Girl was obvsly panchi bc so sweet & sensible, & the boy, it was the Jerk RV from S1..though i don't like sad endings bt i liked this os, really beautifully writen:) write more

Wow this was fab dark love
Bad guy good girl I dunno why I love such stories

He was a bully and I loved what she spoke about him everyone has a dark side and that is his
He liked it

My fav part was when he stood behind her and she closed her eyes and he said I am not a good guy don't fall for me this was fab

And then on the terrace the kiss and be dint know why was he feeling like that
She says I love you and he just goes away from there

Loved it the last part where he dies and before thathe says I love u u are a Angel
And she was sobbing it was perfect!

For me it was RaHi they fit perfect here<3
Keep writing more