What is this dada, you not opening your new PH? WHy?π²
Dada pinched with something very deeply which cannot be healed by these pyaare pyaare bache who will always be behind her to learn and to support, i suppose this is the reason dada, It better be not..π (yes a dhamki)
Kya dada i know it's really hurting sometimes but what can be done if silent readers does not have access to review, haina..
Even i was a silent reader dada and you know it well that your PH and your stories brought me out of that shell...when that be done by others they will surely try na dada, abh hum sabh itne bhi dheet nahi..π
Agar PH nahi hoga toh how will i access your other stories...π², chalo dada i will not say anything more as it's completely your point and your wish, what can i say (even after saying so many wordsπ)
Now regarding the story..
I like the starting...
I always loves the way how you smoothly entered your reader in the story with keeping them hooked to it for all the time...π
but somehow this time dada i feel there is very big difference in our point of views so i will not comment anything but i can just wish that it doesn't turn out into a YSPT...warna toh..π ahm ahm..
I will be waiting for next part this time..π
Take care dada and be always happy..
Why fear when Riya is here..π, bas dialogue maar rahi thi..
arre haan waise dada ek baat toh reh hi gayi, daya sir kisski gadi pe gire the, usski gadi ka insurance toh tha na...Acp sir ki toh nahi thi..π
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