Originally posted by: start1234Story as always super duper se bhi uper 👏 🤗 aap ki stories mujhe bohot achi lagti hain ⭐️👍🏼 app agla part kab update karo gi😊 and please don't be sad open your production house
Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKAI have No Interest to Open My New Production House
bhaiya bhaiya bhaiya ...its totaly awesme...im ...dnt knw wat to say..wen i was reading and found it nt finished u wnt blv i checkd it thrice...i cnt convince myslf to wait...it will be in my favs list with ur other following stories
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THE DARKEST HOURS
wooo why so?then wat will happen to us ur fans ac's and all?we will be deprived of such great creativity...thats nt fair na...i understand many viewrs bt less reviewrs but still...as fr me i can tell reviews in forums cant be given through mobile thats a main prob fr me...so i can perticipate in ff nt if...😭
so nw jaldi open ur 2nd ph and fill it up bt b4 that iss stry ka 2nd prt likh do boss...😉
Originally posted by: bluetidesGD,
Sorry ki poppat ka dil toot gaya.. I would say add it to your PH.
I read till Daya asked Abhi to leave...
Usually writers keep suspense by breaking into parts..
Now you got a reader who does that 😆... Yes It's BT... Big fan of short stories..
If story is long I will break into pieces ( arey arey ruko ... mut bhaag, suno toh sahi.. writer ko nahi yaar story ko... tension mat lena)
I will post my review once I finish..😳
Originally posted by: bluetidesGD,
I resumed to reading your story after going home.. I was so hooked up that I finished it..
You got excellent writing capabilities. Very few writers can make me hook up to read a rather long story. I didn't feel it needed any editing or corrections. Just awesome .. 👏👏👏
There are few points, that I am not totally convinced in the story, but I accept them as creators liberty. If you say YSPT in next part, I will show you readers liberty 😈. ( Yes, ye dhamki hee hai 😛)..
On the lighter side, us gaadi ka kya haal hai jis pe daya kood gaya 🤣
Originally posted by: ANGELICEYESFinished reading😃.. Lovely story Dada.. I liked the plot.. Nice portrayal of Duo's emotions specially Daya sir's.. Didn't expect Daya sir would make a suicide attempt.. That was extremely shocking.. I am strongly against his this action.. He shouldn't do this.. I was scared what happened to Daya sir.. My guess was correct atlast.. I really liked how Dr. Rahil made Abhi sir understanding the fact. Last but not the least both the siggy and title were absolutely perfect.
Waiting eagerly for next chapter..
And a biggy bone-crashing huggy to you to open the new PH🤗🤗🤗..
Originally posted by: debasree04
I know i cant read all the stories on time...its not because of all of ur story rather due to my personal issues...
I love to read CID stories 😃
Apna creation gallery open karo...i will comment on other stories soon...if u don't open i will comment on this 😉
Originally posted by: gadhadada
No I have No Problem yaar...😊😊although I think I did not send U the Link of LUCKY CHARM too...😉😉about this...Plz its Not for Ur Type Yaar...😆😆Dunt Waste Ur Time...😃😃Thank You Boss...😳😳
Originally posted by: -SNEHAL-Tumne bola tha mat padhna, fir bhi padh liya mene.
I am in a fix about how to review.Chalo first thing first. I am shocked the way Daya reacted. Really shocked. And the whole mera abhi aur tum abhijeet thing. Relations close hone chahiye lekin itna h ke ek ki kitni bhi badi galti maaf ki jaye or dusre ki galti ho ya na ho humesha saza ussehi mile ya sab usehi doshi mane toh shayad aisa rishta dono mein se kisike saanse jaroor ghotega. It must not be suffocating else wo healthy aur acha relation nahi rahega.SNEHAL, isi liyey Main nay First time ABHI Sir kay Point of View ko Favor diya cz He is absolutely Correct even all Supported Him but the way He Left the Person; that Step creating Weird...😊😊its just like Tum aik shaks say Raat ko milay itni Muhabbat say aur Wo Tym ko Sotay mein Chor gaya...😲😲wo Takleef zyada Shadeed hoti hay...😭😭agar shayed Wo ye Bata kr ya apna Gussa dikha kr jaatay tou Scene Different hota...😊😊and yes Relatiion ko itna Dependent Nhai hona chahyey... Space hr jagah hee acha Output deti hay...😳😳and We knew DUO does not have such Suffocating Relations Yaar...😉😉😉they are much Mature and Sensible than My Aspect...😃😃Aur yaar duo toh bunglows mein rehte hai wo bhi humesha naye wale, aur itna acha lifestyle maintain karte hai fir bhi rented house? Humare zombieland mein banwa de kya unke liye permanent ghar? Fir ye issue na hoga 😛😆😆😆 But FW never told that they have their Personal Houses/Bunglows...wesay ek CID Officer ki Pay 45000 Rs hoti hay (in India, according to Google) so in my opinion, itni Mehangai mein Un logun ka Bunglows khreedna mushkil Nhai namumkin hay...😉😉😉Really sorry if you or any of my fellow friends felt bad with this review. But this is how i felt. Shayad PM kar sakti thi. Agar sabko bura laga ho toh bol dena i will review things in PMs then. This goes for you too GD. 😊
Originally posted by: Veena..
Hmmm I know it hurts na 😔But koi nai bare bare forums pe choti choti baten hoti rehti hain 😆Arey yar plz udaas mat hona me hoon na 😉🤗
Originally posted by: pinky118awesome story Dada... 👍🏼
really shocked that Daya sir attempted suicide... 😲
now the suspense begins...waiting for the next part 😉
why r u not making ur new PH?...don't worry abt other make it there r many ppl who luvs ur stories...including me 😛
Originally posted by: debasree04
Ab to padhna hi padhega...i m curious 😆
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