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BROTHERS...! ( Parrot Story for RIYA HBD Gift @ PG 137)!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
GD What I Say, again a mindblowing story.πŸ‘β­οΈ Just awesome ...⭐️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
A New Uninvestigative Story means a lots of DUO momentπŸ‘ πŸ‘ and emoticonal atyacharπŸ˜‰ ⭐️ chalo koi baat nahi, yahi to chahiye hame...πŸ˜‰ β­οΈπŸ‘
Aaj kal to... 😭
just waiting for next part...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Very well written...⭐️ β­οΈπŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada



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<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Pyar Nahi, Popat ko Piasa bhi tou chahyey na...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ˆ</font>
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oh...tou yeh baat hai πŸ˜‰
popat ko pyar nahi paisa chahey...yeh paisa sub ko kharab kr deti hai πŸ˜‰
my pleasure πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


πŸ˜† thats True... mostly ppl  did not read My Stories just because of this...😭
Yaar I tried alot but I cant prepare Myself...
hope in future, I will start to write Consize Stories...😊😊
 

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Even I m Not Convinced from the Whole Story...
YSPT, whats this...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Gadi ka tou Boss Halwa hee Ban gaya...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Thank You so much...😳😳😳
Hope Now U taken out from those Hooks...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰



They can read it in intervals. There is a solution for each issue...

Your parrot stories are of small size naa?

YSPT = writer ka dimaag khaali haiπŸ˜†

Not yet, yeh hooks ka zaroorat hai.. agar next part YSPT hogaya toh popat ko phaasi is hooks ke dariye hone wala hai.. 😈

Edited by bluetides - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

before i begin with the review for the story. sorry for not commenting on your earlier stories, i was very busy with university and exams and everything.

 
About this story its amazing i love the concept. it is a  brilliant stress buster inbetween exam revision
 
and why do you say you dont want to open a ph, please do.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@dada i have completed it half and will comment after completing reading.
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank you mujhe bohot acha laga k aap ko dp pasand aayaπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
What is this dada, you not opening your new PH? WHy?😲
Dada pinched with something very deeply which cannot be healed by these pyaare pyaare bache who will always be behind her to learn and to support, i suppose this is the reason dada, It better be not..😈 (yes a dhamki)
Kya dada i know it's really hurting sometimes but what can be done if silent readers does not have access to review, haina..
Even i was a silent reader dada and you know it well that your PH and your stories brought me out of that shell...when that be done by others they will surely try na dada, abh hum sabh itne bhi dheet nahi..πŸ˜†
Agar PH nahi hoga toh how will i access your other stories...😲, chalo dada i will not say anything more as it's completely your point and your wish, what can i say (even after saying so many wordsπŸ˜›)

Now regarding the story..
I like the starting...
I always loves the way how you smoothly entered your reader in the story with keeping them hooked to it for all the time...πŸ‘
 but somehow this time dada i feel there is very big difference in our point of views so i will not comment anything but i can just wish that it doesn't turn out into a YSPT...warna toh..😈 ahm ahm..
I will be waiting for next part this time..😊
Take care dada and be always happy..
Why fear when Riya is here..πŸ˜†, bas dialogue maar rahi thi..
arre haan waise dada ek baat toh reh hi gayi, daya sir kisski gadi pe gire the, usski gadi ka insurance toh tha na...Acp sir ki toh nahi thi..πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: misha.as

GD What I Say, again a mindblowing story.πŸ‘β­οΈ Just awesome ...⭐️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
A New Uninvestigative Story means a lots of DUO momentπŸ‘ πŸ‘ and emoticonal atyacharπŸ˜‰ ⭐️ chalo koi baat nahi, yahi to chahiye hame...πŸ˜‰ β­οΈπŸ‘
Aaj kal to... 😭
just waiting for next part...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Very well written...⭐️ β­οΈπŸ‘
πŸ€—      πŸ€—



haan Hum logun ko bhi BHA BHA ki aadat ho gayii hay...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Thank you so much...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bluetides



They can read it in intervals. There is a solution for each issue...

Your parrot stories are of small size naa?

YSPT = writer ka dimaag khaali haiπŸ˜†

Not yet, yeh hooks ka zaroorat hai.. agar next part YSPT hogaya toh popat ko phaasi is hooks ke dariye hone wala hai.. 😈


itna Zulm, wo bhi Parrot ki nanhi sii Jaan pr...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjaan_anjaani

before i begin with the review for the story. sorry for not commenting on your earlier stories, i was very busy with university and exams and everything.

Yes, I can Understand... πŸ˜Š


About this story its amazing i love the concept. it is a  brilliant stress buster inbetween exam revision
 
so CRYING is Stress Buster for U...πŸ˜²πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

and why do you say you dont want to open a ph, please do.


I m Not Interested...
Thank you so much...😳😳