This content was originally posted by: rosepink.zabardast... 😊
it kept me engrossed completely till d end..
kash har koi jaane wale ko is tarah rok pata...
anyways great work GD
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nice story..maanna padeg...hum readers ko..jo tum se aisi stories likhwa lete hai 😉
good job meri Duao se 😳
This content was originally posted by: Veena..GD story; & me 😃No VEENA Feedback and ME...Daya stressed from the starting of the story; & meBhai Stressed and ME...Daya in fever; & me 😒Bhai in fever and ME...Daya asked Abhijeet to leave; :& me 😲😲Bhai asked Baray Bhai to leave and ME...😡😡And Anbhijeet left; & me 😲Baray Bhai left and ME...🤢🤢Daya suicides; & me 😲😭🥺Bhai Suicide and ME...🥳Still Abhijeet and Daya separate; & me 😭DUO separate and ME...👎🏼Daya behaving weired; & me 😕Bhai Behaving and ME...😲😲Now Daya in bad state of mind; :& me 😕Bhai in Bad state and ME...Doctor - Split Personality - Daant; & me 😵😔all this and ME...😃😃Story to be continue; & me 😡😡Story Completed and ME...Yar GD itna sara kese soch leti ho?😛 Well yeh upper sare toh mere expressions the while reading ur story😆 But yeah I too agree with Abhijeet this time that it really hurts naBut jab doc ne samjaya toh me bi tora tora samaj gaye & now back to the same point that don't left him alone na yar😭 see now whats his condition 🥺haan, thatswhy I showed that Everyone this time give Favor to Him...😳😳GD what can I say other than it that I loved it & I love reading your stories😳 I really like the way you present and depict duo bonding in your stories⭐️ I really wish to see such type of bonding or atleast somewhat close to it in the show but its missing in the show and FW has totally forgotton about it😡 that's why after reading ur story I feel like😃😳 oh duo together 🤗FW never showed it, its only our Illusion that DUO are Best Friend...17 saall say agr aap nay apnay Dost ko Hug Nahi kiya; Us kay sath Prank nahi kiya tou kya isy Dosti kahein gay...😲😲Ok now about the story again it awesome👏 and with a lil different situation. How Abhijeet quietly left the house and even after suicidal attempt of daya he still not willing to live with him😕, to some extent he is also right with his point of view because he always gets hurt, but daya bi na he can't even imagine that Abhi has just left the house and may be use biWhat he is going through is really sad, he really has splitted Abhi's personality in two, haina?😕 This time no drama right?😉 Now What?😲 With the help of doc they will bring him back to the normal? But how? Jan'ne k liye wait kijye next part k update hone tak ka😆Everytime I did ot show any Drama Yaar...😉😉Hey dear me enjoyed reading your story and definitely waiting for ur next part 😉And yes jate jate one word for landlord toh banta hai na boss, ________ 🤬😆 sare fasaad ki jaar hi yeh hai 😆kyun...😕hr aadmi ki zehniyet alug hoti hay...jub 17 saal say sath kaam krnay waly SALUNKHY Sir Baray Bhai ko is tarah Zaleel kr saktay hain... tou sub chaly ga...😉😉And at the last a beary hug for u 🤗
This content was originally posted by: -SNEHAL-Thank you for completing this story.
This content was originally posted by: bluetidesAwesome story GD.
I connected very well with the story though my image of Daya is different from yours...Very well written and nice plot...plz Tell Me what is Ur Image of DAYA Sir...😉😉might be I used Ur Image in My Next Story...😆😆Yeh chocolate chip ice cream ka kya chakkar hai? Mera fav bhee hai, I felt so happy on reading those lines...its Parrot Fav too...😛😛awww, we are also Same Same na...😉😆I thought u wd take reference of Tom n jerry scene from your old story xxx hours. Sorry don't remember the number part.Yes so many References ...😊I missed to Clear it...Scene where they burst out after playing in kids park was just the most cute scene 😊I personally experienced it last month in Dubai, when a Mall Play Zone Management Guy coming to Me and telling this when I was playing SHOOTING game more than hour and My Bhai Laughing Madly at that time...😉😉😆
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