Hey Madhura... no chappals at all dear.. in fact a tight hug to u for such a brilliant work... Btw is this really ur first work coz i dont think so...
it was fab...
starting frm our angel all happy happy excited to meet her husband ranveer.. yayy i like married rahi...
then the pain u described of both rv and panchi... how the glass pieces did not hurt infront of what rv said..
but yeah no complaints from rv.. coz no one was at fault only the situation was...It was just a sad accident..
but i loved the fact that the one month he was missing her and he kept on thinking bout her.. awww
and then the way they met after one month and then rv coms to know that she is pregnant .
his feelings u described at hat time was were bang on..
she is so sweet she forgived him...
then that song was perfect..
then that our aby was so sweet..
and then 5 yrs later that was so hot n cute both together..me loved it
there daughter is such an angel..
me liked their little convo about rv's world.
but most imp that nonu moti forever superb...
so in all fantastic job. me totally enjoyed it. it had drama emotions a bit of action laughter and most imp love..
all ingredients for a superb story..
keep writing..