Originally posted by: sumimitai don't know what to say after reading it...i m dazed with it...๐
๐the update was freaking awsome and superb..๐dheere dheere i m getting it...actually what is happening...the story is becoming more and more interesting...it was bit scary...u r an expert in writing adventurous and thrilling story...aditi..keep writing..well i m very much curious to know what will happen next..so update it soonwith lots of lovemoumita
Originally posted by: yogini64m sooo sorryyy for being sooo late here... ๐
very interesting story ... i must say... ๐
both updates are poles apart... obviously her life changed all of a sudden n she have no clue...
i've a thing for fantasy fictions... imaginations beyond reality ... looks like m not alone with such thoughts... ๐
her life was quite simple with simple dreams ... but whats with some strange things around her .. ๐ต
this 8:57 time thingy is quite weird ... now I have a feeling that may be this antique watch has something to do with her jumping in ancient times... ๐ณ
what hapoened that late night was very scary ... ๐ณ
ur house disappears all of a sudden n then whole town transforms in a forest n possibly a war land is a nightmare ofcourse...
awww... such a sweet horse... these animals are actually very sympathetic... ๐ค
lol... poor guy ... n poor avleen... both are finding each other superweird...
this happens only when ppl from different centuries meet... like it happen occasionally... haha... #superweird imaginations... ๐คฃ
riverside view must be very beautiful...
update soon ๐
Originally posted by: ..nams..that was amazing!!
seems like some kind of time travel isnt it?well i dont know whats all this about, me getting curious! continue soon.. else u will find me irking you to update every now and then :P
Originally posted by: aishu3003namastee๐
wil unres soonish๐ณunres๐ณadi (can i call u adi๐ณ?)๐คfab updateee๐damn interestinggg๐soo avleen has travelled back in time๐and who tried to kill her๐ฒloveddd aaron's intro and also flame๐d small moment between aaron-avleen was niceee๐ณwer s he taking her๐waiting eagerly for d nxt partโญ๏ธupdate soonish๐
Originally posted by: -reine-wowiee so soon next part..haye
dii this is damn awsum story..i just loved the way u wrote down every single think..so she is in forest of that name sorry i forgot that name..anyways she found a lost horse, she got attacked nd many thingsthis is freaking mysterious, nd i loved this so much..so there come Aaron well i love the names of character very much..he is a warrior by this m sure she is not in 2014 nd there is lot more over here to read..now where is he taking her..?? well i love this so much diiupdate soonwa dii i cant wait to read more..
Originally posted by: ..Rish..OHMYGOD !!! How interesting can this get?! ๐ฒ๐ฒ Where do you get these ideas from, Ms. Smarty Pants? ๐ But seriously Newton, this was FABBB!!! I loved it so much, the description and Avleen and Flame ^_^ , the attack and then Aaron , its all so mysterious!! I swear if this was novel,I would have ended up reading it in one night only, its that interesting !!! ^_____^ I can't wait for the next part, update very soon :*
Originally posted by: MeesocuteStarting mein toh sb itna confusing lag raha tha..
But slowly-2 sb samajh aa gya.
U a awesome writer
this concept is so diff fron perivious one...
Let's see how story unflods
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