The OS seemed so perfect to me. It of course, had its own flaws n errors, but I guess thats what made it shine.
The girl was of course heart broken, but what made her shine and the way it was knitted together are the pros of the story. Well, the main con of this story that I didn't like was that she'd move on that easily? After all moving on is the hardest thing to do. You could have written about her inner mind n feelings to make this a bit more look like reality. Otherwise, the OS was amazing. <33
Sorry if you felt my comment, rude. It wasnt meant to be rude, just honest. 😊 Sorry, again.
Coming to the Author's Note:
I wish you n your friend all the best of luck in your life ahead. I thank your best friend for bringing out the real n confident you, and also, for giving me my confident gaarlfraand
And you know I love you, right? <33
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