Yeh Ishq nahin asaan(veeba story) Chap 7 Pg 15 - Page 4

deep_

@deep_

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

its good 👍🏼

plz update fast

i want veeba scenes😊

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Farhat Jahan

@fary5

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesum double dhamaka dear 👍🏼

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Pizza_maniac

@Pizza_maniac

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the double update treat, nice updates.😊

The story is going good, I don't think you've messed up, stories need a strong build up and details, so you're right in working over the details,

But I would like to see more VeeBa scenes😳, I want some serious confrontation between the two,

Keep up the good work going.

Edited by Veebafan - 9 years ago

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks Trixie and Farhat.

@Veebafan: Thanks and I promise there will be veeba scenes in the next update.A confrontation is on the way. 😃

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HappyST

@HappyST

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Superb updates...!!!!!

Plz do update soon...!!

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TasrinS
Superb updates...!!!!!
Plz do update soon...!!

Thank you Tasrin.😃

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sunny303

@sunny303

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

You haven't ruined it... It's picking up steam:)))

Looking forward to the next update...and Some serious Veeba action:)))

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Princy

@princy48

IF-Stunnerz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

aaaw...that was amazing elli..gr8 going...👏👏👏

jus read from the strt..😃

khoob bhalo ..😉👍🏼

jus loving it more n more wid evry update..dear..😳

aaw..the AYM ballu is on fire😳😳 ..omg i can't resist him ...😳

loving the way u r balancing his pain n rage at the same tym..⭐️⭐️

not t forget the slowly realizing veera😡😭..abt her feelings..abt hurting his feelings..😭

i can literally visualize this..

tho kripiya der na karte hue jaldi agle update de dijiyega..😆😆

(lol can't wait for the nxt..continue asap)😭😭

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Great updates and thanks for the pm.

and no way have u messed up the story, Its getting interesting, veera still thinks only played a little trick on baldev, she doesn't realise what damage she caused.
would like more veeba scenes, looking forward to the next chapter.
fights, passion and making up are the essence of veeba stories

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951688

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

Eagerly waiting for veeba update!! Continue ASAP!!

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