~{With you. ........Forever}~ [RaHi OS] - Page 3

This content was originally posted by: anjali1805

Hey Madhura... no chappals at all dear.. in fact a tight hug to u for such a brilliant work... Btw is this really ur first work coz i dont think so...

it was fab...

starting frm our angel all happy happy excited to meet her husband ranveer.. yayy i like married rahi...

then the pain u described of both rv and panchi... how the glass pieces did not hurt infront of what rv said..

but yeah no complaints from rv.. coz no one was at fault only the situation was...It was just a sad accident..

but i loved the fact that the one month he was missing her and he kept on thinking bout her.. awww

and then the way they met after one month and then rv coms to know that she is pregnant .

his feelings u described at hat time was were bang on..

she is so sweet she forgived him...

then that song was perfect..

then that our aby was so sweet..

and then 5 yrs later that was so hot n cute both together..me loved it

there daughter is such an angel..

me liked their little convo about rv's world.

but most imp that nonu moti forever superb...

so in all fantastic job. me totally enjoyed it. it had drama emotions a bit of action laughter and most imp love..

all ingredients for a superb story..

keep writing..

😃
han tumhare comment ne mujhe phirse ek bar batissi dikhane me majbur kar diya 😃 😆
thanks Anjali and yes this is my first work and saying this from bottom of my heart this means a lot
I too love married Rahi pata nahi kabhi dekh paugi kya 😆
I think that RaHi relationship is more than love ya love itself is more tuan anything but RaHi
are just magic you put them in anything they will definitely suprise you by their cuteness ,
by their love and tes most important by their friendship and magic which they create when
friendship and love is combined together.
I totally agree with you at this point I first also said this and I'm again repeating
in situations like this there is nothing wrong and nothing right
Whatever happens just happens and we can't do anything
of course I think one month is enough for two people who love each other and stay away to go mad without each other 😆
I know RaHi itne cute he to unki daughter to cutness ka pura mall hagi 😆 😳
thanks once again
I really don't know how that romantic scene came up may be because of RaHi magic

lots and lots of love
Madhura
muhaa

This content was originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey Madhura🤗

First of all the I am sorry for late reply😳

I was out of town yaar

now coming to the OS

Wow..first OS from you👏

And its simply Awesome

I must say you are an awesome write

Kahaan chupa rakha tha ye talent😛

Just love the Concept

Poor RaHi

have to get separated because of one incidence

love the way u portrayed their love,pain and helplessness

RaHi are meant to be

and nothing can separate them for long

The way u describe the nine months

beautiful

You are a awesome writer Madhura

plz keep writing

will be waiting more stories from you

Lots of Love

Geet

GEET 🤗
Geet kya tum meri friend ho ?
agar ho...agar vagar kuch nahi tum ho
isliye no sorry
kyuki kisi Mahan person ne kaha he friendship me no sorry no thanks par phir bhi me thanks kehen vali hu 😆
Thank you sooo much sweetie
bus RaHi magic ke vajese kisi ka bhi talent phut phut ke bahar ata he ab khud ko hi dekh lo
I love that song and I thought it will suit our RaHi and that situation perfectly
and now I'm happy you liked it
Sahi kaha RaHi forever
love you for your wonderful comment

lots and lots of love
Madhura
muhaa

This content was originally posted by: tinaswea

Awesome story!

Loved it!

Keep writing!

Lots of love

Tinaa

thanks Tina
I will definitely write more but my usual condition which is if you continue to comment like this
love you too
Madhura
muhaa

This content was originally posted by: s2singh

Lovely OS ...Rahilicious...😳

Keep it up...⭐️...

Thanks for PM😃

Take care...

thanks dear
You liked it, me happy
love you
muhaaa

This content was originally posted by: Prince6495

Amazing os

loved it ..

Rahi's cuteness..😊 u described so well

its awsome ...

keep writing

thanks Stavan
I am so happy you liked it
lots of love
Madhura

This content was originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

RES

Seems really amazing

Sry Madhura...
Will back 2 u asap

I will be waiting 😳

This content was originally posted by: kitze

hi

u wrote this very well

do write more

btw im kirti

Hi kirti
thank you so much

lots of love
Madhura

Woowwiiee... 😃 Super Duper Amazing Madhura 👏

Edited by luv_u_Bharti - 9 years ago

For a Moment i was angry with ranveer..but panchi forgave him so i forgave him to:-)
Nice os

This content was originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Woowwiiee... 😃Super Duper Amazing Madhura 👏

I sooo Loved it dear... 😳Rahi married... 😃haaye... 😳

Loved d 9 months prt... U described it so beautifully... ⭐️

D song was really apt 😊

Hayyee... dat last prt... main toh fida ho gai... "Nono Moti 4ever" 😳

Super Cute & Adorable 😉

Really Beautiful 👏⭐️

Thank u so much 4 d pm 😊

Sry 4 d late comment

Continue Writing More ⭐️

Khushi 🤗
hey I am also sorry for late reply I noticed now
thank you soo much sweetie
ahh I'm so happy everybody liked that part
and now I'm more happy because you too liked it
I know I love that song
thank you Khushi it means a ton not lot😆
I will definitely continue writing if you keep giving your awesome comments 😳
Love you