BROTHERS...! ( Parrot Story for RIYA HBD Gift @ PG 137)!!! - Page 2

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Forfriend

@Forfriend

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey BH 🤗

yaar aapki stories always stress buster hoti hai mere liye...

maine toh kal hi one go me padth li thi...

per story pe review toh mai puri padhane ke baad hi dungi 👍🏼

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start1234

@start1234

Groupbie

Posted: 9 years ago

Story as always super duper se bhi uper 👏 🤗 aap ki stories mujhe bohot achi lagti hain ⭐️👍🏼 app agla part kab update karo gi😊 and please don't be sad open your production house

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1.KRITTIKA

@1.KRITTIKA

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

bhaiya bhaiya bhaiya ...its totaly awesme...im ...dnt knw wat to say..wen i was reading and found it nt finished u wnt blv i checkd it thrice...i cnt convince myslf to wait...it will be in my favs list with ur other following stories
😃😃
THE DARKEST HOURS

DEADLY HERB

17520 HOURS

TUJH SAY NARAZ NAHI ZINDAGI.!!👏👏

now wat u said...

I have No Interest to Open My New Production House
wooo why so?then wat will happen to us ur fans ac's and all?we will be deprived of such great creativity...thats nt fair na...i understand many viewrs bt less reviewrs but still...as fr me i can tell reviews in forums cant be given through mobile thats a main prob fr me...so i can perticipate in ff nt if...😭
so nw jaldi open ur 2nd ph and fill it up bt b4 that iss stry ka 2nd prt likh do boss...😉

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bluetides

@bluetides

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

GD,

I resumed to reading your story after going home.. I was so hooked up that I finished it..

You got excellent writing capabilities. Very few writers can make me hook up to read a rather long story. I didn't feel it needed any editing or corrections. Just awesome .. 👏👏👏

There are few points, that I am not totally convinced in the story, but I accept them as creators liberty. If you say YSPT in next part, I will show you readers liberty 😈. ( Yes, ye dhamki hee hai 😛)..

On the lighter side, us gaadi ka kya haal hai jis pe daya kood gaya 🤣

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@ANGELICEYES

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Finished reading😃.. Lovely story Dada.. I liked the plot.. Nice portrayal of Duo's emotions specially Daya sir's.. Didn't expect Daya sir would make a suicide attempt.. That was extremely shocking.. I am strongly against his this action.. He shouldn't do this.. I was scared what happened to Daya sir.. My guess was correct atlast.. I really liked how Dr. Rahil made Abhi sir understanding the fact. Last but not the least both the siggy and title were absolutely perfect.
Waiting eagerly for next chapter..
And a biggy bone-crashing huggy to you to open the new PH🤗🤗🤗..Edited by ANGELICEYES - 9 years ago

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Debasree

@debasree04

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada

First of all DEBA, its really a Pleasure that U take time for Reading My story...😉
its really a Big Shock for Me as due to Length, Mostly Readers avoid to Read My Stories...😆😆
abt this, its a Complete CHEAT of INTACTO and LUCK...😛😛
I just puts DUO in those Characters...😃😃
Yes I tried to Shuffle their Characters a bit...😉😉
Chalo A Big Thank You that U read it with Enjoyment...😳😳
Thank You Boss...😳😳

I know i cant read all the stories on time...its not because of all of ur story rather due to my personal issues...
I love to read CID stories 😃

Apna creation gallery open karo...i will comment on other stories soon...if u don't open i will comment on this 😉

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Tumne bola tha mat padhna, fir bhi padh liya mene.

I am in a fix about how to review.

Chalo first thing first. I am shocked the way Daya reacted. Really shocked. And the whole mera abhi aur tum abhijeet thing. Relations close hone chahiye lekin itna h ke ek ki kitni bhi badi galti maaf ki jaye or dusre ki galti ho ya na ho humesha saza ussehi mile ya sab usehi doshi mane toh shayad aisa rishta dono mein se kisike saanse jaroor ghotega. It must not be suffocating else wo healthy aur acha relation nahi rahega.

Aur yaar duo toh bunglows mein rehte hai wo bhi humesha naye wale, aur itna acha lifestyle maintain karte hai fir bhi rented house? Humare zombieland mein banwa de kya unke liye permanent ghar? Fir ye issue na hoga 😛

Really sorry if you or any of my fellow friends felt bad with this review. But this is how i felt. Shayad PM kar sakti thi. Agar sabko bura laga ho toh bol dena i will review things in PMs then. This goes for you too GD. 😊

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Veena..

@Veena..

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Honestly VEENA, I have No such feeling to Open it...
U already see, 257 ppl read this and only 4 ppl replied in which 3 already did not read this Story...😭😭
tou batao, phir open karnay ka faida...😵
is say tou Better hay that I PM my stories to some ppl who wanted to Read...😊😊
why I enaged a Whole Thread space without any Counter Comments either Positive and Negative...🤢🤢
khair, abhi tou Na soch hay aur na koi Mood hay...😊😊
chalo apna khayal rakhna...😊
Thank You so much...😳😳

Hmmm I know it hurts na 😔

But koi nai bare bare forums pe choti choti baten hoti rehti hain 😆

Arey yar plz udaas mat hona me hoon na 😉🤗

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pinky118

@pinky118

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

awesome story Dada... 👍🏼
really shocked that Daya sir attempted suicide... 😲
now the suspense begins...waiting for the next part 😉
why r u not making ur new PH?...don't worry abt other make it there r many ppl who luvs ur stories...including me 😛

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

IF-Addictz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Forfriend
Hey BH 🤗
yaar aapki stories always stress buster hoti hai mere liye...

maine toh kal hi one go me padth li thi...

per story pe review toh mai puri padhane ke baad hi dungi 👍🏼

Yes, I can Imagine abt U...😉😉

Office ka kaam waam chor chaar n Story start...😆😆

Chalo dekhtay hain...😊😊

Thank You so much...😳😳

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