Yeh Ishq nahin asaan(veeba story) Chap 7 Pg 15 - Page 6

My word! Such a beautiful and heart-wrenching OS!! Superbly written! I read all five chapters back-to-back. This is EXACTLY how I imagine it to play out, although secretly hope Surjeet Singh never returns! 😕 Despite all his shortcomings, Baldev's anger is  totallyjustified and I have to say that I'm satisfied with the way he responds to Balwant, Ranvi and especially Veera!! They need to get a taste of their own medicine! Uff...the angst and pain you've portrayed is perfect...I can just imagine Vishal emoting this ...its giving me goosebumps 😳

Awesum update dear nd the precap sounds interesting

Dear loving ur ff & update was very nice.i love howu explain baldevs emtion.cant waot for next update.

finally i caught up with all of ur updates,this is so very well written Eli ,the way u narrates the feelings of ballu is so beautiful that even when i read it i think i'm going thrg the agony👏,trust me when i say this ur writing creates such an impact on me 😳,so plz update soon since i cant see my ballu in pain 'n its high time that veera shld taste her own medicine.Once again the job is very well  done.

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Edited by ElireEli - 9 years ago

Lovely update! continue soon... ❤️ ing it

Hiya was hoping to come back to the forum with a update to read of this great story, but no such luck.   Update soon. :)

Eli superb story yaar menu bohut bohut pasand aaya 

OK. so sabse pehle! 😡 Y i never knew about this!! 😡 i thought abhi tak u have updated only 1st chapter!🤢
Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krock

Update kar na