BROTHERS...! ( Parrot Story for RIYA HBD Gift @ PG 137)!!! - Page 61

Originally posted by: Naz-D

Dada this is not fair..My Daya sir is so handsome.. Aap unki saath aisa nehi kar sakte..Uparse aap to be continued tag lagake rakkha...Jaldi update kijiye Dada...

Originally posted by: beena.thomas

Brilliant attempt GD. 👏 ⭐️
Your writing style and manner of narration is awesome. ⭐️
You have given a very nice introduction and then excellently described Abhijeet working on his mission and the rest of the cops the Bureau on the case of the kidnapped child. 👏 👍🏼

Thankyou so much for your efforts.

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

aap ne jab hint diya tha tabhie pata chal chuka tha ki aap bhai ko leke hi experiment karoge..😒

per yea kya adhi adhuri?

😭

pls post next part warna tnsion se mar jayenge hum🤢...jaldi jaldi pls😭

as usual nice emotions..and nice potrayal of chrcters

Originally posted by: ...Parii...

dada.. see parii now. read ur khayi ke pan banarus wala last night.
first tell me have u ever ate pan. kaisa laga.. and parrot usne khaya pan.😉 so whats the color of ur teeth.. chalo show me.. aaa..
dada title was tooo good and yummy too .. hehe..

now coming to story.

u protrayed the characters nicely.. abhi sir's harsh reaction. and that shart ki agar kuch nahi mila to mai resign de dunga.
loved the enthusiasm and excitment freddy sir for being choosen for task.

that secret talk between Acp sir and abhi sir was soo cute. and the way duo took the command in there hand was nice.
vivek's plan was also nice.. kaam as gaya.. hehe.. and dr. rajeev liked his character.

and they way abhi sir risked his life to get back dr. salunkhe in bureao was tooo good. and they way he distracted daya sir's attention thats the quality of sr. inspecter abhijeet.

but daya sir bhi kam nahi hai.. wo pouch hi jate the daily to check him.

oldie duo reached hospital in so soon means acp sir was there in mumbai and he lied .. hmm.. bad. manners u are acp sir na.. so it wont suits u.

and yeah .. acp sir ka dailgoue.. to tum kya uske behose hone ka wait kar rahe the.. hehe.. that was superb..

and last one too agar wo literate hota to band baja deta humari.. hehe..

very noce story dada..thank youui sooo much...

Hmm.. Parii missed that point..
thank u dada..
and ye kya goli khilata hai.. Kis kis ko khilai h goli..

Originally posted by: ...Parii...

Hmm.. Parii missed that point..
thank u dada..
and ye kya goli khilata hai.. Kis kis ko khilai h goli..

that's not done GD 😭
coma mein jana, head injury,shoulder swelling,heart problem yahan tk to kisi hdd tk bearable hota tha but now BURN 😲 soch ke bhi drr lgta h boss 😭
atleast mai to aisa sochna bhi nhi chahti...😭

uff seriously 😭 tumhara deemag kuch jada hi nhi chlne lg gya...actually parr lag gye hain 😉
smbhalo use kahin ud na jaye 😆
Edited by anjali_mahajan - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan

that's not done GD 😭
coma mein jana, head injury,shoulder swelling,heart problem yahan tk to kisi hdd tk bearable hota tha but now BURN 😲 soch ke bhi drr lgta h boss 😭
atleast mai to aisa sochna bhi nhi chahti...😭

uff seriously 😭 tumhara deemag kuch nhi chlne lg gya...actually parr lag gye hain 😉
smbhalo use kahin ud na jaye 😆

Bilkul sahi kaha Daya sir hi hr problem ka solution hote hain..
aaj bhi bhai ko arm pe goli lgegi first-aid tyaar rkhna 😆

yrr story 12 bje se pehle post krna plz 😳 wrna mujhe 2din wait krna pdega

Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan

Bilkul sahi kaha Daya sir hi hr problem ka solution hote hain..
aaj bhi bhai ko arm pe goli lgegi first-aid tyaar rkhna 😆

yrr story 12 bje se pehle post krna plz 😳 wrna mujhe 2din wait krna pdega